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jagrutid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani
Haaye..
I have become a fan of ur writing.
The way u portray emotions and the situations is par excellence..
Lovely update.
Continue sooonish.

Thats very kind of you really its just the first thing that comes to mind !! 😆 please keep reading couple more updates left yet.

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Nice update

Gayatri is hurt and so is rana

I love your ff more than the current track in the serial

At last rana will meet gayatri

I wonder what rana told govind Seth that he was content with the answers.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shruti_luvs_msk
Nice update
Gayatri is hurt and so is rana

I love your ff more than the current track in the serial

At last rana will meet gayatri

I wonder what rana told govind Seth that he was content with the answers.

Thats quite a compliment thank you.. and you're right Rana will interact with Gayatri in the next chapter what remains to be seen is the conversation i don't think you will get to know what the exact conversation between Govind and Rana was but what happens next will probably give you an idea ...

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Lovely update beautifully written liked the way ranaji was restless for gayatri he didnt see her for 3 days i doubt if gayatri doing this on purpose she saw ranaji from far wow gayu in ranaji's room cant wait to read more nice part thnx 4 update

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Nice update... Like the way ypu write ranaji moving on and as ranaji have tp performing seeing ranaji restless then telling theaid to open the veil and rajmata scolding on that was cute...

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Very well written! Update regularly.

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abba12

@abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

very well written ..

loved the way u described every emotion .. specially rana's feelings .. just loved it ..

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Thank you guys away from towards the end of the week but i will try and get an update in before that..

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Beautiful update...

Loved the father daughter bonding and the parents willingness to oppose the king for the sake of the daughter...

You really have a way with your words...the characters become very lively...

Please do update as early as possible...

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Lovely part Govind Seth faces Rana and Rana calmly answers his questions

Damianti speaks with Gayatri

Gayatri taking the punishment as stated by the King and Ranaji tries to find her every day only landing in disappointment ; the on he thought also did not turn out to be Gayatri

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