When it pours *New**[Part 6 updated pg17] |A RaGa FF|

Part 1
Sawaan
The rain descended over the fields of palace making rhythmic pattern of noise reverberating in the silent as dead palace. Rana Indravardhan chose to stay out ,letting the rain soak him up from head to toe. His white polo tee clinched to his body as he saw himself .He closed his eyes to feel the gentle drops caressing his face exactly in a way Sulakshana did to tease him
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-Gayatri knew it was a good opportunity for let her older version take over the palace ,since Rajmata had gone to visit some Prince, whose name Gayatri couldn't recall. Kuwar chacha and chachi were attending some firangi party in the other end of the Amaerkot and her Ranaji ,found the horses and rivers more enchanting than her. She had accepted the truth that this marriage was nothing more than a contract marriage that was made to save the Siyast of Rajmahal.Her joys knew no limit when she heard rattling of rain on the windowpane. Neither did she cared to wear a proper saree nor did she bother to tie up her hair in a perfect neat bun ."Aaj na Rajmata hai na koi rok tok karne wala. Rana ji ka kya hai hogae kahi mujhe kya pyaar karti hu iska yeh matlav nahi hai ki vo meri taraf dekhe bhi na aur mai bewakufo ki tarah unke sarr pe nachu huh !" Gayatri had a deep monologue as she reached the rooftop of the palace.
-----------_----------_-----------_-------------_---------Indravardhan bitted his lower lip to suppress the tears that were welling up in his eyes. As he opened his eyes ,the rain grew more heavier. Until he heard something."Kal raat aisa kuch hua tha ...Neend mae tu ne jab chuaa tha"Indravardhan ran to see who the hell was singing in the palace, after such a long time. Sulakshana? No ghosts sing but often at nights not in daylight.As soon as he opened the gates to rooftop, his feet betrayed him. All he could do was simply stand and watch the girl "Women you moron!" His mind corrected him immediately giggling like maniacs and singing."Kal raat umm. Agae kya tha bhulallad Gayatri" Gayatri mentally slapped herself for forgetting the lyrics to one of her favorite song."Kal raat aisa kuch hua tha..Neend mae tu ne jab chua tha..Girrtae girrtae baho mae sambhli mai..Sapnae pe paao pad gaya tha"..Gayatri jumped a feet in air in astonishment ,when she heard Ranaji completing the lyrics to the song.Indravardhan slowly walked to the stoned Gayatri. "Aap kab aae?" She tucked her saree to her cover herself."Hum gae hi kab tae" He snided past her and stood watching the continuous rain."Aapko iss ganae k bol kaise pata hai Rana ji?" Gayatri stood at the doorway ready to leave."Vo. Umm aap bhi barish dekh sakti hai humrae sath hum apko khaa nahi jaegae " he said sensing that she too adored rain as much he did.Gayatri silently stood next to him and both watched rain."Vo hume yeh gana Sulakshana ne seekhaya tha" He spoke as the rain had slowed down. Filling his heart with a void."Andarr jaiae warna apko sardi ho jaegi"
he spoke before turning to leave.Hardly had he reached the door when he heard Gayatri sneezing .

"Aargh 🥱 this girl" He said.


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Hi guys. I'm Niharika ,a huge fan of Rana Ji. Hope you guys liked the storyline. What say should I continue??

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Nice update loved it
Yeah continue it.. Will wait for it

Nice one ..

its lovely beautifully written plz cont soon

Originally posted by: ReelyROSExx

cngrtz to u r First Raga ff /ss👏

Lovely start !

So the scenario is somewhat similar to the track . Ranaji lost in Sulakshana s thots . loved their interaction n feelings portrayed !

Do continue soon

PS : is that the lyrics of a real song ? If so can u pls post the link . :)

tysm 😊
yes it's a real song will use full lyrics in next part.
the song is "Katra katra milti hai"

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

its lovely beautifully written plz cont soon

thank you.
yes hun will update soon

Originally posted by: abba12

Nice one ..

Do continue😛

Rana g phir sad.

GayatrI monologue was good

Do post the story link in ff update thread ..so that I catch further parts😉

yes will maintain index
and thank you

Yes yes! Please continue :)) its so interesting