Veeba FF:~I am BALDEV SINGH..~,Chapter-2,page-6... - Page 4

Mr.Baldev Singh is here...make way every one...,i 'm watching ballu's entry scene again 'n again...gwaaad he's in love with her already...

I love this.
What a neat idea! Kudos to Sunny for suggesting it.

Btw how far are you planning on taking it, if you don't mind me asking?😳 I know it will be a lot of work for you.

superb it was!!!
Loved the title

[Thank u friends!For all da lovely comments and likes!😛Hope u understand m not a mind reader,but dis is just wat I felt watchn da Baldev scenes..😳U might get some difrnt meaning so am sorry if u think it's too mushy or i m conveying sth wrong here.. 😕
Anyways I m giving the day whose description I m writing,plz feel free to watch dose Veeba scenes,and see if I m wrong or not..U can always correct me!!M human after all,and cn be wrong..😳
Love u loads!And m back wid another update..I dnt know how it is, however..And yes these r da serial dialogues so I didn't add translations..😳

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Chapter-1,page-3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110295489

CHAPTER-2.

(3^rd December'2014..)

Emotions are just not my cup of tea,except fun and laughter..And of course hatred..

And of course if I do show too much emotion it is always for a reason..And I do not justify my mistakes..I am as I am..Good or bad,wild and unkempt,irresponsible or irksome,that is just what I am..I do not fake to be good..And I do not pretend..Not too much at least..!

And I am Baldev Singh-the Sher of Pritampura..

I have welcomed my childhood foe,just the way she should be..

And though she showed me her spunk again by splattering the mud on y face,that only increased my euphoria..I would have been deprived of my daily challenges if she did not challenge me..

Now that would not be happening as the true lioness was home finally..

And I rejoiced it..

But soon I had to get busy with my works of Mata ki Chowki..

After all the Sher could not keep fighting the Sherni all the time,could he..?He had some responsibilities too,right..?

And Mata ki Chowki was one of them..As it was a step I had been building for years,that paved my way to my being the Sarpaanch..My one soul dream..For which I was ready to anything..

Baldev was busy with setting up the tent for Mata ki Chowki,and was helping with the garland hanging,when he heard her voice..

No one else could look for the tent maker in such a bossy way.Who else would destiny send on his path to lock horns with him..?

"Oye..?"As Baldev slowly turned to look back,he lareday knew who it was..As if something in him was always attuned to her..

Pind Da Sherni calling Pind Da Sher..He looked at her sideways..

"Baldev..?!"She was shocked was she..?!

He threw the garland he was working with and turned to give her the full attention..His heart already excited with the prospect of spiting with his childhood foe..

" Veera..!Tu mainu inna yaad na kia kaar.."

Even her rolling her eyes,did not stop him..It added to his fun of teasing..

"Pritampura ki ek puraani kahawat hai..Shaitaan ka naam lo..To Baldev hajir.."

He removed the mike off the way and was down infront of her in seconds..Ready for the fight again..

"Main hihun jisne pandaal lagane ko kaha hai..Bol..?Ki karegi..?"

Her look did not disturb him at all..

"Koi takleef hai..?Bata..?"

"Chaal!Aaj saari takleefein mita dete hain..!"

"Pehle ke bhi,kaal raat ke bhi,aur iss baar ke bhi..Thik?!"He could not but laugh at the disturbed look she gave..Was she making out something else from his words..?

"Ae to dharam karam ki baat hai Veera..!Sheher jaa kar apni Bhagwaan ko bhi kya bhul gayi Veera..?"He could not help but put the dig in,about her leaving Pritampura..Of course masked in his dialogues she would not get what had ruffled his feathers most these fifteen boring years..

"Mai to ye apni waaste thori kar raha hu.?Ye to Maata ji ki bhakti mei..Kiu bhaiyo..?!"I smiled as the crowd agreed with me..

"Aur Veera tainu to sharm aani chahiye..Ki tu aisi achchi kaam mei awaaz uchi kartei huye..Chaal!Maafi maang mujhse..!Pure pind di saamne..!"This was the time to get my revenge..

As I looked at her with hatred..She had insulted him in more times than one..And it was time to get things sorted..

She widened her eyes,and walked towards im,sitting like royalty on the stage..

"Mainu na maaf karde Baldev..Main na maafi chahti hun.."He could not stop the triumphed grin that came on his lips..She gave in readily..!

