My VeeBa Stories Gallery |Realizations Part 2, Page 52 [16/07]

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Princy

@princy48

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Omg...dats jus beautiful bidzie...aaaw..cute baldevaa..luvd it dear..wanna see sumthing lyk this in d show too..keep up d Gud wrk..waitin 4 d nxt

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deepika padukone

@filtered_chaos

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Aww such a cute OS Bidz...it was so lovely and heartwarming! 🤗
VeeBa...my babies...I wish we get to see something similar in the show too! 😳
Keep writing...just love all your OS!

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..MagicBlonde..

@..MagicBlonde..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

wow 👍🏼 it was just too good!!! please update ... can't wait to know what happens next

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

awesome OS..you write so beautifully each time👏

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

nice start of falling in love

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Guys I am really sorry for leaving Part 2 incomplete. My laptop is broken down and has been sent for repairing. I will get it back on 7th and its really hard to edit such a big post on IF on phone. Hope you understand. Will be finishing up the second part in around two weeks. Sorry for the delay.

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sanahera

@sanahera

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

awesome. Awww!! sho shweet. i just <3 VeeBa👏

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

I know the way part 2 ended is super confusing and horrible but I didn't know what else to write since I am out of ideas for this situation. Anyways still waiting for ur comments and don't forget to press the like tab :D

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

excellent update, like how u have integrated the tv story line in ur story with him wanting to marry her. I guess it can be quite difficult to think of how to end the story in a good way.