Raghav's Revenge FF contd (prt9pg13) 11/03 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragnaareangel


Thnx
yes will update in english

thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys finally here is the update

Part 6
6 years later
Kiya: manas ur too bad
Manas: if i m bad so ur good
Kiya:i know i m good
Manas:yes only in ur dreams
Kiya:dad he said that i bad
Manas:no first she said that i m bad
Kiya:no i didnt say so promise
Manas:ur a liar
Kalpi : stop fighting u both
Kiya : but mom he again fight with me
Maya : Manas
Manas : (mom she is blaming me
S: as ur inocent na
Appy: di bhai can u live one day without fighting
Kalpi: see arpita is also more sensible then u both
Raghav enters: What's going on
Appy: what happens every day wwf b/w di n bro
Raghav : Oh nice
Kalpi: what's nice in this
Sammy: They are fighting
Raghav: U guys won't understand
Kalpi: What?
Raghav: Leave it go & get ready
Kiya: Why?
Appy: R we going somewhere?
Kiya: Tell na dad
Appy: Speak up
Manas: Girls r so much troublesome
Kiya: how dare u
Appy: times plz
Sammy: stop fighting
Raghav: we r going out now go & get ready
All go to their rooms
Ragna's Room
Kalpi was busy choosing dress When Raghav comes out of washroom
Kalpi: help me
Raghav: for what (he takes steps towards her)
Kalpi: for choosing my dress
(She shows him 2 dresses)
Raghav: RED will suit u
Kalpi: thnx (She is heading towards washroom Raghav holds her hand pull her towards him )
Kalpi: Raghav leave me
(He moves his finger on her face and slowly lifts her chin
Knock knock ...
Kalpi: Raghav gate ...
Raghav: shhh
(Keeps his finger on her lips
Knockkk knock knock
Kiya: muma open the gate
Kalpi: just a sec
Kalpi: Raghav kiya
Knock knock
Raghav: kiya baby ur mom is not opening door for u
Kiya: muma open the gate fast
Kalpi: coming
She's about to go when Raghav holds her by waist
Kalpi (slowly ): Kiya is waiting
Raghav (slowly) : just one kiss
He steps closer & is about to kisss when
Knock knock knock knock
Kalpi pushes him he falls on bed .
Kalpi winks at him and opens the gate
Kiya enters and ignores Kalpi &goes towards Raghav
Raghav: my princess? What's up?
Kiya: my mood is sad
Raghav: why r u sad
Kiya: Bcuz of her
(Points her finger towards Kalpi)
Kalpi: (angrily ): What have I done?
Kiya (stands on bed): u u didn't open the door for me
Kalpi: if I didn't open the door thn how come u r inside the room
Kiya: dada
(Hugging Raghav she said: I love u dada
Raghav:(picking her in his arms) : I love u my princess
Kalpi:(making puppy face) : no one loves me
Kiya hugs her: I love u mom
Raghav: even I love ur mom
Kiya laughs: as if I don't know
Kalpi: enough I m going to get ready
Kiya: I m not going
Raghav: Why
Kiya: look at me . I m not ready I don't know what to wear
Kalpi: oh drama queen look at dressing table
Kiya: nice n thnx
She takes her clothes and gets into washroom
Kalpi: kiya wait
Raghav laughs : cool
Kalpi (angrily) : What is so cool in this?

Precap: 21 yrs leap
Boy: I can't belive u r tolerating
Girl: Its not ...painful
Boy: Really (angrily) So does it fell awesome by getting used , hit by him almost everyday
Girl breaks down & cries
Boy hugs him
Girl: I love u Manas...
Boy: I love you too & can't see u in such state

Guys hope u liked the update
Sorry for all the errors
Edited by ragnaareangel - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
thank you for the lovely update dear,pls update soon dear and other story too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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about update lovely,ragna moment so quiet loved it pls update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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waiting for next update dear pls update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
we should thank you for your lovely stories
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Spoiler
Raghav:I have ruined everything .
Sammy:Raghav its not like that
Raghav:Its bcuz of my ego ,rigidness& Revenge that she is in such a bad state . I had no right to do this to her.
(He breaks down & goes on knees)
R:I shouldn't have done this . I responsible for all the wrong happening
A voice : U r right u spoiled everything ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting teaser. Makes one wait eagerly for more. Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res
Unres
Part 7

Kiya: look at me . I m not ready I don't know what to wear
Kalpi: oh drama queen look at dressing table
Kiya: nice n thnx
She takes her clothes and gets into washroom
Kalpi: kiya wait
Raghav laughs : cool
Kalpi (angrily) : What is so cool in this?
Raghav: aww kalpi r u angry.
Kalpi : Absolutely not(Picking up a pillow & throwing it on Raghav)
Raghav: this is not fair
Kalpi: everything is fair in love & I loveee youu
Raghav:I love you too


21 yrs later
(Note: guys I taking another leap now it has been total 27 since Ragna got married & 21 yrs after 1 st leap)


New York
12 a.m night
Man: Wake up my love its our 27 Anniversary.
Looking towards a women fall asleep since last 21 yrs .
Man: I know it's no use talking to you but my heart it can't live without u . Please come to me.
(There's a knock on door & A 22 yr old boy enters
Man: Veer come
Veer: Dad u ok
Man: yes
Veer: so wished mom.
Man: wht u think.
Veer just a sec
He calls someone puts phone on speaker
Veer: Dad is here
Caller: hola dad . Whts up
Veer: 1 :2 :3
Caller& Veer (together):Happy Anniversary Mom&Dad
Dad:thnx my love
Veer: U know what u only love di.
Caller:cry baby..
Veer:don't call me that
Man:Kiya stop teasing him
Kiya: but dad he is cry baby Shingania if he will behave this way then...I'm
Veer: listen I m Veer Shingania the son of Raghav Shingania do u get that
Kiya:cry baby
Raghav: ok stop it u two let Kalpi rest
Kiya: Dad mom will be ok soon
Veer:I agree
Raghav:Kalpi is very fortunate to have children like u both
Kiya:only me not himđŸ˜†
Veer:DiđŸ˜­

India
Mumbai
9:30 a.m
Singhania Industries
A dashing ,smart guy of 26 yrs enter The whole office wishes him.He stops at the reception & ask about his P.A Miss Mehra whn he is informed that she is late . He goes inside his cabin which is very luxurioes & waits for his P.A angrily.

At the parking An Auto stops A girl in a very hurry burry enters the office hers hairs tied in a messy bun .She is wearing a black jeans & a backed pink sleevless crop top along with a black sling. Her waist is slightly vissible as there is 2-3 inches b/w the top & jeans. She goes to the recption where she is informed that the boss is already in his cabin. She runs towards the same luxuorious wooden cabin sipping her coffee in one go . Opens the cabin gate & is about to enter when ...
Guy:u r late miss mehra
Girl:sorry sir ...actually ..
Guy:no excuses go back
Girl:but sir ...please
Guy:no
When an older man comes b/w them he is the father of this guy
Older Man:Manad let her in &do her work .
Guy/Manas:but dad she is late
Older Man:why
Girl:sorry sir actually I wasn't getting the auto
Older Man: its ok Shanaya u can continue with ur work
Manas:but dad
Shanaya:Thnx samar si
Sammy:its fine



(Note:guys I took another leap to fasten the story . I will be using flashbacks at few places)
Hope u guys didn't mind as I fastened the story.

Sorry for mistakes
Feel free to give suggestions
Edited by ragnaareangel - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Nice update.
What happened to kalpi.

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