FF: ~Crashed~ This is my First: Preview of Chp 26 Pg 76 - Page 51

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Awesome jumoke. Brilliantly written. Shranal romantic scenes are mind blowing. Loved family scene. No words to express. Amazing perfectionist. Love you. 👏 🤗

Originally posted by: najialuv88

LOL😆

Why are there so many disturbances because its funny and hilarious and it happens

Unfortunately when u live with others u have disturbances even if u don't want or u are busy doing something else...it will happen without ur consent or not😆😆

Yes we can't just have romance all the time we have to come back down to Earth or everyone will just faint 🤪🤪🤪

LOL😆😆😆

Jin and Shraddha are just freaking adorable but the conversation about her age was addressed in Chapter 9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97926538...then some more in Chapter 11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98349875. (An all Jin chapter especially about her past).

I can tell you, but i think u might understand more if u read those chapters if u don't mind to really understand .(Don't worry its short compared to the length i write nowadays during then i was still trying to maintain an average page to type for each chapter😳😳). If you still have questions i will tell you as i thought it might be clear but if not i will try to explain.

Please don't give me ideas☺️ You will wish (or thank me) for ever giving it to me as i will make good on ur intent and might go overboard😆😆😆

Jaya, Jaya, Jaya...I actually like writing about her...to an extent of course...but lets be realistic, she won't change. The same could be said for Kamini but in a realistic approach Dhruv can win her over (heck he has had 2 years to do so in this time frame of my story...😆😆😆) more or less she is still on the fence with Shraddha. She is caring but she is not overly affectionate or singing praises about her. She does show concern for her and she isn't hating her completely. its almost arms length with Kamini and Shraddha but not completely ridiculous as being best friends. Basically accepting the lot u have and knowing it won't change any time soon can give way to actually understanding a person slowly, but don't mean u will be their BFF (i know this too too TOO well🥱🥱).

Jaya is someone whose just filled with venom no matter what u do. Kamini more so was stupidity and ignorance as a character on screen but Jaya was someone that could never change but could talk less if they focused on hers and Ashish's relationship dynamics and show Ashish getting more of a backbone and shutting her up. Sadly, this is not the story where im focusing on them as a couple so its going to be as it is🥱🥱🥱

Plus I like Jaya in this avatar...its funny when others shut her the heck up😆

*Everyone thinks its Zor...*

It was mama or Amrit who said that last line to Jaya😆

Frequent is because my ideas for this are on overload. don't want to go back to not updating for a month (that was just bad) but was busy @ the time.

Being speechless is good dear so don't worry too much and awww🤗☺️ u guys are going to embarrass me to death with compliments but im LOVING IT!!!!!😆

Thank you dear and love you too dear🤗

Jumoke... I really don't have any words to say this time. I'm just thinking what can I say????❤️🤗

Originally posted by: treesajose32

@blue...Thanks for pointing actually I missed that 11th chapter...understand more...so she died in 8 and still in that body...
@red...Oh God ideas...are u going to use it...I am very fast in reading but ur ff...u don't know how much time now I am taking to read ur stories... I read once...smile..then dream about it ...blushing then again reading... too much time and my condition is worsening day by day by ur each shranal scenes...but I love it so if you like go on that girl and I am sure u will rock...
Me too love to see they shout Jaya...I am loving this setup girl...this Kamini and Jaya you opt here so n problem in that

Originally posted by: virmanxyz

fantastic chapter lovd u r long updates kamini is havng a soft corner fr shradha gd lovd all shranal scenes especially kunal helping shradha bath scene jin is right kunal is smart in makng shradha wear his clothes, lovd family scene concern thy show towards shradha lovd all shranal love scenes if u give me a whole update full of shranal thn i wont mind love u and tanks fr t pm

Originally posted by: Duggukede

awesome update

you are soo good

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Reshma4lyf

Jumoke... I really don't have any words to say this time. I'm just thinking what can I say????❤️🤗

Really loved it. ALOT. Especially the Shranal scenes. U sent me to dreamland. I really loved how Zor made that soup for Shraddha and reading about Kamini's hidden concern for Shraddha. By the way love how each update is getting more and more longer each time😃

Ur a star ⭐️