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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-15
Baldev went running to his jeep
Sweety; chalen jeejaji

Baldev looked at them angrily

Baldev; veera ko dekha he?

Sonali; nhi to..wo to aap k sath hi thi na...hum chalen..

He jumped into his seat.

Baldev; utro

Sonali; g?

Baldev; oye mene kaha utro sari ki sari..subah se dimag ki dahi kr rkhi he..oye mun mat dekho mera utro

They hopped off the jeep with shocked looks.

he drew away in speed.

Sonali; kya kr diya veera ne?

Baldev went in search of veera, he was unable to find her.
Ranvi was searching for her too. And they collided once again.

Baldev; oye chad mera rasta ranvi tere chaqar me hasti khelti veera murjha gai..ab pta nhi kahan gai

Ranvi; tu hat yahan se..me apni behen nu dhund levanga

Baldev got off his jeep and came to him...ranvi left his bike too

Baldev; badi mushqil se to wo theek hui thi khush hui thi tune aa k sara satya naaz krdita

Ranvi; e sab teri galti he tune pta nhi ki kia meri veerakhdi k saath wo mere khilaf ja k teri bv bangai

Baldev; han to us se ladta na beech bazar me meri izzat ka qn faluda kia?veera pe to tera bas kabhi chala nhi...kuch to lihaz kr le ab tu mera saala he

Ranvi; Baldev tu menu pta chalne de bas phr dekhna agle din hi veera wapas ajaygi mere pass

Baldev; oye tera dimag to nhi kharab hogya..shadi shuda behen nu maiqe wich bithayega?

Veera and ratan arrived at the spot

Ratan; e ki chal rha he ithe

Ranvi; veerakhdi..tu...bg wo

Ratan; mere pass ai thi ye..ja puttar tu ghar ja...aur ranvi maafi mang baldev se

Ranvi; bg me..me qn..

Ratan; maang maafi ranvi

Ranvi; pr bg

Baldev; o chado chaiji...mene isse bewaquf saala smjh k wese hi maaf kr diya he...ab ijazat ho to me apni voti nu ghr le jaon.

Ratan; han puttar jao tum log.

Veera hugged ranvi tightly; veerji...me...meri fiqr mat karo tussi..me bilkul theek hun.

they left.

Ratan; e ki he puttar..damad he wo hamara..bhari bazar me tune...esa koi krta he...agr tere papaji hte to tujhe kbhi maaf nhi krte..teri behen khush he tu qn pareshan he phr

Ranvi; nhi bg..aap nhi jaanti ho..mene dekha tha us ka dard..uski aankhon me

Ratan; wo dard apne veer ko uske pati se ladte dekhne ka tha

Ranvi; bg menu pta he wo aapki apni nhi isiliye aap esa keh rhe ho.
he left ratan speechless.

Baldev's jeep
Baldev; tere veerji se to shayad mera pichle janam ka koi hisaab chukta nhi hua

Veera; tune is janam me kon se kam kaand kiye hen

Baldev; ab rona band kre gi

Veera; royen mere dushman

Baldev; me nhi rota

she smiled...he melted

Veera; wo sari kahan hen?

Baldev; me wahin utar aya

Veera; acha kia..chichori kahin ki mere hi husband pe dore daal rhi theen kaminiyan

Baldev; oye hoye tujhe menu le kr inni jalan

Veera; jalan nhi e to..u...wo na bv hone ki waja se thodi insecurity he bs

Baldev; kya matlab
he wanted 2 hear more

Veera; are yar kese smjhaon tujhe

Baldev; smjha na

Veera; acha dekh tu mera husband he..to isiliye na..jese agr koi mujhse esi wesi baat kre to

Baldev; jaan le lunga uski koi aankh to uthaye

Veera; han han menu pta he..to wese hi me bhi

he was so touched..he wanted to do something bt couldn't.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Hoye hoye balle balle... Changa ji... Awesome yaar... It is so nice... Super se bhi upar waala update diya hai tumne aaj... Thanks a ton yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Amaaazing!!!

I love this story! Update soon please!:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
'he wanted to do something but couldnt'...haaaiii kuch karne do na ballu ko im soo expected aisa kuch hojaye..🤪..by the way nice dear...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
sonu yaar super update tha loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
you write well dear... keep it up :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Amazing read all in a go... Pm plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Part_16
It was almost midnight and veera was restless in her room.
Veera; veerji ka birthday he..pr lagta he iss bar mujhse pehle koi

aur wish kr dega unhe.ki karaan...baldev se kahun...nhi wo to phr

menu kal bhi nhi jane dega

she was moving here and there.

Bansuri entered her room.

Bansuri; ye kapde chat se utar k lai hun rakh le.

she nodded.Baldev entered the room too.

Baldev; bg acha hua tussi yahin milgaye..wo hum na kahin bahar

ja rhe hen

Bansuri; inni raat ko...kithe jana he puttar

Baldev; bs mera dil kr rha he sair pe jane ko

Bansuri; acha pr jaldi ajana.
she left

Baldev; chal

Veera had no other option so she followed him out.
He stopped his jeep somewhere..his friends were waiting there.

