'MAIN KAMLI MERE YAAR KI' RANJAN OS- part 8 - Page 16

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Aww poor gunjan!!Continue soon!!It was a beautiful update!!

Originally posted by: Alisha-2887

Another brilliant update
Feeling bad for Gunjan-she has suffered so much
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm :-)

Originally posted by: EVANNAPINKHEART

yaar namratavyas...y dont you rite an os on veeba also...i wanna read your veeba stories...anyways luvd this os!!!

❤️evanna

Originally posted by: Vinder90

good update di,

like how your bring closure to any third angles, in form of Gunjan husband who is no more. . unexpected chain of events, pretty well written. . .

just makes me fume at what the real reel thing is showing compared to what you have written here . . . another job well done. . . please update asap. . .

Originally posted by: Anraysha

Awesome Os Namrataji.U r Just Awestrucking.Eye-lock,Lip-lock ...RANJAN Romance eagerly waiting to watch it in the Show.God nd the CVs only know when the episodes will start.LOVED it Namrataji nd Love U too.keep updating.❤️🤗

Ranvi holds the guy from the neck at the back... The guy gets scared and turns back to see Ranvi... " Who praji.. main to maddad kar raha tha" he says scared...

Ranvi just leaves his neck and stands with his arms folded and gives a serious look to that guy.. and the guy quickly hands over the bag and stuff to gunjan and leaves from there...

Gunjan sees Ranvi and gives a faint smile to him.. and then takes both her bags and starts to walk towards her house..

Ranvi feels out of words. But then takes courage to shout her from the back.. "gunjan..."

Gunjan stops and looks back .. He walks ahead to her and takes the bags from her " mainu de de.. chal ghar tak chad deta hoon"

Gunjan doesn't say anything and just nods her head and walks along with him..

They walk in total silence.. neither of them speak anything.. and they finally reach home..

Gunjan takes her bags from Ranvi and start going towards her house.. Ranvi just keeps looking at her without saying anything.. he wants to say something but he isn't getting the right words..

Gunjan walsk up to her door.. and then turns back and speaks up.. " Ranvi.. chai piyega?? maine mathri banayi hai"

Ranvi feels a sense of relief and happiness with the invitation.. and he nods his head in a yes and comes inside..

Gunjan prepares tea for him and balwant who are chatting in the hall and she serves them... Ranvi keeps looking to get an opportunity to talk to her..

Balwants phone rings and he gets up and walks away...

Gunjan keeps the snacks on the table and turns to walk away.. but ranvi speak up

"Gunjan.. tu theek hai na"

Gunjan turns back and smiles at him.. " Main theek hoon Ranvi" ... she says in a very relaxed tone... Ranvi keeps looking into her eyes to search an answer to his question.. he dint believe that she was saying the truth..

She just walked away with a smile on her face...

Ranvi kept staring at her as she walked away... he started getting flashes of his gunjan who was so full of life.. pranking laughing and sweet girl... she wore the most colourful clothes and always so decked up..

And now the girl he is seeing is so pale and quiet.. for the first time he had seen her with such simple hair and less jewellery and such lighest coloured clothes.. his heart wasn't ready to accept that she was fine ... her smile was giving him a fake feeling...his heart was feeling too heavy..

Balwant came back and he started talking to Ranvi...

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Gunjan took a whole lot of cleaning stuff and goes into the store room to start cleaning there to settle down and give the room to baldevs friends...

" hayee rabba.. yeh kaisa store room hai.. beeji ne shaayad kabhi saaf nahi karaya" she rants and starts picking up all the things around to clean..

After a while she manages to make some space and clean up a little... then she sees whole lot of books and things lying on the floor.. she starts collecting them to put them into the cupboard and racks to make space...

She climbs a small ladder and picks up somethings and starts stacking them one by one..

Ranvi comes there and sees her doing all this and is bit confused.. he wants to talk to her a lot..

As she is doing so suddenly she starts losing balance..

Ranvi runs to help and holds her from her waist to help her regain balance on the ladder... Gunjan suddenly turns back and sees Ranvi holding her waist to help her...

She feels awkward and holds his hand and pushes it away from her slowly... ranvi also feels awkward and just moves back..

" who gunjan.. yeh sab ki kar rahi hai tu.. kuch ... kuch madad kar doon??" he stammers..

She just nods in negative "Nahi Ranvi.. theek hai.. bas yahan sone ki jagah bana rahi hoon.. who veerji ke dost a rahe hain to mera kamra unhe dena hoga... bas isiliye.. "

Ranvi still wants to help.. " nahi gunjan .. main teri maddad kar deta hoon..' he says and starts picking up things and gives her.. Gunjan doesn't want the help.. but then she doesn't oppose again and takes his help..

They do most of the cleaning... in the end ranvi finds a old photo album.. he opens it and sees it.. there are many of their childhood pics of ranvi veera baldev gunjan and all..

He sits down and sees it flipping the pages.. " gunjan.. yeh dekh.. tenu yaad hai yeh.. " it was birthday pics of gunjan... and all were present there

Gunjan comes close and takes the album from ranvi and shuts it... " ranvi.. yahan ki saaf safai ho gayi.. veerji aayenge to bistar lagva denge.. meri maddad de waaste shukriya" she says softly and walks away and puts the album into the cupboard

Ranvi is bit taken aback.. but he doesn't say anything.. and he walks away..

He still has so much to talk.. but he just thinks of giving her some space to start with

He goes out and walks away... gunjan stands hiding and sees him go away.. she is teary eyed.. there is lots running inside of her too

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Ranvi walks to his fileds.. as he walks he keeps thinking about gunjan and what all happened all this while...

He remembers when she first told him that she loves him and her tears and how much she wanted to be with him all her life and he just turned her down..

To seeing her as a totally different person today... he was able to connect to her pain today and wanted to take them all from her... but he knew that he was too late..

He felt that somewhere that pain inside of her is inflicted by him only...

Ranvi couldn't hold on to his emotions any more.. he took a plough and started plughing the land in lot of angst.. till he suddenly hit his hand and it started to bleed profusely.. he just folded his fist and closed his eyes..

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Ranvi went home and to his room and started looking around for some first aid box.. suddenly veera came there..

"veerji.. ae ki hua.. " she held his hand and immediately ran and brought a first aid box and made him sit down on d sofa..

" who kuch nahi veera.. bad khet vich zameen joth raha tha.." ranvi tried to explain

Veera starts to bandage his hand and clean his wound...

Suddenly ranvi questioned veera " Veera.. sach bata.. kya tenu lagta hai ki gunjan di iss haalat da zimmedar kahin na kahin mai hoon"?

Veera looks at him astonished at his question

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precap - baldevs friend misbehaves with gunjan in her house 😲