A veeba story part 50 (last part) - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much yr..love u all.
ok veeba r having this baby...name suggestons for both boy and girl

🤗 from ballu to all..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mubarka ji mubarkan...
Nice update...
Pm plzzz...
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Part_39

They were heading back.

Veera; pehle hum veerji ko bateyen ge yaad he tune waada kiya tha un se

Baldev; haan haan..wahin chal rha hun..pehla haq anokhi naani ka..😆

she smiled.😊

They reached Ranvi's house.

Baldev; chal bta

Veera; me? oye waada tune kiya tha..tu btayega..😳

Baldev; me kese..nhi nhi..tu btayegi

Veera; oye pagal he ki tu? me kese btaongi..menu sharm ati he

they were on the door..Ranvi came running.

Ranvi; are veerakhdi..Baldev..tum dono inni raat ko

Chaiji; o cheechdi ki hoya😕

Baldev; o ranveere..andar ane dega..aur veera nu bitha jaldi se wo khadi nhi ho skti.

Ranvi; qn ki hoya..veerakhdi bimaar he ki?
ranvi got her settled on the cot where chaiji sat...Veera gestured with her eyes to Baldev.

Baldev; o Ranveere..wo na dar as sal..wo gal e hui k.

Gunjan saw them and came running.

Gunjan; pr aap dono ithe kese..
she was shocked 😲as she knew about the surprise.

Baldev; han gunjan wo..( he was unable to find the correct words)
ratan came too.

Baldev; uh..dekh ranveere..tu na..tu anokhi nani..mera matlab..tu mama bane wala he..aur me papaji😳

she said in one breath..every1 was shocked.😲

Ranvi; tu..tu such keh rha he baldev?

baldev nodded hesitantly.

Chaiji..hugged veera..gunjan hugged baldev

Ratan; mubarak ho puttar..me abhi mithai..kuch meetha banati hun
ratan rushed towards the kitchen.
Veera was all shy..Ranvi hugged her and kissed her forehead. Then he hugged baldev..baldev made a funny face.

Chaiji; haye meri cheechdi..o puttar tune balwant aur bansuri ko btaya he?

Baldev; nhi ye veera apne veer ko batana chahti thi sb se pehle..

Chaiji; ranvi phone mila bansuri ko..

Baldev dialled it and gave to Chaiji..bansuri picked up

Bansuri; bol puttar..tu theek he na

Chaiji; o tera puttar nhi me hun..hone wali dadi maa

Bansuri; chaiji aap...ki kahiya tussi..me..me dadi?

Chaiji; sahi suna tune bansuri

Bansuri; o tuwade mun which ghee shaqar chaiji..veera kithe he..aur baldev..me kal hi wapas ati hun..uska khayal rkhiyega..me surpanch jee nu batati hun.

Chaiji; han han jaldi se bata..

she handed the phone back.

Gunjan; oye me to kinni ziada khush hun..oye veera ab me..bua banungi..aur mami..aur anokha nana..hahaha

Baldev; gunjan tu bas anokha nana hi baniyo...

Gunjan; veerji!!

Ratan returned wih kheer and served every1 she hugged veera and

Ratan; dekh puttar apna bht khayal rkhna..bhaga dodi ab bilkul band..bas aram krna..aur kuch khana pina ho to menu bolna me bna k le aongi..

Baldev was telling his friends on the phone.

Ranvi fed veera with his hands.His eyes were filled with tears.

Veera; veerji..aap

Ranvi; are ye to khushi k aansu hen pagli..

just then they heard some dhol music playing and entered baldev's friends dancing. They brought garlands and put them n baldev.

Bfriend1; o mubarkan prajee. Mubarkan parjai.
he placed a crown on veera's head.🥳

Bfriend2; mubarkan aap sb nu.o mithai khao.

they distributed sweets.

Chaiji; jb tk bansuri aye..tum dono yahin ruk jao...baldev tu akela nhi sambhal payega

Baldev; tussi bilkul shi keh rhe ho moti chaiji..ik veera nhi sambhalti mujhse..

Ratan; me in k liye neeche wala kamra saaf kr deti hun

Veera; neeche wala qn? mera kamra he na

Chaiji; o cheechdi..tujhe na seedhiyon se door rkhna he smjhi

Veera; g moti chaiji..

they all kept celebrating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
haye haye pg 50 im so happy 😃
hey girls name suggestions for veeba children plx

and i don't know if this would ever end like this so..i'l end this 1 after the baby and surjeet's end..but dnt worry il cum up with more..and more ye story kuch ziada hi cute hogai he i think.
Edited by overactor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so cute... hugs free mein baantoongi mein... Hoy hoye balle balle...
Ek aur update de dena yaar... Aaj zyaada mangta hai celebration... Hum logon ka chotta sher ya sherni is coming...

Loved d chamchas... u so love dem like Ballu na...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monumolu

so cute... hugs free mein baantoongi mein... Hoy hoye balle balle...

Ek aur update de dena yaar... Aaj zyaada mangta hai celebration... Hum logon ka chotta sher ya sherni is coming...

Loved d chamchas... u so love dem like Ballu na...

haha yr update abhi likhi nhi 😭
yeah love chamchas but not as much as i love my ballu..but i love them in diff way haha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ladki names from my side:
Vidhi - Vishal and Di ka real name mix or could be interpreted as Veera ka Vi and Dev ka Di

Vedha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monumolu

Ladki names from my side:

Vidhi - Vishal and Di ka real name mix or could be interpreted as Veera ka Vi and Dev ka Di

Vedha

gr8 but i want more
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok ok i have decided the name...but u guys keep suggesting i might change
and i don't know if this would ever end like this so..i'l end this 1 after the baby and surjeet's end..but dnt worry il cum up with more..and more ye story kuch ziada hi cute hogai he i think.
Edited by overactor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats 4 reaching 50 pg's!!
Lovely update!!!

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