VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it😳
Great update! Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tehsina!!! The ending, the entire story actually, turned out way better than what I had asked for lol!!

I loved Ballu's anger...how he saved her

And you included Jaggi and Billa too 😳

Love it bud!!! Veera taking him to task at the end and forcing him to admit his feelings by laying her own bare was purrrfect!!! And when she said "abb pappiyan de mainu" ...I was like hell yeah, woo woo Veera!!

Thank you bud!

Thank you for listening to my rambling request and then piecing together what I asked and turning it into this a awesome story!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
"ab pappiya de mainu"ufff i'm 🤢 ur definitely gonna kill me with ur updates ,thank u so much sina,pleasure 2 have u back,after so long 🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hehe how much rusty Baldev's armor be...Veera's love will surely turn it into a shining one 😉😆😆 !!
Awesome as always and possessive, protective Baldev made it even more enticing !!

Thank you :-) Sina !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update 😊 but it ended so soon 😲i will miss this story and awesome ending 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great ending, like it when veera takes matters into her own hands and shows him what she wants.

great to have ur updates back.
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Posted: 11 years ago
aawww..luvd it sina..❤️❤️..u know i'm a fan..uh no..an addict to ur stories..😉😊
the ending was jus beautiful dear..espcly "ab pappiyan de mainu.." was very cute yet bold..huh..was missing ur stories a lot these days..bt no worries take ur own tym..🤗 n ur gender mix..plz continue that too😉..luv ya..waitin 4 d nxt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow sina your writing is so beautiful..man..i really love it cause i can feel the love and hard work for this OS you wrote!
Iam so glad that you are a veeba fan + a great writer!!

Okie now enough of your tareef..!! About the OS now :

I really loved when VEERA ask for a kiss!! It sounds so romantic!!
Sher to action wale scene tha!!
Baldeva!! I just love you too much!!
I wish to see him more serious in the show!!

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