VeeBa SS- 'Broken' *Author's Note, p.6*

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: zainabawoon
beautiful start!very emotional...pls continue ASAP and PM me when u update dear.i wud also appreciate it if u cud add the translation along with the dialogs cuz i'm a not from india and my understanding of hindi is not too good and need to use a translator

Thank you😊 And I will certainly PM you regarding the update. Will be adding the second chapter today. And as you asked, will suffix it with the English translation😛 Will be doing it for the first chapter as well!

Originally posted by: TasrinS
Beautifuly written...

Thanks😃

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ~~BaBy~AnGel~~
Great Start. Your Writing Skills Are Amazing.. Please Continue Soon. And Please PM 😊

Thanks for commenting! You really are an angel! 😉😆

Originally posted by: ArShiDelena
Hiii Amri...I Hope u Remember Me(AbhiyaMaaneet)...Awesome Prologue...Loved It...Can't Wait 4 d Update...Continue Soon 😊

Of course I remember you, yaar😛

And will continue soon, sweetheart.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bismillah5985
Wow very very nice n a superb start cant wait to read more plzzz continue soon

Thanks for commenting! And I am definitely going to continue😊

Originally posted by: sunny303
oooh looking forward to updates...this sounds awesome!

Please PM once you update😊

Ooh! Thanks. And I will PM you😊 BTW, love your witty posts on this forum.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy
Aww very well described...pls continue soon!! I love it..pls pm meh when u update!!

Thanks! And will definitely PM you, rest assured.😊

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy
awesome plzz update soon but ek request h v r having a negative gunjan already in the show yahan bhi usse negative mt bnao its not easy for ranjan fans

Thanks for commenting, Manisha. And your request is my command. Gunjan will have grey shades in the beginning, but she will be redeemed, I promise. I do not intend to demonize her in any way, because I have the utmost respect for the sentiments of any fan group. BTW, I am a closet RanJan fan myself. But disappointed with the wedding

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sunny303

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Thanks for commenting! And I am definitely going to continue😊

Ooh! Thanks. And I will PM you😊 BTW, love your witty posts on this forum.

😃...thanks bud! as for the witty posts, I'm just crazy😆