Raga FF||His Little Wife||Note Page 41||25th March 2017 - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
congrats for the new ff..
nice starting..
hayeee me imagining my Maan in place of rana ji..can't help it out..😛
gayatri n ranaji..poles apart..ranaji a serious person..and gayatri a pampered kid..
haila..!! 10 yrs ka difference..dekhte hain ranaji ko kaise pyaar hota hai gayatri se..
somewhere ranaji is right..gayatri is still a kid..just 14 yrs old..
but lets see..kya hota hai aage..
continue soon..
n if psbl..is ka mg version bhi do na..
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Posted: 9 years ago
have you decided not to write this anymore ?..was looking forward to reading it .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start
Plz add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loving Raga..excited to read their stories
Pls PM me too..upadate soon
Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum storyline..can't wait to read more


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi are we getting an update on this :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello dear,
I happened to come across your story and I really like the premise. I am looking forward to reading more as the story progresses.

I also wanted to request you to please increase the age of Gayatri to 16 instead of 14. I just think that 14 would be too small. By current Indian law, this marriage would be illegal. I completely understand that this is supposed to have happened before Independence, but I just feel that 14 is too small for at marriage. Also, a girl of 14 having physical relations with a man (I hope you know what I mean ...) can be very harmful for her.body.

If you want, Ranaji can be 25 or 26. In this way, he can study abroad for a while and then return back to the kingdom ad have ruled for a bit.

I hope you do not mind my rant, and please do not take this personally. This is just my personal opinion.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi_shankar

Hello dear,

I happened to come across your story and I really like the premise. I am looking forward to reading more as the story progresses.

I also wanted to request you to please increase the age of Gayatri to 16 instead of 14. I just think that 14 would be too small. By current Indian law, this marriage would be illegal. I completely understand that this is supposed to have happened before Independence, but I just feel that 14 is too small for at marriage. Also, a girl of 14 having physical relations with a man (I hope you know what I mean ...) can be very harmful for her.body.

If you want, Ranaji can be 25 or 26. In this way, he can study abroad for a while and then return back to the kingdom ad have ruled for a bit.

I hope you do not mind my rant, and please do not take this personally. This is just my personal opinion.



Gayatri is just marrying to Rana .. not celebrating Sr ... and yaa it about 100 yrs old story from today time and basically a STORY only... A imagination. ..


Hope you can take it as STORY only as I will not change plot for any one ... yaa I will post this story in my blog from now on...


I always like when readers trust writer n give freedom to write their own plot ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can I get a link to your blog please :)
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Posted: 9 years ago



Note


I have came back after months and continuing my Fictions based on "Geet hui sabse parayi" now I don't know the status of this forum.

So kindly tell me if you are still interested in this "Raga Fiction" of mine. So I will continue it as "Raga Fiction" only or else I will mold this concept into a "Maaneet story" as I hardly write anything on any other couple.


Thanks

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