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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 9
R comes out in balcony and sees veer & smile
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Flashback
22 yrs ago
Raghav was reading the newspaper and Kalpi was drinking tea . Raghav phone rings and Kiya comes out
Kiya (handing over the phone) :chachu (fathers brother)
Raghav: hey Rohan . What's up
Rohan:Bro we are coming to India along with our son
Raghav :Omg I can't believe that you are a father now
Rohan:Where's bhabhi
Raghav: she is sitting next to me
Raghav gives phone to Kalpi
Kalpi:congratulations to both of you
Rohan: now its your responsibility to get him a name .
Kalpi: let me think . Actually I have one name in mind .
Rohan: What
Kalpi:What about Veer
Rohan:that is great . It's final tell bro also . See u guys tomorrow
Kalpi: we r waiting for u
Raghav: so ?
Kalpi : u know what I m so excited for tommorow . Raghav u know what
Raghav still busy in the papper : hmm.
Kalpi: u r n't even listening to me . I hate u
Raghav: kalpi I m reading news thats really imp
Kalpi: u know what U have no intrest in me I m going
She was about to go when Raghav held her hand .
Raghav: u really think that I have no intrest in u hm?

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Present
He saw veer arrranging things getting ready but struggling with the tie raghav smiled at it & went to him

Raghav:so the juniour singhania doesn't how to do up a tie . Really bad
Veer:I know
Still strugling with the tie . Raghav takes the tie & begins to do the tie.
Raghav:its very normal not to know something but u should never hide it being ashamed of it .
Veer:dad . U know what ?
Raghav:What?
Veer:I love you so much u really mean the world to me.
Raghav: r u sort of practicing to confess ur feelings.
Veer:dad u r just too much . Why don't ask ur lovely daughter about her& Ma...
Raghav: what u think veer I don't know about her being in a really true love .
Veer: how do u know it . I didn't tell u .
Raghav:u know I am the father here. So r u nervous for ur 1st project . U know if the deal is done then after appy's wedding u will be going off to Indi
a U know na.
Veer:I know &I'll strive hard to make u all proud of me.
Raghav:now come down .
After 1 week
In Singhania mainsion (USA)
In the living room
A girl was walking back & forward many times . She looked really tensed. .
Girl:My wedding what will happen mom tell me .
Mom:y r u tensed ?
Girl :today my inlaws r coming to talk about mamera . I don't even have a mamma(maternal uncle). Y on the earth r u a single child mom . Just y .
Mom:appy don't worry we will give the mammera .
Appy:no mom his grandmom said u both can't even give a penny in mammera . What will we do
Mom:this is real trouble now when r they coming to talk .
Appy:today 4 p.m what will tell them
They hear a female voice from upstairs :don't worry appy &maya I have an idea.
Maya:tell
Lady: I& raghav will do the mammera.
Raghav:perfect this is just perfect .
Maya: thnk u kalpi.
Kalpi: no need to say thnk u if u say then I 'll feel like I.'m nobody to u . Call ur in laws today appy.
Raghav:and sammy is on the flight he will be here by 5 o clock till then we will handle.
Appy:I can't belive only 2 weeks left .
Veer :gm
(He was still in t-shirt &jogger)
Raghav:is it a holiday veer?
Veer:no dad actually its my day off
Raghav:who gave u a day off?
Veer: u
Raghav:when did that happen.?
Kalpi:Raghav let him take a day off .
Raghav:u know what from last 20 yrs he was in my control now he is tottaly out of control from last 1 week .
Maya: we 3 r going shopping today .
Raghav:kalpi r u feeling better u have just started recovering .
Veer:don't worry I'll be by her all the time.
Raghav:that is actual trouble u r irresponsible veer.
Veer: u only love di as if she is very responsible na
Raghav:veer u r wasting my time. I'm leaving &appy I'll be homewith Sammy don't worry
He left.
Appy:Veer
Veer was smiling looking at his phone . Kalpana & maya went to the kitchen to instruct the servants for the evening .
Appy:veer r u talking to ur girlfriend show snatching hisphone .
Veer :di give it back
Mean while kalpi came out
Appy:choti ma see what I have to show u veer was talking to his gf.
Maya :kalpi u didn't tell me that veer has a gf.
Kalpi: veer what is this u didn't even tell me . Let me talk to raghav .
Veer:please don't do this I don't have a gf.


At singhania construction
India
Giya:Shanaya y r u so lost .
Shanaya:I have to go to Pachmari my dad isn't keeping well I want to stay with him for sometime.How I'll I ask the boss for leave.
Shivam:u won't be needing to do that bcuz boss's sister wedding so he is going home for atleast 2 weeks.
Shannaya: this is just perfect . When he is leaving ..
Shivam:tommorow.
Shannaya:let me take a half day as I have train in eveing .
Giya:so go ahead .


Few hours later in paris.
In hotel Royal Inn.
In moon light was coming to the open swimming pool attached to a luxurious private suit . A beautiful girl was swimming as beautifully as a mermaid . The moonlight fell on her skin through water made her skin glow more beautiful . She came out the pool wearing a black swimsuit showing her curves perfectly . She wore a floral kimmono on it and opened a glass door heading towards her room . Hearing a call on the room landline . She recived it..
Caller:hello mam I m the manager sorry to disturb u
Girl:yes please
Manager :actually u have a visitor he would like to speak to u
Girl:sure
Manager:mam it some manas raizada
Girl:give him
Manas:listen Im in a mess
Girl: what happened
Manas: my P.A forgot to book my room . Now at this hour I don't want to go to any other hotel & this hotel is full. Ask them to let me in
Girl: fine . I m going to shower . Order dinner and ask him for the spare key . Give the call to the manager.
She instructed the manager to let manas in her room & give him the spare key...


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Sorry for the spelling mistake & grammatical errors

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Edited by ragnaareangel - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
awesome update dear
you written it very well
update soon
thank you for the lovely update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Its fabulously written

Thanks dear
Glad u liked it
ragnaareangel thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Its fabulously written

Thanks
Glad u liked it deary
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vanajaragna

awesome update dear
you written it very well
update soon
thank you for the lovely update

Thank u
Nice to know that u liked it
Ur welcome

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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Awesome update.
Please update next part soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Nice update... Plz update next part soon if possible... Take care...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks everyone glad u guys liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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if possible update next chapter soon deary

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