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Chapter 5 Jab tak "Rana has gone missing" Swarnlekha repeated as though she didn't understood the same at first instance. By the time,Rajmata who until now was busy with the pending file works stood up to the news ,only to find herself falling back on the couch in shock. "He can't go missing ,Sipahiya dhundo Ranaji " she held back the strings to her own self and ordered. She had already traded his son's happiness in past times but couldn't let his son die at any cost. She exactly knew where to head off to. -----_--------_------------------_----------- Gayatri paced around the room in nail biting frustration,her husband had gone missing and it was more than hours since the guards had left to find Ranaji back." Aap chintit may hoiae Rani Gayatri Ranaji bas aate hi hoge" Swarnlekha tried calming Gayatri. "Par vo.. Hum chaltae hai unhe dhundnae"Gayatri held Swarnlekha by her hand and started descending down the stairs before Swarnlekha could even protest. ------_--------_---------_--------_------ 'Kokila bhagwan ke liae kuch palo k liae apna muh band kar ke baithogi" Kuwar Chandrvardhan,glanced at Kokila who was now watching him with annoyance. "Khud se kuch kabhi kuch hota nahi hai koi aur kuch karta hai toh saha nahi jata. Meri toh koi wakat hi nahi hai iss Rajmahal mae" she spoke non chanted. Kuwar decided to pay no heeds to his half minded wife and was busy planning another attempt to remove Ranaji from the highest position, when the doors to their suite flew open revealing much disturbed Rajmata at the entrance . "Kuwar Chandravardhan Singh Deo. How to wish to die. Want be thrown off from a cliff on your head or want to be submerged into a tank ?" Rajmata hissed at Kuwar Ji. "What for?" A clearly confused Kuwar ji asked. "For kidnapping my son Ranaji" Rajmata now stood head to head to him. "Ranaji is not a toddler whom I can lure into a lollipop trap and kidnap. Wait Ranaji is kidnapped?" This was new Ranaji was missing and Kuwar ,felt rather bad for not being the sole bearer to the reason. "Don't like you don't know" Rajmata blew out her breathes . "Rajmata believe me. I would have taken more preventive methods to hide from you if I had done so" Kuwar bowed to Rajmata and left to join the ordeal that was being sent to seek out Ranaji. "Humarae Pati ne kuch nahi kia hai. Hum unhe jantae hai Rajmata" Kokila commented to Rajmata. "Apna muh band kariae Kuwar Rani ji " Rajmata threw a disgusted look at her and went away fuming. "Lo sab mere jaise intelligent ka hi muh kyu band karwatae hai" Kokila closed the lid of Nail paint she was applying to follow Rajmata. ------_---------_--------_---------- "Apne talab ke kinarae dekha? Ranaji aksarr waha jaya karte hai. Hume le chaliae waha Lakshya ji" Gayatri said to Lakshyaraj,who was driving Ranaji's car. Lakshyaraj was leaving to accompany the sipahi's in search when he caught sight of his wife and Gayatri bhabhi sneaking out the palace, after much discussion on pros and con it was decided that they three were going to find Ranaji ,but not by the chariots. Car was a much better option."She means Ambarr Lake right?" Lakshyaraj confirmed with Swarnlekha. "Yes and pls be a bit fast in driving" she commented. "Sorry Kuwar Rajkumari Swarnlekha,but I can't fly cars" Lakshyaraj commented back. "Aisa karte hai gadi rokk dete hai aur aaram se yahi utar kar kyu na aap dono dil-o-jaan se ladai kar le ." Gayatri mocked at them. "Maafi bhabhi sa. Hum aa gae Ambarr jheel pe" Laskhya halted the car and three of them with bolt speed started searching around the place frantically. "Bhabhi sa dekhiyae khoon ki boondae" Swarnlekha pointed out to a damp place, which had spots of blood. Gayatri's heart sank. She thumped on ground in defeat, eyes watering up. Lakshyaraj