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Rabia_H

@Rabia_H

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

SUPERB HOT ending 😳 Awesome FF dear 🤗

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Nikki

@Nikki36

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Wow, what an ending,

This was so great to read, loved the Jaggi and billa part, I could imagine the scene as I was reading it and baldev getting more and more pissed with them.

The hotness of the SR was just perfect, the mad angry passionate love-the possessive love and then the coming together of pure love, they belong together.

Perfect ending to one of the best fanfics I have read.

We are now all ready and eager for the next installments of updates for ur other fanfics.

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Lovely_KaranIka

@Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

awesome update, and an amazing end.. i just love this story to the core..❤️ will gonna miss it forever, its the bestest story i have ever read 🤗 thank u So much for giving us such a wonderful story 🤗 its was best in everything emotion,hate,love,passion and many more things... everything was just perfect 🤗 u r a superb writer ⭐️ Love you so much 🤗🤗

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Sorry for the late comments, Sina!

Tied up with hectic work and stuff, doesn't get much time to log into IF nowadays.

Btw, excellent update and also a great ending! Loved this FF completely.👏

Edited by Jyo_Veebafan - 11 years ago

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Kehkelungi

@Poohjabear

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Sina !!! This has to be the best FF I have ever read . 👏 I loved it ❤️

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BinduD

@BinduD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Awesome story! Loved it 👏

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Sina why r u ending it.its best ff ever yaar.i never read such beautiful ff and i love how beautifully u desribe thier connsumation.
It was something ha sher and sherni r finally together.
I love the line thier mirage became reality awww.
Tnku so much for ur beautiful ff sina

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Radhika

@Radhika03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Awww it all ended... Gonna miss THESE Veera and Baldev and your updates of Mirage...😭

Waiting for Mirage update had become a habit! You know I always loved all your stories..😳 but this was very very special... this was the most favorite of mine out of all your stories...

Describing Romantic situation is not new for you but i must say every time you write it with such a uniqueness...👏👏

You did such an exquisite job of shaping these characters from mirage to reality... it was truly splendid journey.. You are a gifted writer...⭐️⭐️ I felt like it should go on n on...

Thank you so much for weaving such a beautiful story... & do update your other stories ASAP ... because I am addicted for your writings... 🤗🤗🤗🤗

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ElireEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Finally caught up with it..😳..Phew what a superb ending to an awesome story...and that too had a twist in the form of Billa and Jaggi ending up in the bride's costumes to tease him...😆..bechara Baldev...I knew something of this sort was coming when Veera was not shying away from him under the veil...but I thought maybe Billa had forced Jaggi to take Veera's place😆...they love their Paaji so much won't leave him alone even on this day😆...and uske baad☺️...hot hot hot...☺️

This was such an awesome story that I feel so sad that it ended so soon...always kept waiting anxiously for your PM to read your update and the last few days you have been updating it so regularly that you have spoiled me and I have been sulking since yesterday as there are no new updates of Mirage to read😆 but I know all of us have to move on and I know you are going to treat us with awesome updates of the other stories, so no complains..😃...

This is a masterpiece and I am going to re-read it whenever I feel low becoz it has all the ingredients mixed in right amount. As I said before hats off to your creativity and your writing skills. Love you for treating us with this stunning piece of literature. 🤗 and I can vouch that this is the best story I have ever read on this forum.

Edited by ElireEli - 11 years ago