Vmix & OS- VeeBa & RanJan- Vmix on Veeba on Page 13 - Page 7

Omg I hv just come across ur OSs nd hv bcum a downright fan of ur fabulous writings! 👏 U write so beautifully! 🤗 Nd u hv portrayed both da pairs so beautifully! 😛
I specially loved da Veeba part in da last OS..Nd Ranvi's attitude was fab too! Nd da dialogues were fantabulous! 👏
Plz PM me ur next updates..I dnt want to miss ur updates for anythng.. 😉
Nd yes it wasnt too long for me at all! If u cud write more I cud always read more! Thank u for dese awesome writings! 🤗

Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

Sunny ji, Sastriyakal!! Really glad to read ur comment.. Very happy to have a great friend like u on this Forum.. Ur comment brought a big smile on my face the other day ;) don't knw abt a full fledged FF but I ll try to experiment with this OS [Actually already doing it ;)]..Thanks again fr encouraging words..😳 😃

Sat Sri Akal sistaaa!!!

This was such an awesome update bud...love it! I'm so happy you're continuing it!!! And As I said just take your time and do as mch as you can...we all will eagerly wait for whAt happens next!


I love having a friend like you on here too!!! Talk to you soon gurrrl!

Oh and never apologize for the length...the longer the better!! Lol 😉

Its beautiful...
Thanks for pm...

oh the ranjan parts were breathtaking! Your writing very beautiful, very much like a romantic novel, and b/c of its clarity, it could very precicely see it before my eyes!👏

Wow its awesome! ! Loved the ending on veeba. Fantastic!

Can't wait anymore!continue ASAP!It's AMAZING!!!

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Wow I'm first!!

Amazing update!! Loved it!!

Can't w8 4 d nxt update!!!

Plz continue soon n thnx 4 d pm!!

Thanks dear.. Glad u liked it..😊

Will try to continue ths one..

Originally posted by: trisha17

Wow...its beautifulll.. 🤗.thanks a tn fr pm😛

Thanks Trsiha for liking it & dropping a comment🤗

Originally posted by: Asyalover

aww...Veeba and Ranjan...part were so cute...thanks 4 da pm...cont soon

Thanks a ton.. Aren't ths foursome are immensely adorable?😳😃

Thanks will try to cont it..