A veeba story part 50 (last part)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was very early in the morning when suddenly Baldev wokeup and realized he was asleep on his couch. He had been thinking all night and fell asleep in his thoughts
"E mene pehle qn nhi socha. Ab pata chalega ranveera nu k yahan kis ki chalti he"
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Veera was roaming with Gunjan in the markets of pritampura when she was spotted by Baldev's friends.
Baldev's friend1: "O parjaijee. ese akele na phiro praajee nu bura lag jayega"
gunjan: o papiton kedi parjai te kede praajee di gal kar rhe ho?
Bfriend2:Gunjan jee sade to ek hi prajee hen aapke veerjee baldev prajee
Gunjan:wo to theek e pr phr e parjai kon he?Jahan tk menu pta he veerjee abhi tk to kisi kudi se nhi pate
Bfriend1: o gunjan jee sadi parjai kaun he ye naam leke k btaya to prajee ne chitar marne hen tuanu dikha dete hen

veera and gunjan stared at them blanky wen thy walked towards them and suddenly both of thm bowed infront of veera
bfriend2: parjaijee aashirwaad do u khende hen na k bhabhi maa saman hti he.
bth veera nd gunjan were shocked to hear this


aage ki kahani is pe reviews k baad 2 b continued

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hain Baldev is upto something... Why his friends call Veera Bhabi ... Hmmm interesting nice start ... Plz update soon :)
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will update soon. yeah a little i hv many punjabi frnds and my kaam wali used to b punjabi
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Part-2
Baldev was alone in his so called "adda" when veera slammed

open the door
veera: oye baldev e ki kehnde phir rhe hen tere chamche?

baldev: oye veera tameez se baat kr mere naal warna bht

pachtayegi

veera:bakwas bnd rkh e ho ki rha he wo menu parjai kis waste

bol rhe hen

baldev: wo log menu bhai smjhte hen to meri voti unki parjai hui

na

veera: (in a loud angry voice) baldev! khabardar mere saamne to

ye bakwas kr li lekin bhul k bhi veerjee k saamne esa mat boliyo.

mazak ki shararat ki bhi ek had hti he

baldev: karunga ki krlega tera veer apne jeejaji ko maar k behen

nu vidwa kre ga ki..(he lauged)

veera:baldev!(she raised her hand to slap him but he got hold of

it and pulled her close moving her hand to her back)

baldev: bht phudak li tu bht badash krliya tere veer ko aur tere

ko pr ab bus ab tu meri...baldev balwant singh ki voti

banegi...meri biwi banegi aur tb tujhe smjh ayega k me cheez kya

hun

veera: tu pagal to nhi hogya...me aur shaadi wo bhi tujhse

never!!!!
baldev: haha kuch der ki baat he veera phr tu mere kadmon me

shaadi ki bheekh mang rhi hogi aur baldev bht dayalu he teri

baat sun lega.
Edited by overactor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow next part tou very quick yaar ... And bhai yeh Baldev ko ki ho giya hai yaar ... Why he is doing all this and whats his plan and why she will get marry to him ... U r making very much suspense yaar .. Update next part soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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s agree with nicky update next part today only😊 yeh kya suspense hein😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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suspense se to maza ata he aage aage dekho hta he kya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Acha likha hai...lag raha tha ki show ka script pad rahi thi...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have no words to say 😛
Different concept, not in a bad way, in a good way
Shockingly I love this Baldev and I so want to know what will happen next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice yaar aur ye itni chota kyun hai...kuch long update dena...by the way its intresting continue soon...👍🏼

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