Raga SS: A thin line between love and hate [Chapter 5 pg 9]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A Thin Line Between Love and Hate


**Important Note**
This story is set in modern time and some of the plots will be same as the actual show but they will be modifies according to my story.


Plot Sneak Peek:

They were laughing as my arm burned up with pain. Tears rolled down my eyes and my mouth was clenched. Suddenly I felt hands on my face wiping away my tears, I looked up to see who they belonged to. A concerned face smiled at me his eyes asking if I was okay. I nodded my head in response. After the little silent conversation he got up and stared at the boys who had pushed me and caused me to get hurt. Something in his look made their face go pale, in an instance they fled to safety. Then turned to me and helped me up. "They wouldn't hurt you again, I promise" he said smiling.
I looked up at him and smiled,
"Thank you Indra, I love you."
"I love you too Gayatri"
10 years later...
I hate him, she thought looking right into his percing eyes
I hate her, he thought returning her blazing stare

TABLE OF CONTEXT

Part 1- Pg 3 11/19/15
Part 2- Pg 4 11/27/15
Part 3- Pg 6 11/29/15
Part 4- Pg 7 12/15/15
Teaser-Pg 8 1/10/16
Part 5- Pg 9 2/13/16
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally,somebody wrote a story.. *phew* *showers flowers as I m happy*
plot is interesting.
Indra helped Gayatri and they love each other,but after 10 years,why they hate each other?
I m loving the storyline.
Do pm me when you continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Author's Note

This is just a little information about me. I am a student so I cannot not promise update on weekdays but I will surely try weekend. On my previous post I said that I would start last weekend but something came up and I couldn't. But I will start this weekend. So bear with me please and sorry if I let down some people by not updating last week. Also please excuse any mistake I make in writing the story and constructive criticism is always welcomed. I do speak and read hindi but am not that good at writing in hindi. So most of the story will be in English but I will try writing in hindi too. Thank you so much for reading! Hope you like my story!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

Finally,somebody wrote a story.. *phew* *showers flowers as I m happy*
plot is interesting.
Indra helped Gayatri and they love each other,but after 10 years,why they hate each other?
I m loving the storyline.
Do pm me when you continue.



Thank you so much! And i will surely pm you when i update! Can you please pm me "Raga Story Update" so I remember. And again Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomanceDewaani




Thank you so much! And i will surely pm you when i update! Can you please pm me "Raga Story Update" so I remember. And again Thank you!


welkies and sure,i will remind u.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yippee. finally a story in my favourite couple. can't wait to read further.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the plot, sounds interesting, shall be waiting for the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice plot
Pl add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Loved the plot, sounds interesting, shall be waiting for the update.


Thank you so much! And no problem for the pm

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