Bfriend1; e lo paaji
he threw his bike's keys.baldev handed the jeep's keys to him.

Baldev; chal veera..oye tum dono jeep le k na door kahin niqaliyo

Bfriend2; han tussi jao parjaiji ka dihaan rkhiyo paaji

Baldev; tu nhi kehta to mene to gira dena tha teri parjai nu..parjai

da chamcha.

He sat on the bike.veera was unable to understand anything

Baldev; beth na.
she sat behind him, they stopped infront of ranvi's gate.

Baldev; ja..jaldi se mil le

Veera; kya?
she was unable to believe

Baldev; jaldi ja k apne veer nu janam din di wadhaiyan de k a..bg

ko sb yaad rehta he isiliye inne jhamelon me padna pada..ja jaldi

Veera was so happy; tu bhi chal na

Baldev; nhi me ithe hi intizar karanga..ja 12 bajne me sirf 3 min

hen

veera ran inside.

Chaiji; oye kon he inni raat ko

Veera; moti chaiiji

Chaiji; o cheechdi tu..tu agai...humen laga tha k aaj hum ranvi nu

sb se pehle wadhaiyan denge

ratan saw her too

Veera; esa mene kabhi nhi hone dena moti chaiiiji

She hugged chaiji

Chaiji: haye meri cheechdi..kaan taras gaye the teri ye nathkat

baten sunne ko..pr ik gal das..us bansuri ne tenu aane kese diya?

Veera; wo baldev he na..wo menu chori chupe le aya..bahana bna

k

chaiji and ratan exchanged looks.

Veera; 12 bj gaye..me veerji k paas jaon

they both nodded. She ran upstairs.

Ratan; dekha chaiji khush he na hamari veera

Chaiji; han ratan puttar.. aaj us niqamme ne sabit kr diya k usme

bansuri k ilawa..kahin balwant bhi chupa he.

Veera entered ranvi's room.
Ranvi; veerakhdi tu ithe

Veera; happy birthday veerji
she hugged him tight

Ranvi; tu ithe kese ai veerakhdi

Veera; oho veerji..wo aap ka pyara sa damad he na..wo menu

chori chupe sab se jhooth bol kr ithe aap se milane waste laya he

Ranvi; baldev!
ranvi couldn't believe his ears

Veera; veerji..aur kitne damad hen aapke?acha ab me chalti

hun..bansuri chaiji nu agar zara bhi shak hogya na tu hum dono

ki lag jani he.

ranvi let her go.

Ranvi; e baldev kya sabit krna chahta he

Chaiji; o cheechdi kahan ja rhi he..beth na aur baldev nu bhi

andar bula le

Veera; baad me ayenge na..abhi jana hoga
she ran away.

Baldev was waiting by the side of the bike.

Veera came running and threw herself on him, hugging him so

tightly..as if she'll loose him if she let him go, he hugged her back

with the same affection and love, their heartbeats faster, their

breaths slow.

Baldev; chalen ab
he said sniffing from her hair

Veera; han.
they were back on the jeep.

Baldev; ye gadhe phone qn nhi utha rhe..pta nhi kahan honge

Veera; chal na tab tak hum ice cream kha k ate hen

Baldev; theek he.

Veera hugged him from the back and kissed him slightly on his

cheek.

Baldev; oye ki kr rhi he

Veera; tujhe nhi pta

Baldev; ghr pe hota hun na roz tere pass tab to tujhe mujh pr

pyaar nhi ata

Veera; meri marzi me apne hubby se kab aur kese pyaar krun

Baldev; tu nhi sudhregi

Veera; tu bhi mat sudhrna.

they ate ice-cream..actually shared one.his friends arrived there

and they got their jeep back.

they were welcomed by balwant's angry face

Balwant; oye nalaiq..kithe le gaya tha inni raat nu isse

Veera; wo tayagi

Balwant; tu chup kr puttar..upar ja tu

veera looked at baldev..he gestured her to go.
She went straight up..she was able to hear balwant scold baldev

& for the 1st time he didn't answer back..he kept quiet and

listened.
Veera felt really bad and as soon as balwant left she went to him

and said
Veera; tayaji..wo mere waste

Balwant; o puttar menu pta he..aj ranvi da janamdin he..isiliye wo

tenu us se milwane le gaya si

Veera; to phr aap ne inna danta qn use

Balwant; o me to e dekhan waste kita k...maloom to ho menu k

mera nalaiq putar meri bahu k liye kya kya seh skta he

she smiled

Balwant; use mat batana puttar

Veera; nhi btaongi.
she left.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
aww soo gud veeba ka romantic outing chahe woh ranvi birthday ka bahana...baldev itna sweet hai ranvi ka bd yaad rakha aur veera ko le gaya soo cute...❤️nice work...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
han sana wo super sweet he i don't know why pr aksar aise hi hero mujhe sweet lagte hen jo k actual me sweet hote nhi...like jalal in jodha akbar ballu...sujal in the starting epis of kahin to hoga...i think i like negativity...am so crazy

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