Originally posted by: tvlover92
OS1 - I LOVED the narration. It's like reading a book. Amazingly written! This was my fav: Reading her not-so-transparent' soul.. He was trying again to re-instate the-real-Gunjan-and-her-real-persona' that she had buried behind a false pretense for a very long time. She wasn't going to let him do that to her. She doesn't want to be that Gunjan' ever again.
Woohoo *Rubbing hands togthr* ;).. Its really so sweet of u... u commented on all 3 parts🤗 Glad u liked narration & emotions.., that was imp fr me... I wanted to portray Gunjan's emotional dilemma which she had been hiding for a long.. I wanted her to discover true love without much complications.. I really felt that it was high time for her to get control of her life & make decisions.. not to live under false pretense and make herself happy. I like to explore her in-depth hidden emotions.. Glad u liked narration of it..
OS2 - You were spot on with their characterization. ⭐️ Although, I would have expected Baldeva to be more amusing. 😆 This was funny: "Arey tenu nahi pata, Baldev" She asked innocently. "Tere photo di pappiya shapiya jo leni hai." 😆So happy to know u liked their characterization..
Yeah I gathered that later, hence I tried to make him more witty in d next part..Italics: And that's one of the most hilarious one liner that I'd used frm the show.. I jst lub it😳😆OS3 - Classic Baldev: "Oye assi sher hai.. Aur sher nu inni chhoti moti choto se dard nahi honda." 😎 Gundev relationship always make me fawn over them. 🤗Would like to see the developmennt in their bonding too 😊Ranvi ignoring Gunjan was ⭐️. 😆 I love royal ignore treatment. The conphusion that goes in the heroine's face makes me 😆. (I am a sadist. It cannot be helped. 😎😆). she had earned it..😆 So happy that I am getting opportunity to pen down my take on RanJan story..Veeba trip-and-catch. My favourittte fantasy! 😆That was 'Jiya Dhadak- Dhadak Jaye' moment fr me😳😆So glad you used it here!And the banter that followed! 🤣 About Ranjan, what I really love is how you describe Gunjan's feelings. She's unsure of what he means to her in a definitive term but she feelings something towards him. Brilliant. I liked the ending. Glare waaar of the Sher and Sherni! 😆
Both the couples are contrasting.. One is calm & easy going.. Another is firebrands spitfires..That's the beauty of their characterization.. Thanks a ton for ur encouraging Comment.. Keeps me going ;) They are spitfires and I try retain the essence of their character ..
Underline: It was ' Hum bhi hai Josh mai.. Baatain kar hosh mai.. yu na ankhain Dikha' wala glare
You write really well. The narration is the best. You use so much emotions... I love it. 👍🏼And so far as use of emotions are concerned, that is the thing I enjoy 'the most' in writing😆
Do send me a PM when you update the next one! Would love to read it! 😃Pleasure is all mine😃
I really appreciate each & every reader's efforts to post comment.. It helps to know whether story is going on the right track.. thanks🤗
