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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved every line😃...shraddha rocked it...God yoona sensed something wrong ...

I got an attack when jin said she was on to her now😭

Wow shraddha really cares her family...

Malika-Kittu-Shraddha convo was lovely...why are u avoiding jaya dear it will be more fun then😆

Haha Anki really Mithras sister or brother...thats ok but when will shranal have another one i think they have 100% more chance for new baby and plz mention prior activities☺️☺️

Shraddha- malika bond has a special charming its not like shraddhas relation with kittu and jaya here...

Shranal scene sorry let me blush sometime...i loved it to core😳

Again bet poor kunal he is going to lose it but i want him to take revenge for lose u know what i mean😉

Jin jin jin i just love her ...hayyeee tiny fingers... i laughed my heart out when that towel covered her completely it was soo cute the first scene and last towelwala one...i was missing this shraddha and jin...sorry to say sometimes i love her more than anyone else in this story😊

jumoke i really adore the characters u create out of the show...they all stole my heart, be it anna in last ss now jin but jin i don't know i feel like i want her mine...i really want some progression in jin-eli story sorry for demanding i adore her dear...

i cant wait for next... yoona frightened me and shranal bet excited me👏

Thanku and love u soo much...lots of kisses and hugs🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -treesa- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww...!!😃
Rocking update again darling!!👏👏👏

With each update it's getting more interesting!!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Shraddha's scenes were too good!!⭐️

SraNal never fails to maaze me!!😳😳

Could imagine the scenes!!😉

I love them!!⭐️⭐️

Briliant characters!👍🏼

Love you for this always!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗v🤗


Edited by -Red-Rose- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What an update👏. Really loved the strong shraddhs at the beginning. Was cheering shraddha on to give yoona a good reply.
Shranal is just getting hotter in all your stories. Falling in love with this shranal more than the one on tv. Probably cause the romance is coming from both sides😆
Seriously though I wished this was on tv.
All the relations for each character you are portraying are just beautiful especially Shraddha and malika and also with Jin.
Thanks for an awesome update 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -treesa-

Loved every line😃...shraddha rocked it...God yoona sensed something wrong ...

I got an attack when jin said she was on to her now😭

Wow shraddha really cares her family...

Malika-Kittu-Shraddha convo was lovely...why are u avoiding jaya dear it will be more fun then😆

Haha Anki really Mithras sister or brother...thats ok but when will shranal have another one i think they have 100% more chance for new baby and plz mention prior activities☺️☺️

Shraddha- malika bond has a special charming its not like shraddhas relation with kittu and jaya here...

Shranal scene sorry let me blush sometime...i loved it to core😳

Again bet poor kunal he is going to lose it but i want him to take revenge for lose u know what i mean😉

Jin jin jin i just love her ...hayyeee tiny fingers... i laughed my heart out when that towel covered her completely it was soo cute the first scene and last towelwala one...i was missing this shraddha and jin...sorry to say sometimes i love her more than anyone else in this story😊

jumoke i really adore the characters u create out of the show...they all stole my heart, be it anna in last ss now jin but jin i don't know i feel like i want her mine...i really want some progression in jin-eli story sorry for demanding i adore her dear...

i cant wait for next... yoona frightened me and shranal bet excited me👏

Thanku and love u soo much...lots of kisses and hugs🤗🤗🤗


I have been avoiding Jaya in this story because though there are moments I like writing about her...this was NOT one of those times😆😆
Shranal...hmmm...there will be reason as to why they aren't having one AS of yet...🥱
Kunal will lose, he will always lose when it comes to things with Shraddha and sex...sad but true😆😳
Jin, Jin...I love her and her tiny fingers bit was just me...I get teased endlessly because of my fingers😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 and yes...im glad that you love her...let me go cry in a corner because that's all i ever wanted😭😭😭😭😭😭
Jin-Eli story...i wasn't really expecting on creating him for much attention but idk at this point...he won't be seen as much for progression of the plot but im not saying it WONT happen as i do take everyone's thought into account when i update chapters.
LOL!!!
No problems dear and muah muah much love right back dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Reshma4lyf

What an update👏. Really loved the strong shraddhs at the beginning. Was cheering shraddha on to give yoona a good reply.

Shranal is just getting hotter in all your stories. Falling in love with this shranal more than the one on tv. Probably cause the romance is coming from both sides😆
Seriously though I wished this was on tv.
All the relations for each character you are portraying are just beautiful especially Shraddha and malika and also with Jin.
Thanks for an awesome update 🤗


Shranal...hehe😆😆
I wish they were hotter, they really could have been but the subtlety they had somehow was just as hot as well, just frustration centered around the stupid filler scenes they used with either Kamini or with the family rejecting Kunal. I don't think they could have had this on tv...😆😆some explicit scenes and a much younger audience at times😳😛
No problem dear😉😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

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Wowww...!!😃
Rocking update again darling!!👏👏👏

With each update it's getting more interesting!!👍🏼

Shraddha's scenes were too good!!⭐️

SraNal never fails to maaze me!!😳😳

Could imagine the scenes!!😉

I love them!!⭐️⭐️

Briliant characters!👍🏼

Love you for this always!!🤗v🤗


Can you expect any less😆😆😆
Okay aside from the cocky side and thank you dear🤗🤗🤗🤗
Thanks dear and no problem at all dear and awww love you dear ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: najialuv88

Can you expect any less😆😆😆
Okay aside from the cocky side and thank you dear🤗
Thanks dear and no problem at all dear and awww love you dear 🤗

Love u tons dear!!❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jumoke.. sorry for the late reply!! *HoldsHerEars* 😳
You're a brilliant writer!!⭐️👏
Hats Off to you and your dedication in writing and coming up with brilliant stories!!😃⭐️
Keep it up!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzyx8

Jumoke.. sorry for the late reply!! *HoldsHerEars* 😳

You're a brilliant writer!!⭐️👏
Hats Off to you and your dedication in writing and coming up with brilliant stories!!😃⭐️
Keep it up!!😊


It's okay dear and no need to apologize...hehe...🤗
Awww...thanks dear and I really try and i will aslong someone is willing to read it.😳😛
Edited by najialuv88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter Twenty-Six Preview

I smiled and she got up from the bed and went back to the dresser to finish getting ready, slowly putting on bracelets, necklace, and her wedding ring.

I watched in slow fascination as she put something red in the middle part of her hair and used a comb over some strands of her hair and she began to softly hum.

Instead of sparking up a conversation, I got lost into the soft hum of her voice, slowly closing my eyes as a memory began to tug itself from behind my eyelids.

It was a memory that I haven't thought about in years but Shraddha's voice and actions was starting to drag it upward from its depth.

I folded my hands together, dragging my foot into the stocky folds of my dress as my mother was busy humming a song as she carefully began to pull her hair into a tight bun.

"I want to play ouuutttsiiidddeee!!!!!!!!!!" I drawled out in annoyance.

She turned and a pair of brown eyes met my gaze and gave me a stern frown.

"You are something else Jin Yeon, you are not allowed to play outside, after getting in a fight with the neighbor boy." She said before she skillfully cleaned her dress.

"But he picked on me...he was teasing me." I said while folding my hands in defiance.

She looked at me and shook her head.

"You have to learn how to control yourself Jin, its not becoming as a young woman." She said.

"I don't care, I won't let someone pick on me or tease me...what difference does it make if I'm a girl...it's not right to hurt other people feelings." I said.

For a moment she paused and she turned towards me, a scowl pressed firmly on her lips and I lowered my hands, gripping it towards my dress as I looked down, getting prepared for her to give me another spanking just like earlier.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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