Kalpi: RAGNA FF: chapter 4 part 3 ; page 80 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi! Its very nice .. Sry for delay comment.. Read all parts together. Intetesting concept.. Lovely conversation between rag's spirit and kalpi... Loving it... Thank you for begin regular.. Wanting more and more stories and updates from you... Instead of paki if its rag and kalpi locked up .. Thank you for this beautifully story dear..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update I love it keep going
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: abirami_shankar


Hi! Its very nice .. Sry for delay comment.. Read all parts together. Intetesting concept.. Lovely conversation between rag's spirit and kalpi... Loving it... Thank you for begin regular.. Wanting more and more stories and updates from you... Instead of paki if its rag and kalpi locked up .. Thank you for this beautifully story dear..




Thanks for reading my story. Your right it would have been better if it was them two, but your forgetting raghav is a spirit so he can easily walk out and two raghav is trap in that house. Its not possible for him to go out like ghosts. So his technically trap himself lol.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 15



The next day, vitthal was in court, he had all the evidence he need to help kalpi. The dirty cop and the owner were there glaring at vitthal. one of them says " how did those kids get a high class lawyer like him"

" just because he wears a suit doesn't mean his a lawyer. He could be fake" the officer says

The owner grin " your probably right, besides it seem to me like their missing a person"

The cop smile " your right" They both grin at one another.

Vitthal looking at the door wonder where kalpi could be. he knew he gave her the information for the court hearing. He wonder why she not here. sighing , vitthal seeing the judge decides to speak to her fast.

" mam my client isnt here yet, is it possible to wait just a little bit"

The judge look at vitthal and thought about it. He sigh " fine, i will give you thirty minutes, thats all. Afterwards we will start."

" thank you sudeep"

" ah uh, its judge to you" he says

Vitthal smile. He walk to the seat, before asking kalpi friends where she was. They also said they didn't know. Vitthal look at the time " if kalpi doesn't show up they will dismiss the case, and the other party will win by default."

" do you think they did something to her?"

" i dont know, that could be possible. But if she doesn't arrive, i will have to go an look before the time reach."

Meanwhile,

Kalpi woke up feeling someone watching her. She opened her eyes to see raghav in her face. " Aah!!" She screams

Raghav move back before crossing his arm " do you know I've been looking everywhere for you"

" you have?"

" yes, we still have to figure out whats stopping me from entering my body"

Kalpi says in head, their he goes again only thinking about himself. Doesn't he know the situation i'm in at the moment. Seriously i would like to closee him in a box. While thinking, raghav frown.

" how did you get in here"

Kalpi points at paki " you can blame her for that. Closing me in and stupidly locking us both in here"

Raghav sigh " i dont know who is more annoying " he says

Kalpi glares at him. She asks if theirs anyway he can help them. While talking she didn't notice paki watching her. She look at where kalpi was talking and found no one " why is she talking to herself" she says suddenly she gasp " dont tell me she's one of those crazy people" she thought

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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update, I hope kalpi reach court on time,pls update soon dear waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now story is going on very interesting
Have to see how Raghav will help Kalpi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
How will raghav help kalpi
Hope kalpi will reach court on time
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanie01




Thanks for reading my story. Your right it would have been better if it was them two, but your forgetting raghav is a spirit so he can easily walk out and two raghav is trap in that house. Its not possible for him to go out like ghosts. So his technically trap himself lol.



Hey love ur this technical issue of ragna..
Mad for ragna

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting.. How will rag's spirit help kalpi.. Will she reach court in time??

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waiting for next update dear

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