Raga SS: A thin line between love and hate [Chapter 5 pg 9] - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys! HAPPY NEW YEAR! Sorry for not updating in a while for the second time. I got caught with school work and stuff so I didn't get a chance. This too isn't a update it's just a teaser. But I will try my 100% best to upload and actual chapter soon but till than enjoy this little teaser. Sorry again and thank you to those who stuck around! Bye guys!



Teaser:


Both the families were greeting each other, when Gayatri was pulled to the side where no one could see.

"Who...," Gayatri stopped mid sentence as she looked up. "What are you doing? Someone will see, leave me."

"Let them." Indravadhan smirked. "So I'm a bewakoof, huh."

"Yes, sir you are. A bewakoof with a bandar jaisi shakal."

"Bandar jaisi shakal?" Indravadhan said as he came closer.

"St...stop... right there." Gayatri stammered. But indravadhan didn't listen.

"Papa!" Gayatri exclaimed.

Indravadhan froze and quickly backed away. He looked around to find Gayatri's dad, who was no where to found.

"Hahah...look at your face, it looks like you saw a ghost."Gayatri continued to laugh.

Indravadhan just stared at her mesmerized.

Edited by RomanceDewaani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
This is off topic i know but can someone tell me whether we can retrieve back the PMs coz my PMs got deleted. I have also not received a single PM since morning or is it that my PMs got blocked or something, please could someone help me. Your PM too got deleted.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Happy New Year to You,
Superb teaser, waiting for the update.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
waiting eagerly for d update after seeing d teaser
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ananya2010

This is off topic i know but can someone tell me whether we can retrieve back the PMs coz my PMs got deleted. I have also not received a single PM since morning or is it that my PMs got blocked or something, please could someone help me. Your PM too got deleted.


Not sure maybe ur inbox was full and they got deleted somehow?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Hey guys! I know, I know... I disappear a lot. I so sorry guys! But the good news is this one is actually a update. Thank you for the people who waited for my annoyingly long absence. I truly appreciate it! Love you loads! Sorry again! Enjoy the update and leave feedback!!


Both the families were greeting each other, when Gayatri was pulled to the side where no one could see.

"Who...," Gayatri stopped mid sentence as she looked up. "What are you doing? Someone will see, leave me."

"Let them." Indravadhan smirked. "So I'm a bewakoof, huh."

"Yes, sir you are. A bewakoof with a bandar jaisi shakal."

"Bandar jaisi shakal?" Indravadhan said as he came closer.

"St...stop... right there." Gayatri stammered. But indravadhan didn't listen.

"Papa!" Gayatri exclaimed.

Indravadhan froze and quickly backed away. He looked around to find Gayatri's dad, who was no where to found.

"Hahah...look at your face, it looks like you saw a ghost."Gayatri continued to laugh.

Indravadhan just stared at her mesmerized.

"Oh Hello," Gayatri said waving her hand in front of Indravardhan's face. "Why are you staring at me like that?"

Indravardan just stood there staring at her. After a while of getting his attention, she just gave up and left joining their families. Indravardhan smiled and shook his head looking at her.

At dinner...

Everyone was sitting at the table eating and chatting about their lives. Suddenly the doorbell rang, one of the servants went and opened the door. Everyone was shocked looking at the person who was standing at the door. An elderly lady dressed in a designer saree stood at the door step. Her hair was slicked back into a bun and not even a single strand of baby hair was visible. Her posture so perfect that it could be said to have been of a royal.

"Dadi!" Indarvardhan yelled as he ran to first touch her feet and then hug her. (She's Badi Rani Maa, anyone know her name?)

One by one everyone greeted her. After greeting Indravardhan's Dadi, Gayatri went back to her place next to her mother. Gayarti didn't like the presence of her, whenever she was around trouble came following. Just something about her gave Gayatri the shivers.

"Dadi, aap yaha," Indravardhan asked ( I did not know how to translate that :p)

"Of course I had to come! My grandson is back after so many days," Dadi stated.

"Well, I'm glad to see you," Indravardhan beamed.

After that everyone went to finish up dinner. While eating, Gayatri noticed Dadi staring at here. When she caught her gaze, she smirked and looked away. Shiver ran down Gayatri's spine, she didn't have a good feeling about the arrival of this member of the Singh family.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short update, loved it, so BRM is evil here too n could be the reason for RaGa separation.
Continue soon, shall be waiting for next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
nice update 😊 ,eagerly waiting for next one!!

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