VeeBa and RanJan FF: Rab ne Bana Di Jodi Conclusion Updated on Pg.28 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Luvd it
Continue soon n thnx 4 d pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
even i felt a little angry on ranvi 4 lapping veera,i'm happy 4 what he did @ the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Awesome update!!! I love how Ballu didn't back off from admitting his love and neither did. Veera!

Gunjan is annoying, even in fanfiction lol!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Beautiful update!!And congrats this is the first story where veera gets slap from RANVI?!!!
Anyways!!Conitnue ASAP!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Beautiful update!!And congrats this is the first story where veera gets slap from RANVI?!!!

Anyways!!Conitnue ASAP!!


Thanks dazzilerdizzy! 😊 and yes, I know on the show ranvi would probably not slap veera, but in this FF I wanted to show how Ranvi in the heat of the moment having seen baldev and veera kiss got upset and lost it completely. But don't worry in my next update due to certain circumstances ranvi will feel very guilty for having slapped veera.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome 🤗 continue asap :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone for all the feedback!🤗 Means a lot. Hope you all like this update. Let me know what you think.

Part 7

The next day...

Ranvi (thinking to himself): "Mainu Veera ko thapad nahin marna chahiye tha! Maine bahut galat kitta!"

Ranvi decided he would go to Veera's room and apologize to her by taking her favorite ladoos for her.

When Ranvi went in, he was surprised to see that Veera was still sleeping. It was already 10 am in the morning. When he gently shook Veera to wake her up, he realized that Veera's whole body was hot.

Ranvi: "Yeh kya? Veera nu bukhaar hai?"

Veera woke up then, feeling really sick and tired. She didn't realize yet why she was feeling like her body was hot.

Veera: "Veerji, aap yahan?"

Ranvi: "Veera, tu utth mat! Tujhe bahut tez bukhar hai. Tenu aaram karne ki zaroorat hai. Kal raat ki baarish ke baad tu bimaar pad gayi."

Now, seeing Veera in this state, Ranvi felt even worse and more guilty for how he reacted seeing Veera and Baldev together last night.

Ranvi: "Veera, mainu maaf karde! Mainu tujhe thapad nahin maarna chahiye tha."

Veera: "Veerji, yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? Aap toh mere veerji hai. Maafi toh mainu aapse mangni chahiye. Agar koi aur bhai hota, toh voh bhi aapke jaise hi naraaz ho jaate."

That's when Gunjan came in. She was surprised to see Veera still in bed.

Gunjan: "Ranvi, ki hoya Veera nu?"

Ranvi: "Gunjan, Veera nu kal raat ki baarish ki vajah se, bahut tez bukhaar hai."

Gunjan didn't know why but she felt bad for Veera. And she also couldn't believe what she was going to say next.

Gunjan: "Veera, main tere liye acchi garma garam soup banati hoon. Tu bahut jald theekh ho jayegi."

Veera (upet and angry): "Iski koi zaroorat nahin hai Gunjan didi! Mainu pata hai ki kal raat jo hua usme aap ka haath hai. Mainu aapki soup nahin chahiye."

Ranvi understood Veera's bitter feelings towards Gunjan, but he didn't want any more conflicts and arguments between his sister and his wife.

Ranvi (in a warning tone): "Veera, aise nahin kehte. Gunjan nu teri fikar hai."

Veera rolled her eyes in frustration.

Gunjan: "Chod de Ranvi. Mainu bhi Veera ki madad nahin karni."

Gunjan left Veera's room in anger.

In Baldev's house...

Unlike Veera who was sick, Baldev only had a slight cold, sneezing and coughing. Bansuri was worried for her son's wellbeing.

Bansuri: "Puttar, kal raat tu itni der baarish mein ki kar raha tha? Kahin tu uss Veera se..."

Baldev rolled his eyes in anger and frustration and interrupted his beeji.

Baldev: "Arre nahin beeji. Kuch nahin hua! Aap bhi na."

Baldev (thinking to himself): "Lagta hai Gunjan ne beeji nu kal raat ke baare mein kuch nahin kahan. Lekin ab meri Veera kaisi hai? Kal raat, Ranvi ne pehli baar uss par haath uthaya. Mainu Veera se baat karni hogi."

Baldev tried calling Veera's cell phone, but she wasn't picking up. Baldev began to worry.

Baldev: "Ab mainu hi vahan jaana padega."

Baldev left for Veera's house.

Back in Veera's house...

Ranvi had left for work. But before that, he ordered Veera to stay in the house and take care of herself until she was fully okay. If she needed anything, Ranvi had given her all the instructions to ask beeji or Gunjan for help.

Veera: "Iss fever ki vajah se main iss kamre mein bas bore ho rahi hoon. Kal raat ke baad, maine Baldev se baat bhi nahin ki."

Veera was looking out the window, when suddenly she saw someone's hands were on the window, trying to climb into her room.

Veera (thinking to herself): "Mere ghar mein chor? Main uss chor ko dikhati hoon."

Veera took out one of Ranvi's old bats kept close to her bed, and went to hit the robber.

Veera was about to hit the robber with the bat, but then she froze upon seeing the person's face.

Veera (hissed): "Baldev, tu? Itthe ki kar raha hai? Aur chor ki tarah mere kamre mein kyun ghus raha hai?"

Baldev: "Main tujhse milna chahta tha. Tu tera phone bhi nahin uttha rahi thi. Aur ab tu mujhe uss bat se maarne ja rahi thi!"

Veera couldn't help but smile. Despite everything that had happened, Veera was happy to see Baldev, and forgetting what Ranvi said, she dropped the bat and hugged Baldev.

Veera: "Maine tenu bahut miss kiya!"

Baldev smiled and hugged Veera back. That's when he felt that Veera's whole body was hot.

Baldev (very concerned): "Veera, tenu toh tez bukhar hai? Tu aaram kar."

Veera made a face.

Veera: "Ab tu bhi meri veerji ki tarah baat mat kar! Mainu aur aaraam nahin karni. Tang aa gayi hoon iss kamre mein."

Baldev was about to respond when they both heard a knock on Veera's room door. Both Veera and Baldev looked at each other with panicked expressions.

Veera: "Hayyo rabba! Ab kya hoga! Agar veerji, chaiji, beeji, ya phir Gunjan didi ne tujhe yahan dekh liya, toh bada siyappa ho jayega!! Tab toh teri khair nahin! Ja chup ja jaldi kahin pe."

Baldev was about to go hide somewhere, when the door to Veera's room opened. Both Baldev and Veera froze when they saw who it was who had opened the door.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Luvly update dear...an update wid evrythng in it..I always love these chup chup ke si mulakate..n d window jumping scenes..continue asap..waitin 4 d nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Lovely upd8!!!
Continue ASAP...w8ing 4 d nxt part!!

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