"Aap sabhi na mainu maaf kar dijiye..!aab ae dharm karam ki kaam pe ainne ake rok laga rahi thi..Bilkul nahi karna chaiye..!Mujhe na Baldev ki bhakti bahvone dekhke vaddi khushi ho rahi hai..Aab main kya bataoon..!"Baldev now looked away,her words were making him happy..It should not be..He tried to control himself and hold onto his rage..

"Baas na bhakti bhavonao mei dube huye Baldev se na ek choti si gaalti ho gayi.."Thatdeflated my balloon of happiness, and made me look at her instantly.."Wo na jaigey ki dhyaan rakhna to bhul hi gaya!Aab Mata Rani ki Chowka aise sarak pe thori na hoga..?!Ae to galat baat hai..!Unki beizzati ho jayegi..!Hai ki nai..?!"Baldev now sat alert,unable to believe the guts of the girl..!She was again insulting him..!"Hai na Baldev..?Aab koi gaal nai ji..!Choti si gaalti hai!Aab usne gaalti ki hai to main sudhar deti hun!"

"Humara to bachpaan ka record hai..!Ki baldev galtiyan karta hai aur main sudharti hun!aaj ek baar aur sahi..!"Baldev could not take it anymore,as he stood up again..

How dare she?!How dare she insult him and show him down again infront of all the villagers?!He was making his way to the Sarpaanch title,and here the girl was back to break the road..

Rage was taking over him..!And he could barely hold himself back..And nor he could he stop her without creating a scene,which he did not want to!He had an image to maintain!

But then she said he should move the pandal to the courtyard infront of his house,and even asked him to send invitations to everyone..!

Baldev could not hold his rage back anymore,as he teased him by raising her brows in her typical Veera way..!

She was ust leaving when he got hold of her hand to make her turn..and then let go in pure show of disgust..

No one could get the better of him..Especially not her..!he could see the shocked surprise on her face,but did not care a bit about it..

He stepped closer to her,his upper lip curling curling in distaste..Little did she know this was not the childhood Baldev..This was a grown man she was locking horns with..!

"Apni to kehdi tune..Zaara mere bhi sunle..?"He sneered at her.

And then giving her a full blast of his angry hatred filled look,he turned to face the crowd..

"Inne saalo se pandaal yaha lagta aya hai..Main aap saab nu puchta hun..Kisi nu koi takleef hai..?"He asked the crowd,pointing his finger in a typical warning..

"Agar hai to bata do..Amin pandaal yaha se hata ke apne ghaar ke angaan mei lagwa dunga..Bolo hai kisi ko koi takleef..?!"He called out folding his sleeves in a typical sign of warning to the quiet villagers..

A smirk of satisfaction came on his lips,as he knew no one would oppose him..And like always no one did..

He walked up to Veera with a winning look.

"Dekha..?Bekaar hi inni uchaal kuud ki tune..Kisi kokoi takleef nai hai..Aur tu hoti kaun hai pind di maamlein mei bolne waali..?Bahaar waali hai na..Bahaar waali ki tarhai reh.."He could not help but put the jab n again,ignoring her shocked look..

Somehow he could not forgive her for the fifteen years,hating her more for that..He did not know why,and nor did he want to find out..He hated her,loathed her was all that mattered to him at tht moment,and every moment..

And then her words pulled at something in his already raw wounds in his heart..Wounds and pain that he himself never faced..Her words hit home..With a little change..His hurt was not in his head..Somewhere else..For fifteen long years..Little did she know..!Nor would she ever know if he had his way about it..!

"Baldev..?!Tainu saar pe koi cot wot lag agyi hai ki..?Andaar waali..?!"Had she any idea what she was saying..?!What she was implying by her words..?!

"Warna teri yaad dash vaddi kaam zor hai!Tu mainu kaise bhul sakda hai..?!Aare main wahi Veera hu na jiske wajey se tu kahi baar murga bana hai..Tere kaan khichwaya main..Bhul gaya..?!"Her words broke off his daze,as he realized she was once again insulting him,and pouring salts on his wounds..

She went on with her monologues,as hestared at her with rage in his eyes..He wondered again,why he had missed her,and why they always were on loggerheads again..

