VeeBa and RanJan FF: Rab ne Bana Di Jodi Conclusion Updated on Pg.28 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Great start!!
I already love this FF!!
Continue ASAP!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Great👍🏼
Continue writing...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Loved 2 read something on this theme.Glad that d forced marr did ruin Veeba's relation.I thought Ranvi luvs her now also like b4 tho she hurts.Anyways Gunjan at least is doing d responsibilities of a bahu.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice part. update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Awesome start!!
Beautifully written!!
Can't w8 4 d nxt upd8!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone for all the feedback!😃 Hope you all like this update! Let me know what you think.

Part 2

Back at the lakeshore...

Veera came up with an idea to help bring her veerji and Gunjan together. Baldev saw Veera give the look he knew so well, completelely determined, which he knew meant that Veera had come up with an idea.

Baldev: "Chal.. bata mainu ki chal raha hai tere dimaag mein?"

Veera noticed how Baldev almost always knew what she was thinking. Despite their differences, he surprisingly knew her really well.

Veera: "Chal.. market chalte hai, jeweller ke paas."

Baldev was confused.

Baldev: "Jeweller ke paas? Kyun?"

Veera: "Ab chal na!"

Without realizing, Veera pulled Baldev towards his jeep. Baldev was taken by surprise, seeing Veera pulling him towards his jeep, but then he quickly recovered.

At the jewellery store..

Veera was looking at different rings for Gunjan. She found a pretty gold ring with nice stones on it and asked the shopkeeper to show it to her.

Veera: "Bhaiya, voh wala dikhana? Dekh Baldeva, yeh ring kaisi hai Gunjan didi ke liye?"

Baldev: "Haan, haan acchi hai. Waise.. tera idea bahut accha hai! Gunjan ko lagega ki Ranvi ne yeh angoothi uske liye layi hai. Chal try kar... teri aur Gunjan ki angoothi ki size ek hi hai na?"

Before Veera could protest, Baldev put the ring on Veera's finger. Veera admired it and smiled at Baldev.

Veera: "Yeh ring toh sach mein bahut sundar hai. Hum Gunjan didi ke liye yahin khareedenge!"

Veera was trying to remove the ring from her finger, when she realized that it was stuck. She looked at Baldev, completely panicked.

Baldev: "Ki hoya tenu? Aise kyun dekh rahi hai mainu?"

That's when Baldev noticed Veera struggling to remove the ring from her finger.

Veera: "BALDEV!!Yeh sab teri galti hai! Agar tune mujhe yeh ring nahin pehnayi hoti, toh yeh sab nahin hota."

Baldev: "Oh mainu ki pata tha ki teri itni moti ungliyan hai!"

Veera got really mad at Baldev and stepped on his foot in anger. Baldev screamed out in pain.

Veera: "Kya kahan tune? Moti ungli?"

Baldev: "Main mazaak kar raha tha. Tu bhi na? Ab haath de mujhe, main angoothi nikaal deta hoon."

Shopkeeper: "Agar yeh angoothi nahin nikli, toh yeh aapko khareedna hoga."

Veera glared at Baldev, when the shopkeeper said this.

Back at Ranvi's house...

Gunjan was in her and Ranvi's room and realized that she had to take some things out from her suitcase, which just happened to have been kept on top of the closet. Gunjan looked over at Ranvi, for help, but he seemed or pretended to be busy doing some calculations.

Gunjan (thinking to herself): "Mainu Ranvi ki madad ki zaroorat nahin hai! Main apna kaam khud kar sakti hoon."

Gunjan climbed on a stool to take the things she wanted from her suitcase kept on top of the closet, but she still couldn't reach. She stood on her tiptoes and tried again, but this time, before Gunjan could do anything, she slipped from the stool and was mortified when she fell backwards. Without realizing, Gunjan screamed out Ranvi's name, and suddenly Gunjan who had closed her eyes, realized that Ranvi had caught her in his arms.

Ranvi and Gunjan shared an eyelock. Finally, it was Ranvi who broke their eyelock.

Ranvi put Gunjan down, and moved away from her.

Ranvi: "Tu theek toh hai na?"

Gunjan (out of breath): "Haan, main theek hoon. S..Shukriya Ranvi."

Ranvi nodded his head and left from their room.

Back at the jewellery store...

Finally, with the help of the shopkeeper who had got some ghee, Veera finally took out the ring from her finger.

Veera: "Thank God yeh angoothi finally nikal aayi!"

She turned towards Baldev.

Veera: "Baldev, ab se tu na mujhse pehle pooch, aur phir hi yeh sab karna, samjha!"

Baldev (irritated): "Haan, haan! Samajh gaya! Ab chal.. yeh angoothi khareed kar vapis chalte hai."

Baldev and Veera left from there, and Baldev dropped Veera home.

Baldev: "Tenu pata hai na ki karna hai?"

Veera: "Haan, mainu sab pata hai! Yeh idea mera hi toh hai!"

Baldev: "Accha theek hai! Thodi der baad mainu bata dena agar hamara plan ho gaya ki nahin?"

Veera laughed, hearing Baldev referring to her plan as hamara, and then Baldev left.

Veera quietly went into Ranvi and Gunjan's room, when neither of them were there and left the ring in a nice box on the bedside table.

After some time...

Gunjan came into her room and noticed a box lying on the bedside table.

Gunjan: "Yeh kya? Iss mein toh mera naam hai, aur woh bhi Ranvi se?"

Gunjan was curious to know what was in the box. She opened it and was surprised to see a pretty gold ring with nice stones on it. She smiled.

Gunjan (thinking to herself): "Itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad bhi Ranvi ne mere liye yeh angoothi khareedi?"

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Update, Loved It. And It Was Beautifully Written. Continue Soon. And Please PM When You Do.

Jiya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~~BaBy~AnGel~~

Great Update, Loved It. And It Was Beautifully Written. Continue Soon. And Please PM When You Do.

Jiya


Thank you so much!😃 Will PM you with the next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Loved it😊
Update soon...
Waiting for VeeBa and RanJan romance😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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