'MAIN KAMLI MERE YAAR KI' RANJAN OS- part 8 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Sabhayata

Just went through all your updates amazingly written
cant wait to read what happens next
I like your version of ranvi and gunjan as individual characters

Ranvi runs to Balwants house on his bike as quickly as possible...

Totally tensed he parts his bike outside and runs inside.. and all of them balwant, bansuri and bansuri are leaving..

Ranvi runs to balwant whiis in tears who is sitting on a chair.. Ranvi goes to him and kneels down holding him" tayaji.. ki hua.. aap sab log itne pareshaan kyu hai"

Balwant is in distress and he puts his hand on ranvi's shoulder and cries loudly.. " Ranvi.. yeh kya ho gaya.. abhi abhi to vyah hua tha meri gunjan da.. aur abhi.."

Ranvi gulps in worry and looks at baldev to answer cos balwant is so distressed

Baldev speaks up who is also very distressed" Ranvi.. who Gunjan de pati.. who jiss hawai jagaj mein London jaa raha tha who crash ho gaya.. who ab iss duniya mein nahi raha"..

Hume utthe jaa rahe hai... chaliye paapji

They all get up and go towards the jeep

Ranvi just drops sitting on the floor after hearing this shocking news... he is in disbelief...

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Its 6 months passed

Six months passed since ranvi came to know that the guy whom gunjan had married had died... he hasn't seen her ever since she married and went away...

His worries for her has been never ending... he had tried calling her several times but he dint have the heart and guts to call her.. and he dint know what to talk to her if he ever called...

He was sitting in his fields and thinking of the day when gunjan had told her feelings to him the very same place and he had turned her down and asked her to marry someone else.. her tears and words haven't left his system.. his guilt has been consuming him every since...

Ranvi goes home and sits down to eat... and he serves himself and about to eat the first morsel and suddenly veera comes into the house running...

"veerji.. veerji..."

Ranvi looks at her worried " ki hua.. veera"

Veera halts and take sa deep breathe and thinks a bit and then speaks up " veerji.. woh.. gunjan didi aayi hai .. maine unhe apne ghar aate hue dekha"

Ranvi hits with excitement and a smiles .. but then just the next second his guilt takes over and he sits back on the chair of his dining table..

Veera puts her hand on his shoulders trying to show her understanding and walks away..

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In balwant house...

Gunjan's mother in law is being very loud at balwant and bansuri..

" hume maaf kijiye sarpanch ji.. par hum ab aapki ladki ko aur nahi paal sakte.. pehle humare nri bete ko hum kho chuke hain.. aura b doosre bete ki naukri bhi nahi rahi.. inn paison ki tangi vich ek aur ko bekaar me hume paalna pad raha hai.. waise to sach sach kahoon to aapki beti ke pair hi ashubh rahe hai humare ghar ke waaste.. ab bas.. humare ghar ke liye yehi sahi rahega ki ise aap hi pale"

Gunjan is standing there behing her MIL with her bag in her hand and teary eyed.. she is a very pale dress with no jewellery or make up and open simple hair on one side of her shoulder.. she seems lost and emotionless...

Balwant is folding his hands to her MIL.. he is helpless and looks at Gunjan and tears flow down his eyes... he walks ahead and goes to gunjan and hugs her crying.. gunjan is still not showing much of an emotion although teary eyed...

Balwant turns back to her Mil " theek hai.. hum bhi apni beti nu aise ghar vich nahi bhejna chahte hain jahaan uski kadar nahi.. ab se gunjan apne ghar me hi rahegi.. "

He says and folds hands in anger asking her MIL to leave

Bansuri is not liking all this at all..

Balwant takes her bag and holds gunjan and takes her to the room..

Balwant takes her to her room and makes her sit on her bed... Gunjan goes to her balcony and sees outside the window.. balwant comes to her and holds her " puttar, kisi tarah ki jhijhak mat rakhna.. ab se tu yehi rahegi.. aur jab tak tera papaji zinda hai.. kisi ki fikar mat karna.. "

She nods her head and balwant leaves from the room

Balwant goes to his room and bansuri follows him angry

" sarpanji.. kya zaroori tha gunjan nu ghar waapis lena? Socha hai ki log ki kahenge.. yun apni vidhva kudi nu ghar pe rakha hai?? Mainu lagta hai ki kuch paise wagera de kar uske sasural walon ko gunjan ko waapis bhej dijiye"

Balwant gets very angry.. " bansuri ji.. Gunjan meri kudi hai.. mainu koi farak nahi padta kaun kya sochta hai uske bare mein.. par main use uss narak mein nahi rehne doonga samjhi aap.. who yehi rahegi .. aur jaisa pehle tha waisa hi chalega"

And he walks away... and bansuri is worried

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Gunjan sits in her room and remembers all the time spent in that house since her husband died.. it had been a long 6 months of mental torture for her...

From listening to the taunts of her family members to other people.. she had been doing all house hold chores and yet noone ever was ever nice to her...

The six months has changed her a lot.. made her quite a dead person from within.. now no more of any emotions is she really cared about... and no more hurt pains her any more..

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Its next morning and gunjan is busy doing something in the kitchen and bansuri comes there...

"gunjan .. dekh kal baldev ke kuch dost aa rahe hain shehar se.. aur is waaste tera kamra unhe dena hoga.. ab hume to pata nahi than a kit u achanak waapis aa jayegi..."

Gunjan looks confused " par beeji main kahan rahungi"

Bansuri is disinterested " dekh.. ek kaam kar.. store room nu saaf kar de aur apne rehne de waaste kuch dino ke liye jagah bana le wahan..."

Gunjan nods her head

Bansuri continues " aur haan.. kuch naashta bhi bana dena.. who log aaj shaam ko aayenge.. to agle kuch dino ke liye naashte bana ke rakh dena dabbon mein aur bahar jaake sabjiyan bhi le aana"

Gunjan just nods her head and goes away..

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Gunjan buys all the vegetables and has two heavy bags in her hand and is slowly walking to go home...

She is walking down a lonely lane amnd she trips on a stone and suddenly one of the bags breaks and all the veggies fall down..

Suddenly one guy standing there comes to help her.. " are gunjan.. main utna deta hoon"

She nods and he starts to pick some vehetables up and puts it into another bag... the guy brings some veggies and hands over to put it into the cover.. and gunjan shows the bag in her hand..

The guy looks around and sees noone and takes a chance and holds gunjans hand..

Gunjan looks at him angry and pulls off her hands and moves back..

The guy starts to move towards her..

But suddenly a hand grips the neck of the guy from the back.. and he is scared.. he turns around to see its none other than Ranvi

Gunjan and Ranvi share an eye lock

Originally posted by: cutekk

wow simply amazing di...👏👏
next part will be full of ranjan i guess...🥳
thnks fr the pm...

Originally posted by: moniloveasya

omg u made gunjan vidhwa nice update

Originally posted by: smart_girl

Nice...veeryyy nice indeed...eye lock k baad aagey kya hoga mza aygaa... [L

Originally posted by: Sasha_Yuvreen

This is what you've left me feeling ND:

Aww, poor Gunjan (for getting mental abuse, and becoming "vidhwa" in the eyes of society also, coz in her heart she already became on the night before her marriage)😭

Balwant - 👍🏼, parenting done right!

Bansuri - 😡, kabhi nahi suderagi

RANVI - 😕 😳 😎

PLZ continue very soon, this excellent cliff hanger makes waiting unbearable 😲 😉