"Aab to tubhi iththe hai..Aur main bhi iththe..Revision hojayega.."Her words touched a chord in him.."Jitna ye pind tera haina..Utni meri bhi hai..Yaad rakhiyo.."Ofcourse he would remember that..But the thing was about refreshing her memory..

With his taunts he had refreshed her memory,about who she really was,and what her equation with him was..They were always on loggerheads,but someway or the other,still connected..It was necessary to remind her that..

And now he was sure she did..Something in him,sighed in relief at that,but of course he ignored it..It was time to gain another point on her..

So the smirk came on his lips,as soon as she turned to leave..And with that smirk she was standing behind her in seconds,and cleared his voice,as she stared dumb struck at her front wheel less motor cycle..

"Bauhot uudd na hai na tainu..?Aab uudd!Udd!Udd!Uddke le aa tere fatfatiya ka taang upar se.."Oh he enjoyed showing her ,her place so well..!He was laughing with his friends,and in his heart happy that he had put in another jibe about her leaving for Delhi..For fifteen years..He had waited fifteen years,to hate her..To show her,her place..

And now he felt so happy as he had got the front wheel removed and now it hung on a wire high up,as Veera watched it angrily..

"Sudhaar ja Baldev..!By God!Warna bauhot pachtayega!"Her words touched an old hidden woung again..And he stamoed his foot warningly,unable to hold his wrath..

"Oye!"

As they looked at each other,Baldev was reminded how much he had suffered..And she was telling he would suffer?!Did she know how he,already-..

She stepped on his booted foot then,and pressed on it real hard..The pain was excruciatin but not once did he wince or push her away,which he could easily do..

He took it as it came..He deserved it,for that secret hurt..What did this matter,when he adjusted to fifteen years..?!He let her do it to him..He would again let her do this..

"Mere bike ki naa nai tang aa jayegi,par tere duji nahi ayegi..!Mujhse na inni paanga giri na karna!Samjhaa..?!"

He did not reply like he always stayed quiet at all her taunts,and warnings..He let her win this time again..He didn't know why,but he did..

Some random female asked who she was,and another one answered this was Veera,Ranvi's sister..

The first lady asked this Sherni is that shy guy's sister..?!

And Baldev heard it all..!His mouth rigid,as he clenched his jaw tight in anger..Looking at her retreating back..

She was truly the Sherni,the only one who could lock horns him..But he hoped the Sherni did not think just because he had sheathed his claws and had not attacked her back,was because he could not..He had let her win,cause he had wanted her to..If he wanted he could overpower her physically anyday..But of course he would not..He would win,but there was still time for it now..

And Baldev Singh the Sher of Pritampura,sheathed his claws,and let go of the Sherni unhurt,just because..He did not know why exactly,but he did so..

But he would soon gain that point above her..After all they were in hate with each other from childhood..And they would always lock horns..And somehow he knew it would be soon..She would not give up so easily..She had warned him..And he was ready to fight the Sherni all along..

Something pulled at his heart again,and again he ignored it..Baldev Singh the Sher would win over the Sherni,was all that mattered right now..

I'm loving this FF. What a brilliant and interesting perspective of Baldev you're providing for the classic VeeBa scenes Waiting for Mata Ki Chowki
Oh and btw, I read all your updates, whether you PM me or not😛 just refrain from commenting thanks to my laziness😆 So don't ever stop writing okay?😃

MKC days yaad aagaye
Awesome update Sina ❤️

Amazing Update! Update soon please... 😳

This just keeps getting better and better.

The MKC scenes on the show were awesome...Ballu's eyes were saying so much more than his mouth. There was a storm brewing in his eyes, and we all just knew that this guy had some secret hurts that even he didn't completely realize...he had missed her and he clearly enjoyed their banter.,...and you captured the storm with your words...awesome!!!

I loved this bud!!!

Some of my favourite parts:

Bahaar waali hai na..Bahaar waali ki tarhai reh.."He could not help but put the jab n again,ignoring her shocked look..

Somehow he could not forgive her for the fifteen years,hating her more for that..He did not know why,and nor did he want to find out..He hated her,loathed her was all that mattered to him at tht moment,and every moment..

And Baldev Singh the Sher of Pritampura,sheathed his claws,and let go of the Sherni unhurt,just because..He did not know why exactly,but he did so..

the Sher would win over the Sherni,was all that mattered right now..

haiii😳

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