My VeeBa Stories Gallery |Realizations Part 2, Page 52 [16/07]

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MaaneetDeewangi

@MaaneetDeewangi

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Oh my gosh this is so beautifully written 👏

It's just perfect!! 👍🏼

Great job, really LOVED it 😳

Hope something like this will happen in the serial

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Thank u guys fr ur comments n sorry fr the messed presentation of the first one. Its cuz I wrote it from cell since my lappy is broken... Thanks once again :-)

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pinkrose90

@pinkrose90

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Wow, this was so beautifully written! Loved how you expressed Veera and Baldev's feelings for each other.
I really hope if possible that you continue this OS! 😊

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Sudha

@Sudharies

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

It was very romantic and well written os😊
Loved reading Veeba's revelation of their feelings towards each other.

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zainabawoon

@zainabawoon

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

u are going to give me diabetes bidzie!!!this was too darn sweet, innocent and simply wonderrful!!!hats off girl! 😃

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

It is divine 😳... I am in VeeBa dreamland now..

Hats off to you!!!👏 I love your writing style..⭐️ Wanna read more so continue asap!! 😉

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Thanks both of you and I am not giving any diabetes... Blame VeeBa

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Bidzie u write such beautiful os yar.sigh i luved the part wen she hold his pinky finger and says menu chad ke na ja .awww bidz loved it u got god gift talent