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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: overactor

bas agle part me suspense khule ga

toh will u update it today only
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shadi ho gayi!!! Wow SR VeeBa ki ... But I can smell something fishy ... Update soon... Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok guys its time for the big suspense



Part_8
Veera sat on the sofa staring blankly outside the window. It was

her first day in her 'sasural'. She was not in her usual attire,

rather she wore a punjabi suit, with jewellery,and most

importantly sindoor in her maag. The past few days had

destroyed her life completely and she had nothing left not even

her veerji.
*FLASH-BACK*
Veera was in Baldev's adda.
Baldev: dekh gaur se dekh badi padhi likhi banti he na to padh

ab aur smjh k tune kya khoya he

veera had some papers in her hands and was reading them with

shocked wide open eyes

Baldev: haan sahi smjh rhi he tu..lut gaya tera veer..surjeet singh

k haaton aur ab tere kheton samait tera ghr bhi gaya sadak pe

agaya tera khaandan aur saath me tu.

veera just kept quiet she was unable to respond..

Baldev; aur ye sb kis k liye...sirf tere liye..tu jo uski sagi behen bhi

nhi

Veera turned to face him, her eyes filled with tears
Veera: baldev! (she shouted)

Baldev: chilla mat mujh pe yaqeen nhi to ja pooch apni bg se.
me yahin tera intizar krunga shaam ko agr tu apne papaji k

sapne unke khait aur apna ghr bachana chahti he to ajana..aur

han baldev waadeka pakka he agr mene kaha he to me karza

zarur utarunga balqe mene to baat bhi krli he surjeet singh se

Veera went straight to ratan's room to find any evidence that

proved baldev wrong but what she found was a diary..ratan's

diary. Veera took it and read it from a-z.
She was shattered.
Veera; meri bg...mere veerji...koi mera nhi...qn (she broke down

and cried) qn papaji qn chad k chalegaye aap humen.
She kept crying.
Veera; ab bs aur nhi roungi me...meri bg aur veerji ne mere liye

bht dukh sahe hen ab bs...ab hr dukh me sahungi.
She picked up her phone and called Baldev
Veera: me a rhi hun...mgr iski khabar kisi ko nhi padni chahiye.

************
Veera wiped her tears as she heard the crack of the door. Baldev

came out of the washroom and threw his towel that landed on

veera.He did it on purpose to start a fight. But veera simply

stood up and hanged the towel on the chair and left the room.
This made baldev restless, he wanted to hurt her and he did but

now why the pain?why seeing her like this made him

uncomfortable, he tried to ignore the thought and went

downstairs.

Ranvi's house.
Ratan came to ranvi's room.

Ratan; kuch kha le putar tune kal se kuch nhi khaya

Ranvi; menu bhook nhi he bg

Ratan; veera ne apni khushi se kiya he ye sb wo khush hi hogi tu

qn apna g jala rha he

Ranvi; nhi bg me apni veera nu janda..wo mujhse zarur kuch

chupa rhi he aur ye baat mujhe khaye ja rhi he bg...esa ho hi nhi

sakta k use achanak baldev se pyar hojaye...aur agr hta bhi to wo

menu zarur batati

Ratan: puttar tu us se ja k baat kr k dekhna

ranvi; nhi bg me uske ghr me tb tk kadam nhi rakhanga jb tk

menu sachai pta nhi chal jati

he left the room in anger.

Ratan; ab kese btaon tenu puttar k teri behen ne tere waste khud

ko kurban kr dia he.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
acha hein its nice to c veera sacrificing for ranvi
nice update👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
awesome update
Finally know the suspence
Plzzz continue soon, really loving your story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Hmm finally the cat is out ... So yeh suspense tha... Aww poor Veera she is doing for her family ... But aww Baldev is feeling bad for Veera ... The story is becoming more intersting day by day ... Plz update it soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awesome update!!! Plzzz update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Part-9
Baldev's house
Bansuri; oye veera kithe mar gai...(in a loud voice)ye tera maaiqa nhi sasural he...yahan jaldi uthna padta he

Veera came running.
Veera; hanji chaiji

Bansuri; chaiji nhi..ab bg bol menu.
veera nodded.
Bansuri; acha baldev kithe he

Veera; wo baldev na.

Bansuri; o ho! ab se tu na uski izzat krna seekh veera..uska naam na lena aaj k baad

veera was shocked bt what could she do

veera; g cha..i mean bg

Bansuri; chal ab sb k liye nashta bna aur uske baad mere naal bazaar chalna...nhi nhi us se pehle teri moo dikhai he

Veera kept listening to her...Baldev saw this

Baldev to himself; enu ho ki gya he chup chap sb kaha maan rhi he wo bhi meri bg ka.

@ breakfast veera served baldev and baldev was about to take a bite of his paratha wen

bansuri; oye ruk..putar pehle enu chakha..pta nhi ki milaya hoga isne

Balwant; o bansuri g..ki gal kr rhe ho..o esa kya milayegi

bansuri; o g twanu kuch nhi pta.khila na baldev

baldev moved his hand towards veera's mouth.she ate it quietly.

Bansuri; han putar ab kha le tu.

Gunjan; vah veera tune to kamal kr diya bade change parathe banaye hen

balwant; han puttar bht change hen.ye le shagun..bahu ki pehli rasoi khai he na..rkh le

bansuri; aap bhi na chane k jhaad pe na chadaho isse...pehle hi ranvi ne bht bigad k rkha tha isse

baldev; bs karo bg subah subah shuru hojande ho tussi...me ja rhian

bansuri; o puttar nashta to pura kr le..dekha apne iske beqaar parathon ne mere putar ka mizaaj khrab kr diya

balwant made a face.

baldev; o nhi bg paratha to acha tha pr apki baten zeher lag rhi thi menu

bansuri; acha he baldev puttar..bv k ate hi na tu apni bg nu bhool gaya

baldev; o bg ki keh rhe ho aap hi subah subah shuru hogaye me ki karaan aaj uska pehla din he aaj to chado onu.

balwant; pehli baar sahi gal ki he is gadhe ne

gunjan; bg aap ki na huqumat k din gaye ab

balwant; shi keh rhi he gunjan puttar.

balwant and gunjan laughed, bansuri pulled a long face..baldev looked at veera..she was not smiling..she was standing like a stone with no expressions on her face.

keep connected guys soon veera will b back in action
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awesome!!!...eagerly waiting for next chapter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
wow yaar nice part continue soon and thanks for the pm

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