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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Omg how sad. felt so sorry for him as I read this. I can ssee it turning into an amazing story full of angst and love. Update soon
want to see him smile and laugh again
thanks for the pm

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

bang on 👍🏼 ,waiting 4 ur story

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Painful,but beautiful...❤️ Continue soon.. 😊

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awww mera ballu bachra kya halat ho gayi hain uski.its intesting story but plz do continuou .
U pen down intersting stories & forget abt it .plz write this one

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PotterHeadAMP

@PotterHeadAMP

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Soo much pain. But great start I can't wait to read this story as well!!! Can you just clarify if he is working close to pritampura or far? I didn't quite understand in the story. Blehh... 🥱

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Loved it as it started on a sad note 😉 !! Loved Baldev's introspection and decision ...seemed very natural 😛 !! Continue soon 😳

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pinkrose90

@pinkrose90

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Great start! 👏 looking forward to the next update!

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..MagicBlonde..

@..MagicBlonde..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Amazing⭐️!!!WOW u are such an awesome writer!👏oh please update soon...i wonder how veera must be feeling without baldev around her for six whole months...cant wait for the next part😳