VeeBa and RanJan FF: Rab ne Bana Di Jodi Conclusion Updated on Pg.28 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Here Gunjan is so sweet.Forgetting everything she is trying to be a good bahu.She started accepting Ranvi too.She realized that d ring is not sent by Ranvi.I thought she wud b angry with Veera 4 that.But she is happy that Veera 4gave her.These things r not going 2 happen in d serial 4 sure.U created a sweet gunjan.Did Ranvi understand this?Confusing.plz add more VeeBa scenes in d next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it Pinkrose,It is super awesome,eagerly waiting for next updates.❤️👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
suspense???? well i like suspences😛,very well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone for all the feedback once again!🤗 Really appreciate it! Hope you all like this update.

Part 4

What Baldev, Veera, and Ranvi didn't know was that Gunjan was actually happy on the inside. She saw Ranvi coming downstairs, and used this opportunity to pretend to ask Veera if she had forgiven her.

Gunjan (thinking to herself): "Ab Veera kya karegi? Uske veerji ko ab kitna dukh hoga! Jaise dono bhai aur behen ne mujhe dukh diya, aur mere veerji ne bhi Veera ka saath diya mujhe aur Ranvi ko milane, ab main Ranvi aur Veera nu chot pahunchaungi."

Ranvi: "Veera, sach bata?"

Veera still looked at Baldev for help, but this time he could not come up with anything.

Before Veera could say anything, Gunjan pretending to be innocent spoke up.

Gunjan: "Ranvi, galti meri hai, Veera ki nahin. Veera tujhe chot nahin pahunchana chahti thi, isliye usne tujhse kuch nahin kahan."

Veera: "Veerji, mainu maaf kijiye! Ek na ek din toh sach bahar aana hi tha. Aap aur beeji hamesha mere veerji aur beeji rahenge."

Ranvi was touched by what Veera said, but he was still upset at Gunjan. Gunjan hurt him, he could still take it. But Gunjan hurt his sister, that Ranvi could not accept.

Baldev: "Ranvi, bhool ja na purani baaton. Dekh, main bhi toh tujhe seh raha hoon na, kyunki ab tu meri behen ka pati jo hai. Varna abhi bhi main tujhse ladta rehta."

Ranvi (in anger): "Mujhe kuch der ke liye akela chod do. Main apne kamre mein rahunga."

Veera: "Lekin veerji!"

Veera was about to stop Ranvi, when Baldev held her hand to stop her. Veera looked over at Baldev, who shook his head, asking her to let it go for now. Veera nodded her head in agreement, and Baldev, who noticed that he had been holding Veera's hand let go.

Ranvi looked at Veera, and Veera could see the hurt in Ranvi's eyes. She realized that there was no point in arguing. Veera let Ranvi leave.

Veera: "Sorry Gunjan didi!"

Gunjan: "Veera, tu chinta mat kar. Main Ranvi se baat karungi!"

Baldev didn't like seeing Veera upset like this.

Baldev: "Chal Veera, tere kamre mein chalte hai. Tu mujhe voh CD dene wali thi na jisme acche gaane hai."

Veera: "Oh..haan! Main toh bhool hi gayi. Chal."

Baldev and Veera went to her room.

In Veera's room...

Veera took out the CD and gave it to Baldev to listen.

Baldev noticed that Veera was still upset, and deep in thought.

Baldev: "Veera, tu chinta mat kar sab theek ho jayega. Thoda waqt de. Dekh hum dono bhi toh unn dono ki shaadi se khush nahin hai.Lekin ab jo hua so hua."

Veera: "Haan Baldev, tu theek keh raha hai."

Baldev: "Mainu tujhe kuch dena hai. Surprise hai."

Veera got excited. She wanted to know what Baldev had got for her.

Baldev took his surprise out from his jacket pocket. To cheer Veera up, and annoy her, Baldev kept it away from her. Veera tried to snatch the gift from Baldev, but he was too fast.

Veera: "Surprise de na mujhe Baldev!"

Veera and Baldev continued their nok jhok, with Veera trying to get the gift from Baldev's hand, when suddenly they both tripped on the floor mat and fell on the couch in Veera's room.

Veera fell on Baldev, with her head on his chest. It was like time stood still. Baldev and Veera shared an eyelock, and they both felt like they couldn't breathe. Baldev's pulse and heart beat quickened, and he didn't know why. Veera's cheeks flushed red.

Baldev (thinking to himself): "Yeh mainu ki ho raha hai? Veera aur main toh sirf dost hai."

Veera (thinking to herself): "Main Baldev nu aise kyun dekh rahin hoon. Woh toh mera dost hai!"

Baldev noticed some of Veera's hair was covering her eye. Instinctively, he reached out to move Veera's hair from her eyes.

Feeling Baldev's touch on her skin, sent electricity through Veera's body. She didn't understand why. How could she be feeling this way?

Baldev and Veera were still so lost in the moment that they didn't notice someone come in.

Ranvi: "Yeh sab ki ho raha hai? Baldev tu meri behen ke saath kya kar raha hai?"

Baldev and Veera were shocked, and quickly got up from the sofa.

Veera (stuttering): "V..veerji...woh...main toh bas Baldev ko apni CD de rahi thi."

Baldev: "Veera, main chalta hoon. Baad mein milenge."

Baldev walked away, more like ran from there quickly without turning back to see Veera.

Gunjan had noticed everything.

Gunjan (thinking to herself): "Yeh veerji aur Veera ke beech kya chal raha hai?"

And then Gunjan began to smile an evil smile.

Gunjan (thinking to herself): "Agar Ranvi ko pata chal gaya ki Veera aur veerji ke beech kuch chal raha hai, toh voh Veera aur veerji nu kabhi saath hone nahin denge."

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Beautifuly written...~
Continue posting such lovely update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Read d two parts together..
Nyc updates dear..tho ab sab kuch gunjan ke plan se chalne wala hai..??
I hope that brings veeba more closer than nw...n plzz don't hurt ranvi more Yaar..show mein Jo seh raha hai..kya voh kaafi nahi hai..??Tfs..thanks 4 d pm too..waitin 4 d nxt..plzz continue asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
thanku 4 quick updates.i like daily updates.So d truth is out b4 avi n he is upset.What is Ratan's take on this?Loved VeeBa scene.They hav started feeling 4 each other.Falling,hair moving,eye lock...so romantic.Now Gunjan has a doubt abt VeeBa's relation
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gunjan🤢🤢 Poor ranvi 😭😭 Veeba Nice update dear thanks for THE pm dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Wow love the update!!
Anyways continue ASAP!!😉
VeeBa feeling for each other!!Gunjan thinking abt veeba is making me know more!!
Edited by DazzilerDizzy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Gr8 upd8!!!
Luvd it!!
Hate gunjan🤢
W8ing 4 d nxt upd8!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!

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