VeeBa SS- 'Broken' *Author's Note, p.6*

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Princy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Gr8 strt..dear...Tfs..continue asap ..waitin 4 d nxt..

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Siya N

@monumolu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Ohhh my god!!!! I got goosebumps reading it... It was awesome yaar!!!! Pls continue soon...

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zainabawoon

@zainabawoon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

beautiful start!very emotional...pls continue ASAP and PM me when u update dear.i wud also appreciate it if u cud add the translation along with the dialogs cuz i'm a not from india and my understanding of hindi is not too good and need to use a translator

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Jiiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Great Start. Your Writing Skills Are Amazing.. Please Continue Soon. And Please PM 😊

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Hiii Amri...I Hope u Remember Me(AbhiyaMaaneet)...Awesome Prologue...Loved It...Can't Wait 4 d Update...Continue Soon 😊

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sunny303

@sunny303

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

oooh looking forward to updates...this sounds awesome!

Please PM once you update😊

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Muna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Aww very well described...pls continue soon!! I love it..pls pm meh when u update!!

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bismillah5985

@bismillah5985

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow very very nice n a superb start cant wait to read more plzzz continue soon

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manishasatpathy

@manishasatpathy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

awesome plzz update soon but ek request h v r having a negative gunjan already in the show yahan bhi usse negative mt bnao its not easy for ranjan fans