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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Tehsina,

I never comment unless something is absolutely breathtaking, and I can say this story of yours was ABSOLUTELY BREATHTAKING! In fact, all your stories are a treat to read. But this one somewhere touched me. It got tears in my eyes. I loved it a lot. It's actually rare for a fanfiction or a SS to be that good that you like it more than a book or a show, but here your work is really good. You should think about writing a book or something. You are an amazing writer! I love all your stories. Your stories are really captivating and I wait for your updates everyday. So, keep up the great work and go and update all your stories like "playing with fire, burning passion etc" I'm waiting to read more of your amazing sizzling passionate stories!"

Lots of love,
Dina
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Edited by Dina98210 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahh a great story with a great ending! Always knew you had it in you! Love the story Tehsina, just keep coming up with more and keep the beauty of VeeBa alive. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
firstly , a big sorry 4 such late comment,secondly this is a perfect ending 👏 i loved billa-jaggi scenes poor ballu 😆,Sina i absolutely got carried away by ur conclusion that was awesome 👍🏼 each 'n every word of urs touched my heart ,will u believe it if say i was smiling 'n crying when i read it 😳 (it was happy tears 😭).thank u so much Sina 4 this wonderful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow what an ending!!!

sorry for the late reply...but I absolutely loved this story bud...awesome job.

I wish the CV's had even an ounce of your talent😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok first of all sorry for late commenting
i just loved this story of urs
so baldev went so dat he could come back and ask for veera hand in marriage
and they got married
thanks for this awesome story
and u r an awesome writer
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for this lovely story
Great job👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏👏hey sina...u r surely a awesome writter...each and every dialogues makes me feel as if its happening in real...only some of them get that blessing...and u r definitely one of them...i just wished that u were the script writter of the show..am commenting for the first time coz am new to india forums...but i hav read most of ur stories...its u who made me register to this forums...u r just awesome dear...from now onwards i'l make sure that i do comment and like ur posts...and thanks 4 the pm...pm me always wen u update ..plz...sina rocks...😛😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the Updates at once...it was beautiful Sina 😭
And like all beautiful things, this one too came to an end 😭
Mirage turned into reality ❤️
Great job Sina 👍🏼
Edited by mishachwdhury - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter -19

I am back to IF and reading the pending updates after a self imposed sabbatical due to work pressure!!! Sorry Sina for such a late response and thanks a ton for the pm!!!

Finally veeba are married..🥳 Ballu searching for his lost dil ❤️ was truly an awww moment!!! I loved how Baldev had traces of tears in his eyes when Ranvi hugged him and whispered a teary thank you!!! I would want to see Randev relationship evolving like this in the show as well... I am gonna read the next chapter with a heavy heart that my most favorite story in IF is gonna end 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter -20

Awww what do I tell now Sina? I think right through the first chapter you just caught my heart...and started wringing it!!!

Love how you took us through the development of Veeba's relationship from mirage to reality. I swear tears were starting to my eyes by the end!!!

I loved how both Baldev and Veera unraveled their possessive side in this chapter!!! Possessiveness becomes beautiful when two souls are deeply and madly in love like Veeba!!! "Main bhi love you Veerakhdi" from Baldev was as beautiful as their relationship!!!

I have no words Sina!!! I will terribly miss this story which was so close to my heart!!! As Baldev has carved a niche in my heart - "Mirage" has also carved a niche for itself in my life!!! 'Mirage' is there to stay forever as a perfumed memory!!! Thank you for the wonderful story and the pm.

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