baldev ~ ff (part 7 , pg 7)

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rashi...
nice one evanna👏...agar veera ko yeh baat pata chali toh then she wud be burning with anger😡..continue soon😃...

ya she'll kill jasmeet!!!😆..will cotinue soon!!!

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cherry_1293

@cherry_1293

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

eva nice update😳

at this moment veera should enter baldev's room😈

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: cherry_1293
eva nice update😳
at this moment veera should enter baldev's room😈

oh..thnx...tab toh bohot drama hoga na?????😈

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HappyST

@HappyST

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Really nice...loved it.

Thanks for pm dear.

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nice os
I think veera doesnt deserve baldev
She thinks high of herself
Continue soon

Edited by Gurveen - 11 years ago

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

thnx everyone😳...for all who commented and liked 🤗...for all who didn't like or comment 😡...so next time like & comment!!

Part 3

there was a cute eyelock between both of them...so after sm min baldev broke the eyelock...he made her stand...

baldev : uhh...tu theek hain na??

jasmeet : haan!!

baldev : vese...tu ki karne aayi thi ithe???

jasmeet : uhh...haan voh bansuri taiji ne bheja tha mujhe...vo unke paas mere size ki kapde nahin the...sab bohot vadde hai...toh unhone bola ki tumse bolo...naye kapde laane keliye...

baldev : ohh...theekhe tu ja main baazar main jaake lata hoon...

jasmeet leaves his room...baldev took his jeep keys and went...at the bazaar, baldev was searching for sm nice kurta...after so much of searching he bought 15 kurtas...while he was waiting for the salesman to pack everythng, veera comes there...she sees baldev...she didn't see him tht day atall...so she came to him..

veera : baldev...tu aaj subah se bahar kahi dikha nahi...

baldev : kyun?? ab mujhe ghar pe rehene keliye bhi tujse ijasath leni padegi kya?? aur vese bhi tennu ki hai?? tu na sirf apni kaam se kaam rakh!!😡

after meeting jasmeet baldev didn't much feel anythng for veera tht much...before he used to get affected wen he saw veera...he used to get memories of how she cheated him and his love!! but now he was least cared about her!! the salesman gave baldev his clothes..so he took it and went...

veera : eh baldev nu ki hoya?? voh mujse ese kyun baat kar raha hai??😕

baldev reached his house...he went straight to jasmeet's room and gave her the dresses...and went to his room...

**next day**

balwant told baldev to take jasmeet to show the pind...so after the breakfast, baldev and jasmeet leaves...baldev shows her each and every place...they even went to the gurudwara...while they were laughing and chatting veera was coming...she was shocked to see jasmeet...she came and stood in front of them...

veera : umm...baldev eh kudi kon hai tere naal???

baldev : ye jasmeet hai...mera dost hai ye!!

jasmeet : 😊hello...

veera : hi!! mai veera!! vese tum log kya kar rahe ho??

wen jasmeet was about to answer...

baldev : hum jo bhi kare...tennu ki??? (takes her hands and pulls her away and leaves)

veera : 😲😲😲...

even jasmeet was surprised by this...by now baldev had dragged her to the fields...

jasmeet :😕 baldev tum veera se ese kyun baat kar rahe the?? aur achanak mennu ithe kyun laya??

baldev : ye sab bakwaas hai jasmeet...aur vahi baat veera ki..vo alag hai...vo..ek achi kudi nahi hain...aur main iske baare main baat nahin karna chahtha!!!

jasmeet : ohh...theekhe..(trying to change the topic) aree vaah!! kitni achi jagah hai ye!! har jagah hariyali he hariyali hai!! sach main baldev tumne mujhe ek dam sahi jagah laya hai!!

(hugging him) thnk u soo much baldev...mujhe sahaara dene keliye...thnk u soo much...pata nahin agar tum nahin hote tho...

baldev : (breaking the hug and keeping a finger in her lips) sshh... bohoth bol liya...aur kitna shukriya aada karegi mera... tumhe sahaara dena mera farz hai...vese shaam ho chuki hai... toh ghar chale??

jasmeet : (looking at the horizons) ohh...haan haan...ghar chalte hain...tumhare saath rehekar pata nahin kese samay beeth gaya aur pata bhi nahin chala!!

so they both return home...

hows it??? pls do comment and like!! luv u all!!❤️

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@monumolu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Read all the 3 parts together!!! Nice story lekin please mere Veeba ko alag mat karna!!! Veera is already jealous hai na!!!

I was scared only with one line in this update that Baldev does not feel anything for Veera after Jasmeet came into his life

Veera jealous ho jaayegi na?

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: monumolu
Read all the 3 parts together!!! Nice story lekin please mere Veeba ko alag mat karna!!! Veera is already jealous hai na!!!
I was scared only with one line in this update that Baldev does not feel anything for Veera after Jasmeet came into his life

Veera jealous ho jaayegi na?

yaar...i told u rite this is a very different os/ff... there's no veeba thts y i didn't rite the title as veeba os/ff but baldev os/ff😕...soo srry if u felt bad...and she may or may not be jealous...suspense chodthi hoon...😛

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@monumolu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: EVANNAPINKHEART

yaar...i told u rite this is a very different os/ff... there's no veeba thts y i didn't rite the title as veeba os/ff but baldev os/ff😕...soo srry if u felt bad...and she may or may not be jealous...suspense chodthi hoon...😛

I did not feel bad haan but possessive toh main hoon hi!!! Don't be sorry at all!!! I just read all the 3 parts together tumhaara comments ye dekhne ke baad padaa!!! Dekhte hai how suspense will take us ahead 😛