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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intersting ... But poor Veera ... Kaisi ban gayi hai wo... But that's gud ke Baldev took her side ... Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-10
2 days had passed since the wedding and veera was still a stone both physically and mentally..she hardly talked to any1.

Bansuri from downstairs; o veera..cheti a teri bg milne waste ai hen

suddenly some life appeared in a stoned veera
veera; bg ai hen

she went running downstairs.she was out of control but as soon as she saw her she stopped and was frozen unable to move forward. Ratan caught sight of her and opened her arms wide open. Veera ran into her arms and they shared a hug..something veera had never experienced.it brought tears in both of their eyes

bansuri; tussi galan karo me zara pados wich ja rhi hun

bansuri left.ratan wiped veera's tears
ratan; kesi he tu puttar

veera; me theek hun bg aap btao na veerji kese he, naraz hen na abhi tk aur chaiji

ratan; theek hen tenu bht yaad krte hen..aur ranvi naraz nhi bs bht pareshan he

veera; chalo bg mere kamre me chalo tussi

veera pulled her upstairs and into her room.

veera; ao bg ithe baitho.

they both sat on the bed

ratan; veera ye kamre me tu

veera; kamre nu chado bg iss kamre me na meri aur uski alag alag side hen..aur hum dono sirf ye palang aur wo bathroom he share krte hen.

ratan; qn veera

veera; ab ki karaan bg cupboard to share ho nhi skta wo uska cupboard dekh rhi hen aap..bahar se kitna acha lag rha he aur andar se...kholte hi sab kuch bande k upar gir jaye..wo to zara sa kholta he andar haath gusata he jo haath laga wahi pehen leta he...aur me aapnu ki bataon bg kal to usne mera tooth brush istimaal kr lia...wo to acha hua mere paas dusra tha..(veera went on..she was so happy..she felt alive aftr so many days)

ratan; veera...me...wo

veera; ki hoya bg

ratan; ye poochna to fazool hoga k tu khush he k nhi...me to sb janti hi hun...

*flashback*
veera crying in her room talking to the photo of sampooran.
veera; papaji me sahi kr rhi hun na...agar mene esa nhi kiya to aapka sapna..hamara ghar sb kuch khtam hojaye ga

ratan heard everything and forced veera to tell her everything which she did
veera; bg aap nu meri son..aap kisi ko kuch nhi btaogi

ratan; nhi puttar...aaj tu ne meri beti hone ka farz ada kr dia
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veera; bg me

ratan; dekh puttar...menu ek gal yaad ai...jab baldev peda hua tha tab sarpanch ji ne balwant bhai sahab ko kaha tha k agr hamari koi beti hui to uski shadi zarur baldev se karayenge.

veera was shocked

ratan; ek tarah se tu ne apne papaji k do sapno ka maan rkha he to ab..puttar viyah to tera hogya he...ab kuch nhi ho skta to ab ye tujh pe he k tu kese apne aap ko khush krti he..aurat me bht taakat hti he usko hr museebat ka saamna krna hi padta he aur tujhe bhi krna hoga...is ghr nu baldev nu apnana hoga..yehi teri qismat he

she stood up and went to baldev's cupboard.
ratan; aur iski shuruwat tujhe yahin se krni hogi.
ratan pulled the doors of the cupboard and opened it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
thanks for pm
aur story toh intresting hota jarahe ji
update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Nice yaar but feeling bad for veera
Waiting for veeba scenes
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
thank u :)
waiting for the next part.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Nice again... Hmm tou ab Veera Baldev ko sudharegi ... Waiting-2 for next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
nice ya waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part-11
Bansuri; baldev ja k dekh us veera ne ki haal bna rkha he tere kamre ka

baldev; ki hoya bg?

bansuri; tu ja dekh

baldev went upstairs nd was shocked as he opened the door of his room
veera was wearing a mask, her duppata tied on her waist and in her hands was the vaccum cleaner

baldev; oye ye sb ki kr rhi he

veera; oye baldev tune apni ankhen bech di kisi ko? dikai nhi de rha safai kr rhi hun

baldev's heart skipped a beat after hearing her answer.she was back and this relieved his pain that was strange to him

baldev; pr qn?

veera; dekh baldev..ye ab mera bhi kamra he aur menu bhi apni cheezen ithe rkhni hen to ese kamre me na me nhi reh skti mera ina sara saman kya tere sir pe rkhti. Isiliye mene hamara cupboard bhi saaf kr diya he aur apna sb saaman bhi us me jama diya he

baldev; oye teri himmat kese hui meri cheezon ko haath lagane ki

veera; qn oye ..bv hun teri inna sa bhi haq nhi mera..tu to mujh pe bada haq jamata phirta he to me qn piche hatun?

baldev's heart beat became fast as he heard her

veera; dekh ab tu na mujhpe ek ehsan kr de..tujhe jo chahiye ho na kudta,jhoote moze, tu mujhe se maanglio..mere cupboard nu bs phelana nhi

baldev; muft ki nokrani kis ko buri lagti he

veera; oye tameez se baat kr is pind k surpanch ki bahu hun me

baldev; han g qn nhi g

veera; bathroom me chal

baldev;ki?
veera; are chal na

she pulled him inside.he was shocked and afraid

baldev;oye ki kr rhi he

veera picked up two tooth brushes

veera; ye dekh ye wala mera he aur ye wala tera to ab tu mera mat isitimal krna smjha..aur ye sabun mera aur ye tera..ye shampoo

baldev; han han smjh gaya gulabi sb tera aur baqi mera

veera; badi jaldi smjh gaya baldev.

just then she heard bansuri shouting her name.

veera; hat pare chaiji menu bula rhi hen

she went away

baldev; subah to e but bani bethi thi..e achanak ki hoya enu

bansuri; oye veera ki kr rhi he tu

veera; baldev ko kuch smjha rhi thi

bansuri; o mene ki kaha tha tere se

veera; menu yaad he chaiji..pr ek gal daso..aapki bachpan ki saheli ka naam ki tha

bansuri;sheela

veera; farz karo balwant tayaji ki jaga sheela hoti to aap unhe kya keh k bulati

bansuri; e ki keh rhi he..veera tu na

veera; meri pyari chaiji..baldev ko bura nhi lag rha to aap qn bura maan rhi ho..wese bhi wo izzat k laiq nhi

bansuri; veera tu

baldev; are chodo isse bg..kutte ki dum na kabhi seedhi nhi hti

veera; han na jabhi to tu itna teda he... chaiji agr aap ko koi kaam nhi to me jaon..menu abhi bht safai krni he

bansuri; han ja.
veera left

bansuri; pta nhi ratan ne kya patti padha di isse
bansuri went away

baldev; acha to sasu maa lai hen meri veera nu wapas
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oye hoye meri Veera .. Wah g Wah Baldev g ka Kya Dialouge tha... That's really very sweet of him ... Thanks for the pm and update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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again, an awesome update
Plzzz continue soon

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