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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: overactor

han sana wo super sweet he i don't know why pr aksar aise hi hero mujhe sweet lagte hen jo k actual me sweet hote nhi...like jalal in jodha akbar ballu...sujal in the starting epis of kahin to hoga...i think i like negativity...am so crazy



han yaar thats true most of us like this type of charecter...😛 not black,not white...in middle grey colour...😆 i soo like this grey shade characters...they are so difficult to understand nd intresting to handdle...😳 im soo in baldev dreams nd craving for more nd more os on veeba thanks to u people..to write the wonderful stories..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
kitna sweet hein baldev wow beautiful update sonu and u reminded me of my fav hero sujal yaar i loved him in KTH oh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
veera kissed him hayee par sare initiative veera hi legi kya ballu kuch nhi karega
nice part continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: SONAL30

veera kissed him hayee par sare initiative veera hi legi kya ballu kuch nhi karega
nice part continue soon

She s able to express he's not but well a surprise is cumng in d upcoming parts
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Both the parts are awesome... Jaldi se VeeBa ko close karo yaar ... Baldev is very sweet yaar ... He done for Veera that was sweet ... Jaldi update karne ka re baba.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Awesome!!! You write such cute scenarios...I love How Baldev is here!

Can't wait to see what happens next...please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
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Balwant; o bansuri g bachon ki shaadi ko inne din hogaye hen..inne kuch din chuti deni chahiye..o ki kenden hen

Gunjan; honeymoon

Balwant; han han wahi bhej den inne?

Bansuri; surpunch g..aap bhul gaye shayad humen mere maiqe jana he

veera heard this

Balwant; are haan..to hum chale jayenge..in dono ko kahin aur bhej dete hen

Veera; nhi nhi tayagi hum sb kese ja skte hen..hum yahin ruk jate hen aap log jao

Gunjan smiled.

Gunjan; hum ajayen phr inhe bhej denge papaji

balwant; han e sahi he.
balwant bansuri and gunjan left.
Veera; meri saasu maa chali gai yahooo!!!!
she started dancing wildly.

Baldev; oye ki kr rhi he

Veera; teri bg gai..isiliye naach rhi hun

Baldev; menu nhi pta tha k tu meri bg se inni tang he

Veera; are wo to hr bahu hti he apni saas se

Baldev; pr tujhe mujhse kon bachayega?
he came close to her

Veera; tujhse bachna kisko he.
she pushed him.
Veera; ja menu bht kaam he teri bg gai he tu to yahin he na.

Baldev; kaam nu chad na veera

Veera; oye chal bhag yahan se
he held her hand

Veera; menu koi bachao iss jungli se

and then gunjan came back.baldev left her instantaneously
veera started laughing

Gunjan; sirf me hi hun veerji..bg aur papaji to gaye

veera was still laughing

baldev; to tu qn agi wapas

Gunjan; me nhi ja pai bs

baldev; tu na bachpan se meri dushman he

veera; oye wo to me hun..gunjan didi thodi
he left in anger.

Gunjan; bechare veerji

Veera; chalo ab aap mera mun ki dekh rhi ho jaldi jao na aap bhi wrna wo phr ajayega

Gunjan; han me chalti hun
..

Baldev; (in full anger) Gunjan kithe he

Veera; menu ki pta

Baldev; teri batteesi bta rhi he tujhe sab pta he

Veera; nhi baldev menu kuch nhi pta

he caught her arm as he always does

Baldev; ki chal raha he ranvi aur gunjan k beech?
he said in a bitter tone between his teeth

Veera;(still teasing) wahi jo tere aur mere beech chal rha he

he lost it now, he left her and marched towards the door in full anger

Veera; oye ruk baldev

Baldev; me ranvi ko nhi chodunga

Veera; are sun to..(she caught his hand) dekh tu qn kabab me haddi ban rha he

baldev; oye tu pagal to nhi hogai..wo meri behen he

veera; tujhe yaad agaya baldev..mubarkan

baldev; dekh tu is me mat pad

veera; qn na padun mere veerji ko kabhi to khush rehne de tu..pehle mujhe un se cheen lia ab unke pyaar ko to na cheen

baldev; pyar.hahahaha...ranvi..aur pyar...mazak kr rhi he...tere aage use kuch aur dikhta bhi he...pyar..huh!

veera; oye mere veerji ka dil na bht wada he...usme bht se logon k liye jaga he..teri trh nhi chota sa jis me teri bg k ilawa kisi ko jaga nhi milti

baldev; kya bakwas kr rhi he tu..mere dil me sirf meri bg nhi tu bhi to..

oops!he realised what he was about to say..and this was not the time for it

veera was blushing as she knew what was in his mind

baldev; me tere veerji ko nhi chodunga

veera stood in front of him with wide open arms

veera; agr tu un k beech aya to me tenu chad k chali jaongi

baldev; kya?

veera; han tu apni behen ko ghr pe rkhna aur me apne veerji k paas rahungi...rota rehna phr..jese pehle bg bg krta tha..ab veera veera krna

baldev; veera? tu..menu
he was in so much pain..but why..wasn't she forced to be with him he thought...bt what if she really left..no he forced this thought out of his mind

baldev; wo ranvi mujhse badla le rha he aur kuch nhi...baad me dhamkiyan de ga k meri veera nu kuch kaha to teri gunjan

veera; oye! apni tarah ka smjh rkha he ki mere veerji nu..wo ese nhi hen aur wese bhi tujhe kab se hone lagi gunjan didi ki inni fiqr?

baldev; poore pind me use meri hi behen mili thi

veera; tujhe bhi to me hi mili thi

baldev; hamari baat aur he

veera; baat to un dono ki aur he..wo to na bachpan k love birds hen...inne sone lagte hen saath..

baldev; veera tu

veera; mene kuch nhi sunna bas tu ja andar wrna me bahar chali jaongi..bada aya villain banne wala

he made that face..(which he always makes when he loses in front of her) she raised her eyebrows in the same way as she does

veera; gunjan didi meri bhabhi bane gi..o bale bale o bale bale
she started dancing.

baldev made a face and went inside.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Oye!! That was super fast:))) thank you!!!
Want to make it double or nothing? Lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
wooow
i liked it
it was superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaii ranvi gunjan ka shaadi hone wala hai oye balle balle balle balle...😆
veeba akele ghar pe...wow...nice work yaar...👍🏼

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