VeeBa SS- 'Broken' *Author's Note, p.6* - Page 4

nice update will be eagerly waiting for nxt update and thanx for heeding to my request 😊 and evry1 is dissapointed with wedding dont know what the cvs want

Awesome As Usual...Loved It...Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...Continue Soon...Somtimes I Think If Gunjan Had Gone To Delhi With Veera Than Things Would Have Been So Different...I Missed d Old Gunjan...I'm Hating The Marriage Track...Thank So Much For Not Making Gunjan Negative.

Uh...its something new..totally different 4m anything else..I got d feel of reading a published novel..excellent usage of vocab..amazing style of explaining a feeling..Wat I luvd d most is ur long pause(space) b/w d dialogues in d middle..that's gvng me sumtym t visualize,listen n feel dat particular dialogue wid xprsns n all...totally totally..u r writing style is jus awesumm...3 cheers 4 dat..this was abt ur writing..

Nw cmg t d story...a beautiful n finest way of confessing love I hav ever seen or read before..jus luvd it ..sumtyms our silence,actions speak a lot more than our words..they r very stronger at tyms..

Okay..then we r going t see a new gunjan in ur stry?? Dats interesting..

On a whole, Its a gr8 update,waitin 4 d nxt..n plzz do pm me abt ur updates..

Great update. Cant wait for the next one.

This is really interesting... just love d jealous Baldev

Beautifully written.. I just loved your writing style and thoroughly enjoyed the bond Veera and Baldev have come to share with one another looking forward to the next part update soon..!!

Wow bud...this was such beautiful start to a no doubt awesome story! I honestly cannot wait for what will come next...and how this story will unfold. I am a fan already😃.

I think with this one sentence, " Yet, even their usual nok-jhok was tinged by a new awareness" you've put all my feelings to rest...You will handle this story awesomely I really don't doubt it!!! Just seeing how their nok-joks tinged with the new awareness come about will be worth it...and on top of all that this story sounds freakin amazing!!

Hurry up and update soon😃😃😃

When r updating this, its a gem of a story