Veeba FF:~I am BALDEV SINGH..~,Chapter-2,page-6...

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow this is exciting..This is so much better then in the show...Can't wait..continue ASAP!! Baldeva

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I love this!!! His thoughts are so Ballu 😳

You are killing this bud...thanks again for saying yes!

About the diaglougues...could you include them 😳 ...pretty please, with a Cherry on top!! It would help the people who have t watched the Veeba scenes on repeat get back into the groove LOL...and even for those of us who have would enjoy reliving them with the added Ballu pov courtesy of your awesomeness:)))

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Siya N

@monumolu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wowww amazing story Sina!!! Awww exactly how I would have loved to watch him!!! I can so well relate with this Baldev who skips a beat here, whose heart somersaults there, who is mesmerized for an instant, but above all who secretly rejoices her return!!!

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Loved it, this all could be so plausible, I would like to think these are his inner thoughts.
Really enjoyable , makes you wanna go watch the scene again .

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

I loved it to the core......This is so real and I can imagine that Baldev actually had the same thoughts..I felt like I was re-watching the scene in YT...beautifully written with each and every word in typical Ballu style...Marvelous I would say and thanks for this amazing concept🤗 ...sunny u too dear...thanks🤗...you deserve the credit for coming up with such a fabulous idea...and the story seems to be better than the show...😳. Love u for this Tehsina...Eagerly waiting for MKC😳

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Loved it so much, Sina 😳
When I realised that VeeBa are gonna end up together after several hints I literally rewinded that first Baldev entry scene! His attitude, his victorious walk, his sarcastic smile, dialogue delivery and of course Vishal's flawless acting took the scene to another level!
And just like your Baldev I rejoiced a proper hero's entry with glee 🥳 (Since, post leap Ranvi isn't a hero material unlike the pre-leap)
And your update have relived those memorise fresh once again! Thanks for the pm 😊