Raghav's Revenge FF contd (prt9pg13) 11/03 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update dear
is kalpi in coma? waiting for flashbacks, pls update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Emotional update. What happened kalpi?
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Awesome update
its really lovely
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Nice update what happen to kalpi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Nice update but something missing. I am unable to have a continuity of the story ! Sorry, I must be DUMB ! Tks.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Res
Sorry guys I tried to update so many time but my phone had some issues sorry .
So Appologies
Part 8

Older Man:Manas let her in &do her work .

Guy/Manas:but dad she is late

Older Man:why

Girl:sorry sir actually I wasn't getting the auto

Older Man: its ok Shanaya u can continue with ur work

Manas:but dad

Shanaya:Thnx samar si

Sammy:its fine . All can resume your own work.
He leaves
Manas gets inside his cabin .
Shanaya: Thank God that Sammy sir came otherwise this monster would have killed me.
Esha: get back to work otherwise He will kill u
Shanaya: see u guys later
Shanaya enters the cabin with a cup of coffee. Placing it on the table.
Manas: where is my coffee
Shanaya: can't u see its on the table.
Manas: behave
Shanaya: excuse me (annoyed)
Manas: and urs
Shanaya: (angrily) U do ur work
Manas: so missed it breakfast
*No reply
Manas gets up & walks towards her sits next to her (his cabin is made up of wooden walls). Opens her hair tied in a bun .
Manas: sorry I had to behave like this because otherwise people will have doubt .
(Keeps his hands on hers )
Shanaya: (tears flowing):It's ok .
Manas :what happened
Shanaya: I want to go back .
She hugs him .
Manas: come
Shanaya: where r we going

NEW YORK
MORNING 8.30 AM
A room with curtains on the window . A.C working on & A young man sleeping peacefully and the alarm clock which is ringing since last half hour . But still he is sleeping. An olderman enters the room picks up the pillow laying on the floor switch on the light . A male servant enters with a tray and places it on bedcorner open the curtain &leaves.
Older man: get up veer
V :I want to sleep
(Covering his head with blanket
OlberMan: I Raghav Shinghania order u to get up in 2 mins or else no parties for a month and No outings
V:that is not fair dad. (Getting up)
Raghav: get ready fast
R comes out in balcony and sees veer & smile
*******
Flashback
22 yrs ago
Raghav was reading the newspaper and Kalpi was drinking tea . Raghav phone rings and Kiya comes out
Kiya (handing over the phone) :chachu (fathers brother)
Raghav: hey Rohan . What's up
Rohan:Bro we are coming to India along with our son
Raghav :Omg I can't believe that you are a father now
Rohan:Where's bhabhi
Raghav: she is sitting next to me
Raghav gives phone to Kalpi
Kalpi:congratulations to both of you
Rohan: now its your responsibility to get him a name .
Kalpi: let me think . Actually I have one name in mind .
Rohan: What
Kalpi:What about Veer
Rohan:that is great . It's final tell bro also . See u guys tomorrow
Kalpi: we r waiting for u


Sorry for all the errors &late update.
APPOLOGIES
Edited by ragnaareangel - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH
(ONLY NEW CHARACTERS
Kiya Shinghania(Shanaya Mehra): Daughter of ragna
Beautiful , sweet,adorable ,stunning .
She is the real diamond . She is a deadly combination of Our Ragna.
Love intrest : Manas

Manas Raizada: Son of Sammy & Maya . Elder brother of Appy
Handsome ,charming,ladykiller,Caring,intelligent ,
Very protective about his family specially kiya ...
Loves kiya alot but doesn't have the courage to CONFESS HIS LOVE

VEER SHINGHANIA: youngest member of the family . Parents Ragna(but he is the son of Rohan)
Handsome, Carefree, Funloving, Caring , Well behaved
Loves his family alot & the most her mom...
Love interest Natasha

Arpita Raizada:Daughter of Saya
Intelligent , Calm, Beautiful & cute
Love intrest Aryan Sahani

Aman Sharma: Son of Raghavs Accountant after his parents died he was brought up by Shinghania .
Most loyal to Shinghania family.
He Works in SR industries .

Natasha Luthra: Girlfriend of veer
Single daughter; pampered, sexy ,
Lives with her father never seen a family like veer's family.

Aryan Sahani: fiance of Appy
Owner of Sahani Mills .

Rohan Shinghani: younger bro of Raghav.
Lives in Australia

Edited by ragnaareangel - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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waiting for an update dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
nice update dear

mqnas and shanaya love each other

where is kalpi,?

update next part soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vanajaragna

nice update dear

mqnas and shanaya love each other

where is kalpi,?

update next part soon dear

Thnx
Red-may be or may be not
U will get all answers soon😆

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