VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113..

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

God... Tehsina Yuh are an amazing writer!!

Do keep writing more OS of VEEBA!!PLS!!

Love,

DazzilerDizzy!!

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

God...it was too hot to handle..*blush*
U r a rocking writer..i love ur each and every story..
Thanks for the pm..
Btwn i wanna let u know that i won't be online after sometime till the mid of march so plz pm me ur work at that time too.

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SHREYA

@riyasenak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

you have penned it down so nicely👏...reminded me of one of the intense scenes of chetan bhagat's novels...hats off to ur writing style👏👏...nd veera ko aakhir mein uska LADOO❤️mil hi gaya( hope u understood which ladoo😆)

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desikahani

@desikahani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Beautiful as always!!! So sensitive and naughty too :) look forward to more of your awesome work as always.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

so romantic.U r beyond our imagination.Veera is preg.My God!I wud luv 2 c it in d show too.Baldev is so caring.He wants a girl & she wants a boy.She wanted laddoo.wen he somehow stole it she wants sth else..his kisses.Scenes wer too hot.But wish I cud know whom did Veera deliver...Meera or sheru