VeeBa SS- 'Broken' *Author's Note, p.6* - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just read this wonderful story. This is simply awesome and I just loved loved your writing style - be it the use of vocabulary or the frequent spacing's between the dialogues - every minute detail is simply awesome. I felt like I was reading a book...you have portrayed the emotions so beautifully. I am already hooked to this story and hence would beg you to continue this story soon. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I absolutely love what you have written so far. You are such a talented writer and you have understood the characters so well. I second everything that Eli has written above. I hope you continue this.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ Nikki, Eli, Riya and all the other awesome people who commented earlier-


Whoa😳. Thanks a ton for all the comments! I am blushing tomato red right now, and grinning like an idiot from ear to ear. I just logged into IF after two days and saw that this SS that I had written a million years ago got all these comments. Needless to say, I am overwhelmed!😳😃


I began writing this story in March when I first started watching the show. I was hooked immediately to the couple and watched all the old VeeBa scenes on YouTube. I let my creative juices flow, and finished these two chapters in a jiffy. They were so fascinating, I just HAD to write something on them😊


And then, I went on a short vacation to Ooty for a week, intending to come home and complete the story.


When I came back, boy, was I in for a rude shock!🤢 This was in March when RanJan first got married and Baldev started pursuing Veera. I was dismayed to find that Baldev's character had undergone a sea change, to the extent that he almost seemed like a completely new person.


So yeah, I was incredibly disappointed because my favorite character seemed almost unrecognizable and could not be incorporated the way I envisioned him, because the show's makers were intent on showing him as a buffoon.


So that, coupled with the droopy interest readers showed in this tale(except for Sunny and Nikki and others) made me not update at all🥱[Okay, perhaps my laziness also played a part in it, but still...😉] I guess I just wasn't enthused enough to continue.



But NOW I certainly feel enthralled by the renewed interest in this story.😳 And the current track seems conducive to having this tale continue. So yeah, I am definitely back in action if there are takers for this silly tale of mine.⭐️



Once again, i feel humbled by your appreciation. Lots of love from my side as well.🤗And I promise to update this in the next 3 days. So stay tuned!



-Amri:)
Edited by -Amri- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Xcellant looking forward to a mega update. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww..thank you for deciding to come back to this.😳

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