VeeBa- ~Manmarziyan~ OS2-part-3 UPDATED(15) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Very nycly written.
Too B realy honest i am nt a veera fan but aapki story bohot pyari...
very sweet.
U write well, keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
awesome update.
veera drunk 🤣
baldev taking care
kash aisa hota!!!!!
update soon.
thanx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thankyou so much all of you for such wonderful comments... next part is coming up soon, it's typed, just need to format it :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS-2
Part-2
( veera woke up in her room with gunjan sitting next to her. She was confused)
Veera- gujan didi?😕😕
Gunjan- veera tu na kal pee ke talli ho gyi thi poori ...😆
Veera- kiii??? 😲😲
Gunjan- haan, vo toh veer jee aur maine sab sambhaal liya varna tu toh jaati aaj...😆

Veera- baap re..!!! 😕 meraa sarr!!!!
Gunjan- ye neebu ka paani pee le... Mai thodi der me aati hoon theek hai... :) aur chaijee ko tere uthne se pehle maine gurudwaare bhej diya hai ...😆

( gunjan leaves)

( veera was on her bed trying to remember wht hpnd but in vain)

"kaisi hai tu?" a voice called and veera turned back to find baldev.
( her mind showed her glimpse of what had happened, baldev was so close but veera was confused)

Veera- mai theek hoon baldevv... Aur...

Baldev- haan abb shukriyaa kehen di zaroorat nai hai... Aur.. Aur kuch yaad toh nai hai na tujhe?😉
Veera- matlab???😲😲😲.
Baldev- matlab ( with a smirk😉) ... Kal raat tu toh hoss me thi nahi... Toh ...😆
Veera- t..toh???😡
(baldev approaches her)
Baldev- kyu? Darr gayi?😉

Veera- dekh sade huye daal,... Mera dimaag kharaab hai vaise bhi... Tu seedhe seedhe baat kar varna zor ka chata naa diya maine na toh mera naam veera nai..!!😡😡

Baldev ( going closer, as she is moving back) - matlab tu mujhse nai darti... Hmmm?😳😉
Veera- jee nahi.🥱
Baldev- sach me?😉
Veera- haan.😕

( baldev gets closer and closer and closer and finally the wall stops veera from moving further back and baldev is standing inches away from her smirking)

Veera- tenu ki lagta hai? Mai darr jaaongi tere ye sab karne se?😡😕
Baldev- haan...😉
Veera- nahi...😡
Baldev-( pinning her to the wall) abb??😳
Veera- (sigh) nahi baldevv.😕
Baldev(getting closer) - abb?☺️
Veera- nahiii!!!😕😕😕.
( she hits his foot with hers and runs away)

Baldev😆😆- aaj ke aaj tujhe daraa na diya na toh mera naam bhi baldev nahi...😈

(evening, veera realizes that gunjan left her purse in her room so she goes to return it to her)

Bansuri- gunjann.??.. Pata nahi baldev ka kamra theek karne bheja tha... kamre me hogi... Jaake dekh le.

(veera goes up but finds no-one in the room.)
( the room is empty. So she waits there for gunjan.)

(to pass time she looks out if the window)
{ok girlzzz be ready for extream hotness😆😉😳 }

( baldev comes out of the bathroom, he is ONLY in his jeans, {yah shirtless NOT EVEN his vest ☺️, sorry fr being so naughty but blame it on baldev being so irresistible 😆😳} )
( he has a small towel around his neck, his muscular body is creating a strong aura {i donno what am i writing yaar just imagine him shirtless and feel😳😳☺️..huh *sighs*})
( he looks at veera and smirks)
Baldev- aa gayi tu?😊
Veera(turning back to see him) - 😲😲 baldevv tu?😲😲.
( veera was shocked to see him, that too shirtless, that too having such a hot muscular body😳)

Veera- besharam.😡
Baldev- besharam mai hoon ya tu? Mere kamre wich tu ghusi baithi hai na... Haan??😉

(veera feels shy and puts gunjan's purse on the bed and starts to leave. BUT baldev stops her from going and instead closes the door and pins her against the door)

Veera-(unable to do eye contact) eh ki karr raha bai badtameez!!!😕😕

Baldev- kyu? Darr gayi???😉
Veera- kisne kaha????😡
Baldev- teri aankho ne.😉
Veera- chup reh samjha.😕

(baldev locks the door from top)
Veera(widening her eyes😲)- jaane de mainu baldevv... Tu jaanta nai hai mai kuch bhi karr sakti hoon.😕

Baldev- toh karr jo karr sakti hai...😆

( baldev loosens his grip but veera isn't tall enough to open the lock on top)

( baldev smirks, veera runs and goes near the window)
Veera- agar tune nahi khola darvaaza toh mai kood jaaongi baldevv...😕
Baldev- kood jaa...😆
Veera- mai nai darti samjha...😡
Mai kood rahi hoon.😡

( veera turns around and looks down)

Baldev- abb bhi vakt hai veera... Keh de ki tujhe mujhse darr lagta hai varnaa...
Veera- nahi nahi nahi... Nahi lagta mujhe darr...

( baldev goes close to her, veera has her back towards baldev but she can feel him behind her. She feels nervous for the first time)

(baldev wraps one of his muscular and strong exposed hands around veera) {ya ya just like there was a scene in the film "Fanaa" 😳}

(veera's heart skipped a beat)
Veera- baldevvv!!!!☺️
Baldev(brushing her hairs from his lips) - abb darr lag raha hai mujhse?😳

( with all her exploding emotions, nervousness etc. She manages to say-"nahi" with a whisper.)

( baldev turns her around by her waist, and wraps her arms around her waist, he pulls her close)
Baldev- abb????☺️
Veera- n...nahiii...😳😕
(baldev pins her to the wall and leans ahead...)
Baldev- ab?☺️
(veera sighs and is unable
To speak)
(baldev's lips now almost touches hers when she hears some1 coming up the stairs)

(she pushes him back and tries to run when baldev holds her hands)
Veera(sighing heaviliy) - chadd de mainu baldevv... Koi aa raha hai...
Baldev- abb?😉
Veera- haan haan haan!!!! (she says with a little smile and shyness 😳)

( baldev smiles and leaves her, he opens the door and veera runs back all blushing)
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ok done guyz... how was it? i know it was weird but... just tell me how was it 😆 don't forget to hit a like and drop a comment ... :D

Rimi ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

i love ur story

do continue soon

waiting eagerly yaar

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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: malini96

i love ur story

do continue soon

waiting eagerly yaar

thnks 😳

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