FF: ~Crashed~ This is my First: Preview of Chp 26 Pg 76 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
@treesajose32
Thanks 😆😆😆
Ur making me blush...
Kunal is such a wonderful husband and is such a cute and loving father we saw hints of the potential in the show and some scenes but i wish we got to see some after shranal's marriage so more or less oh well😛
Just more hints of the rift until i actually fully go into full mode and explain it an future chapter😳
She is more sexier in more casual clothes but she does look more cute or younger in the outfits she usually wear😉😳
Of course i have more scenes like the Holi scene, I'm not done with these two so of course i have a lot more planned for these two😛😉
LOL🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
A movie now? I wrote a play before but nothing similar towards a movie script or a script for a Tv show...lol thank you, ur compliments are making me smile and laugh☺️😆😆😆
Kunal is embarrassed because his mom has to see him like that but it feels normal (well from my experience) whenever we forget stuff my mom always know where so i thought more or less😆😆😆
Plus it was a funny situation to write😛😛
Hmmm...who knows😆😆😆
Awww...ur falling for me because of my story lol...join the club...😆
Just playing thanks dear for reading and love you too dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki_2293


oh...so shraddha is down with pneumonia..silly me as I was thinking she may be pregnant after the horny holi sequence!!😆..am still waiting for the pregnancy scene jumoke, dying to read Kunal's reaction. More than ShraNal, am excited for the "pregnant discovery"😳

Kunal forgets his underwear and kamini hands it over. Like KAMINI ACTUALLY GIVES HIS UNDERWEAR!! I cant even imagine how kunal would have blushed at his mother's knowledge of his drawer with the undergarments. I almost flushed reading the whole thing, imagining the scene in front of my very eyes! 😳

This was an amazing update with a lot of details. Thats the best part of ur writing that one gets a clear picture of the surrounding as well as people's reactions. It seems too real.
Loved reading it as usual!!



Yep😆😆😆
I don't blame you...i want her to be pregnant...just not so soon😆😆😆
"Horny" Holi scene🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Wow...lol🤣🤣🤣
Yep Kamini actually gives him his underwear but i thought (well wouldn't she know since she is his mother and her nature...she should know😆😆)
Thanks dear and thanks for the compliment as always and love reading it as well as its hilarious.😛😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: adithyan

hmm..now Shradda knows Kunal was innocent...

Pretty much she found out a few chapters back but still trying to put the pieces together and understand the whole situation. Thanks for commenting dear😳😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Duggukede

amazing update

continue soon
thanks for the pm

thanks dear and will try to do so. No problem at all about the PM and thanks for commenting😳😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jumoke my lovely Friend!! Loved each of the parts!!👏⭐️
From Kunal's concern, ShraNal argument, their intense scene & their last scene everything was written brilliantly & I was lost in their beautiful dreamland!!

You're a perfect writer & it's a treat to read your writing!! #HatsOff👏👏⭐️

Do continue writing more!!😳

Love you loads & loads!!❤️🤗
Edited by Nazzyx8 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahhh!!!!🤗 I LOVE it! My sanity is coming back after reading Chapter 20. I think I was losing it after Saturday. I seriously felt I had just watched an episode of meri bhabhi. The timing of your story is spot on cause the show had ended when Kamini had accepted Dhruv and Shraddha and this is carried on from there.
Back to the story, you have made such an amazing story. I am so hooked onto what will happen next and each chapter is just as amazing. You have made Kunal the PERFECT husband/lover. It always makes me smile 😃 and people end up wondering what I'm smiling about. Do tell me is Kunal for real??? I really want him.😆
Dhruv is such a cutie. I love the scene where he comes to Kunal. I actually got scared during the Shranal argument. I think I was getting to used to the romance. But its good you have the balance otherwise we would go crazy with so much romance going on.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unresed my comment on pg 60😃😃..finally!!😆😆
love u Jumoke!!!!!!!😃⭐️⭐️🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reshma4lyf

Ahhh!!!!🤗 I LOVE it! My sanity is coming back after reading Chapter 20. I think I was losing it after Saturday. I seriously felt I had just watched an episode of meri bhabhi. The timing of your story is spot on cause the show had ended when Kamini had accepted Dhruv and Shraddha and this is carried on from there.

Back to the story, you have made such an amazing story. I am so hooked onto what will happen next and each chapter is just as amazing. You have made Kunal the PERFECT husband/lover. It always makes me smile 😃 and people end up wondering what I'm smiling about. Do tell me is Kunal for real??? I really want him.😆
Dhruv is such a cutie. I love the scene where he comes to Kunal. I actually got scared during the Shranal argument. I think I was getting to used to the romance. But its good you have the balance otherwise we would go crazy with so much romance going on.


LOL😆😆😆😆😆😆
Ur reaction, ur comments are always hilarious🤣
I feel like the CV's dipped themselves onto this forum and just use this because it seems too coincidental with some of the stuff that has occurred but that is another thing😆😆
Kunal the PERFECT husband...sigh...gosh i wish i get a husband like him but then again i would want someone with flaws as im nowhere perfect.😆😆
Kunal is as real in this story but i don't think so😆😆 ur not the only one's who wants him😳
I have to go back and forth and bring sometimes out of the haze of romance sometimes if not everyone will drain all the blood from their bodies from the continuous nose bleeds.😆😆😛


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzyx8

Jumoke my lovely Friend!! Loved each of the parts!!👏⭐️

From Kunal's concern, ShraNal argument, their intense scene & their last scene everything was written brilliantly & I was lost in their beautiful dreamland!!

You're a perfect writer & it's a treat to read your writing!! #HatsOff👏👏⭐️

Do continue writing more!!😳

Love you loads & loads!!❤️🤗


Nazzy my crazy, crazy friend whose always praising me...who i rarely get to talk to😭😭😭😭
Missing u🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Stay in their dreamland and never come out of it...what fun is it to get out of their dreamland??
Aww thank you dear and its always a treat reading ur comments as u got me smiling like a freaking idiot. Good thing no one's around😆😆
I will as im always in a daydream and love you, love you, love you tons upon tons upon tons dear❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

Res

Unres


So..it was pneumonia..okay!!😆😆

How could u write so beautifully!!👏

I'm in love with U & ur updates!!

U write it in a so interesting way hat v couldn't wait for the next..i still rememmber ur 1st part of this FF & till now I'm loving it more & more!!!👏👏👏

U are incredible girl!!⭐️⭐️ #Respect


Each part..each scene..each situation od the update is brilliant!😃

Wt else could i say..i love u friend!!🤗🤗🤗

Yep...oh no were u just like niki who thought she was pregnant?🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
How can I? idk but i try my best and put how i feel into so i try my best😳
Awww u...u...u are so freaking cute🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Why are u so cute? why must u be just so freaking adorable?🤗🤗🤗🤗
Hey no other way, im a very weird and interesting person so its not going to be normal and it seems us unique people click together😆😆😆😆
I still remember u trying to encourage me to write something when i mentioned i had an idea...lol😆😆😆
Thanks dear and i take a bow at ur compliment and thanks dear and #LOVE #HUGS
What can i say Rosie...love u dearly dear so much much much hugs dear❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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