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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update today.
Sorry struck with stupid projects at college.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Lines are different its kabhi toh kuch aisa hua tha neend mein thi tumne jo chuha tha...

Girte girte baahon mein bchi main...ohh...
Sapnon pe paaon pad gya tha...

Sapne hai behne do pyaaso hun mein pyaasi rehne do...



But anyway coming to the lines well suited i juat love the choice of song...



isshh! Sorry there jaldi jaldi mae dhyaan se utar gaya .
Thank u so much hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Draco_Elt


isshh! Sorry there jaldi jaldi mae dhyaan se utar gaya .
Thank u so much hun



Its ok koi nhi...


Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Part 4
Dreams and horror.

Still groggy from the ample lack of sleep,Indravardhan rubbed his forehead in pain. His head throbbed like someone was pulling off hammer on it fiercely. This was the reason he left heavy comforts of his king suite and slept in library. His dreams never allowed him to sleep wholly. He quietly started walking towards the lake.
Trying to remember his horrendous dream. He always saw himself and Sona,happily bantering over each other and laughing like retards on the boathouse he gifted her on their anniversary. And then suddenly he saw himself gagged by mouth and Sona being taken away.
He cries
Bickers to those people wearing black to take away all he has but leave Sona. But they don't. After taking away Sona,they throw him in the river where he gasps to breathe but can't swim cause his hands are tied by some rope.
This was usually the dream Indravardhan had encounters with,but last night was different.
He saw himself being freed from the rope by someone inside the lake,but before he could turn around to see who it was helping him. His nostrils get filled up with Gayatri's smell and rest he didn't wanted to remember..

He throws a pebble in the lake which create ripples before eventually getting drowned. His life was in ripples and soon he too was going to get drowned. "f**k" he shouted and heard snapping of dry twigs. He was standing at a damp place which has no dried twigs around and before indravardhan could fit in all pieces to the place.
A bullet blazed right across his left ear making him ooze in blood before passing out.


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Gayatri was busy rambling over how cold hearted the people of Rajmahal were. Deenanath bhaiya was just suffering with fever and nobody tolf him to take rest let alone ask for medicine.
She was lost in her own thoughts when she collided with something, wait it's someone.
"Easy there" Swarnlekha held Gayatri by her shoulder to make her steady." Bhabhi aap" Gayatri was glad it was Swarnlekha she had a takkar with or else everyone else would have roasted her over the fact on how must a Queen walk.
"Aap kya baatae kar rahi thi khud se Rani Gayatri Devi 😉. Kal humne Rana bhaisa ko apke kamrae mae hi sota dekha tha" Swarnlekha said a devilish grin slowly spreading across her face.," ab koi nahi batana chahta ki raat ko kya kya hua. Toh koi baat nahi. " she completed making Gayatri blush profoundly.
"Aisa kuch bhi nahi hua Bhabhi aap hawa mae kilae mat banaeae" Gayatri said mentally taking a note to find Ranaji it was 6 in evening 10 hours exactly since he left.
"Aapko angrezi aati hai?" Gayatri asked Swarnlekha all of sudden. "Ha kyu. Arey hum samjh gae koi na Ranaji ko impress karna chahta hai" Swarnlekha said making Gayatri even conscious.
"Nahi hum vo nahi chahtae. Aap janti hai na 2 mahine baad inka janamdin ki dawat hai aur usmae Britishers bhi aaegae. Hum unki bezzazti unn hi ki basha mae karna chahta hai" Gayatri giggled explaining why she wanted to learn English,not to forget she even wanted to beat Ranaji in reading English novels.

Both the lady of honours were happily chatting about their mayaka's ,when a loud commotion broke out in the palace.

"Ranaji is missing " heard Gayatri.


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I is so sorry for the late updates. I busy in college.
😆
So this chapter was necessary for upcoming events. Last time I was upset over the few number of comments my ff gets which made me conclude I'm not a good writer .
I went into polishing mode then. 😛

Ignore my bakbak and enjoy the ff


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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nice ranajo rememvering about horror dreams and he got kidnapped there gayatri jn her own world thinking about her servebt... Compassionate queen... Good..

Swarnlekha teasing...

Learning wnglush good choice whether to show britishers tgeir place or competing woth ranaji innreading english novel...

But the thing is ranaji has to come to rajmahal forst... Jope he is alright...


Bit its a very short update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ittu sa part hehee
nice update ..so rana had nigh mares about sona and him ..n gayu saving him..
he is being shot 😲 and now what ?? its been long he is missing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Nice update...
Mystery in the air...interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Nice update...

Mystery in the air...interesting


thank u thank u.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u chandni
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abba12

ittu sa part hehee

nice update ..so rana had nigh mares about sona and him ..n gayu saving him..
he is being shot😲and now what ?? its been long he is missing


finally ur comment after ages 😊
let's see ab kya hota hai Rana ji ka

sorry yaar short update ke liae next time bada update
Edited by Draco_Elt - 9 years ago

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