paced around Gayatri, blaming himself for not accompanying Ranaji,in the morning when they met. He was mentally cursing himself when he heard Gayatri saying something. "Kya aap bhi uss jheel mae ek rumaal dekh sakte h ?" She pointed at the piece that was floating in the lake. Lakshyaraj- "Ha. Aasmaani rang ka" Gayatri-" Yeh unka hai. Yeh Ranaki ka hai" Swarnlekha-"Apko yakeen hai?" Gayatri-"Humne kal raat ko unke kapdae rakhte waqt rakha tha ,aur ye vo hi rumaal hai ,jo unhone mujhe dia tha jab hum chhatt (terrace) pe tae" Lakshyaraj immediately went to scrutinize the lake, Swarnlekha & Lakshyaraj were looking out for things when they heard splash of water,and to thier extreme horror Gayatri had jumped in the lake. Gayatri was wriggling at her best to keep herself from drowning, "Lay still in water ,more you wriggle more you get drowned" she recalled Ranaji's advice, when he mocked her on drowning. Steadying herself, she slowly tried reaching for the spot in the lake where she had seen red spotting . "Lakshyaraj yaha aaeiae" she ordered him as he obeyed. Gayatri held Lakshya's hand and on the count of three by Swarn,both of them submerged in the lake. Gayatri's suspicion got confirmed. Ranaji was drowning in the lake, his hand and head bleeding heavily. Lakshya pointed Gayatri to go out as he could carry Ranaji out. "Hum Rajmahal nahi jaa sakte. Rajvaidhya ji ko yahi bulaiae Swarnlekha. Ranaji is halat bhut gambhir hai" Gayatri shouted to Swarnlekha who at once assisted the same. . -----_--------------_----------_----------- A small tent was settled up near the lake, as the injuries that Ranaji bore could have bleed him to death if not treated at time. Rajvaidhya sat sewing up Ranaji's arm that had been slit open up to elbow and a large gash behind his right ear was covered with bandage. Worst was the dash that ran vertically across Ranaji's chest making him bleed most. "Is he going to be okay!" Rajmata muttered, she was at loss of words at his son's conditions. "Yes out of danger. But he's lost too much to heal in time" the healer said,sad at the harm. "He always loses too much to heal" Rajmata looked at Gayatri who sat besides Ranaji. Not leaving his side even for a moment. "But he'll strive. " the healer said and left giving indications to Gayatri on the medicines. Rajmata- "Gayatri" Gayatri-"ji " Rajmata-" Jab tak aap Ranaji ke sath hai unko kuch nhi hoga. " Rajmata kissed Gayatri on forehead, she and her quick senses had saved his only son. ------------------ Precap : "Am I dead? No Gayatri aapne swarg mae bhi humara peecha nahi chhoda" he frowned. "Seems like King of Amerkot has finally officially lost it. Hallelujah" she huffed. Wait Who is Major. Vincent in the Rajmahal. New guests new sparks ------------- Phewww updated. How was it?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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gayatri saved ranaji lovely update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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he owes her his life...again..
nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice part ..
Only gayu could guess where was he, finally he is safe ..
But what happened to him in precap ..rana g ka mood bhi mausam k sath change hota ha 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update, Gayatri saved Ranaji.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gayatri succeeds in saving Ranaji. Highly exciting read. The precap was even better. Ranaji's remark that Gayu has followed him even to heaven had me in splits. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Gayatri succeeds in saving Ranaji. Highly exciting read. The precap was even better. Ranaji's remark that Gayu has followed him even to heaven had me in splits. Continue soon.


how I love ur detailed comments ❤️.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow Gayu saved ranaji but what actually happened n who did if chacha didnt know anything precap interesting thnx 4 update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6

Major Major

*1 week later*
Indravardhan tried opening his eyes but in vain. His eyelids were still heavy from the medicines that were given to him to heal ,he supposed. After all his attempts went vain he gave up, momentarily enjoying the the voices that fell in his ears.
"Aap agar aap na hote..
toh bhala kya hote
loog kehte hai ki
pathhar ke masiha hote..."
a sweet yet haunting voice echoed around him. He wanted to open his eyes and see the person who was singing ,he opened his mouth to speak but nothing came out ,he wanted to grab the hands that were lingering around his forehead caressing his bruise.


Gayatri saw his husband shifting his form, she immediately got alerted and closed the lessons she was studying. She knew Indravardhan liked slow songs,in this one week she had personally ransacked everything about him.This one week had everyone's heart hitched in their mouths,they had seen their much loved Ranaji screaming and howling in pain,the potions and treatment that was given to him made him sleep mostly.
Humming the song she caressed the bruise on his forehead when she saw him fluttering his eyes and groaning.
"Hum kaha hai?" he spoke, his voice hoarse ,"Kaha ho sakte hai aap?" Gayatri replied, "Rani Gayatri you followed me to heavens too" he remarked,This girl 😡
"Ranaji lagta hai aap ke sarr pe chott lagi usse apka dimag bhi prabhavit ho chuka hai.Mubarak ho" Gayatri fumed in anger as she tried to help him in sitting.
"Don't Touch me" Indravardhan suddenly shouted jerking her hands away from his shoulders making Gayatri gasps in shock. "Theek hai" Gayatri replied timidly ,controlling the tears brimming in her dove like eyes.This is what you get in return when you fall in love with a person who you know will never accept you,she gave her sleeps to secure that Ranaji has peaceful one, she forgot how the world outside this little tent was,cause her most of the time was spent in there sitting next to him as he held her hands in his.
Indravardhan realised what he just did,he didn't wanted to but whenever Gayatri touched him he got remained of something he tried to block his mind from. "I'm sorry" he mumbled, looking remorse with guilt." 😊 " Gayatri smiled at him,"Aap samjh gayi humne kya bola?" He asked sitting upright again signalling Gayatri to help him,he was too weak to refuse things now,"Ji hum English padh rahe hai ajkal" Gayatri said ,adjusting pillow behind his neck.
Both of them were having light conversation ,when Lakshyaraj barged in.
L-"Indravardhan"
Gayatri-"Mr. Indravardhan"
L-"Ummm...A king?"
G-"Huh ..The King" Both the in laws high fived each other and then turned towards Ranaji . "What was that Lakshya?" ,Lakshyaraj proudly looked at Gayatri and said "Engliash seek rahi hai Rani bhabhi 😉 .Leave that Ranaji since you we're so in love with your bed,I decided to pry into the matters myself and find out who attacked you on that day.We've few information,it was a Lady who attacked you, one of the boatmen nearby confirmed that.Brother did you rape someone?" Lakshya pointed out his eyebrows in a mocked manner at Indravardhan,"Oh yes! Actually I went to take part in World War II to rape women you f**king moron" Ranaji gave him a look that made Lakshya smile. "Tharki kahi ke. 😛 And yup in your absence Wilkinson couldn't control his merriness and to take advantage he has appointed Major Vincent Haynes in our palace" Lakshya spoke looking for Gayatri and found her packing stuff ."Oh! Maybe Wilkinson will throw a party in my honour when I go back to palace" Indravardhan laughed at his own comment and with Lakshya's help got up on his feet.
"Chalo apne mahal wapas chalae hum" Gayatri mocked as a sipahibat both the brothers as everyone left for palace.

*At Palace*
"Major Vincent" Ranaji curtly nodded at Vincent who stood there in his plain white shirt and black slacks ."Ranaji.Pleasure to have you back" He said as Gayatri peeped at him from behind Ranaji.
What Gayatri saw made her momentarily go weak on her knees, there stood a guy in his early Thirties, blackish brown ,hairs Striking jaws and yet hollow black eyes, Gayatri bet Ranaji saw her gaping at Vincent like apes.
"Rani?' Vincent softly called out, seeing Gayatri peeking at him from behind Ranaji's frame. Indravardhan was about to introduce her to him,when Gayatri decided it was high time to remark her presence,"Aap can call humne Gayatri ." she heard Major. Vincent throwing back his head and laughing while Ranaji gritted his teeth."Meet my WIFE Rani Gayatri Indravardhan Singh Deo" Indravardhan pulled Gayatri near to him,and immediately regretted it cause his action caused Gayatri to loose her balance, Indravardhan lurched forward to catch her but forgot he couldn't use his right hand as it was bandaged.
Gayatri was sure she was going to hit the marble on the floor,and later on hit Ranaji on his hexagonal face when she felt warm hand on her waist and shoulder."Gayatri Take care " Major Vincent made her Stand on her feet.
She glared at Ranaji and tapped her foot demanding a proper explanation as though why he suddenly wanted to crash his body on her side ?.
"Rani's don't fall like that" Indravardhan said ,"See Indravardhan. Before being a Rani she's a human and I suppose Humans can fall like that " Gayatri didn't understood what exactly were they talking but she understood Major was defending her from the ass of king Indravardhan .
Indravardhan without even a word left the room ,"Gayatri. Jaiae apke pati apse gussa ho gae hai shayad unhe mananiae" Major said ,"Apko Hindi aati thi?" Gayatri questioned him, he knew Hindi all along yay.
"kyuki hum Hindustan mae hi paida hue tae " He flashed her a smile before leaving .
"Ek yeh hai Aaram se pyaar se baat karne wale aur dusri taraf hai mere pati jo boltechai toh aisa lagta hai gooliya barsa reh gae hai"
Guys will be updating only on Weekends. Cause I'm having Youth fest at college. Inter college trips make it impossible for me to sit alone and write
Yes by the way Taher Shabbir Mithaiwala as Major Vincent

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