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jiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Will think later on about continuing this OS or not but for the time being enjoy reading the second last part of the story.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Superb upfates jiya...

Is paki is d culprit or sumone else????

Want to read more pls do contonue...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome twist

Really fab in writing

Want t read more

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jiya

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Originally posted by: mimii
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jiya

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Pakhi was hell scared because of all this n now adding fuel to the fire was Priya's words,she told to pakhi that people do come back as ghost if by chance their any wish lefts incomplete na then they come as ghost to fulfill their wish n the person because of whom their wish is left incomplete they doesn't leave them,they make his or her life a living hell,they follow that person everywhere but why did kalpi's ghost targeted you, blame you for her murder did you actually killed kalpi...hearing this pakhi shouts n say no I had not killed kalpi,trust me guys I had not killed her,yeah I accept that I hate her but still I cant kill her afterall she is my friend,she was crying like hell but then suddenly she again saw kalpi's ghost hanging in air n waving her outside her room
window so she quickly turns to tell this to everyone but when she n others saw their,their was no one,she even look outside the window too but their was no one...once again kalpi or her ghost vanished into thin air because of which pakhi gets totally mad n starts shouting that please spare me kalpi's ghost,I had not killed you,I not responsible for you accident infact I didn't even know anything about it,please for god sake just leave me,I cant leave my life like this in so much fear,I'm apologising for everything I did with you please forgive me n leave me,everyone present their hears pakhi's shouting,screaming unnecessarily but still no one comes to support her,console her infact they all were enjoying by seeing her like this,in this condition,for all of them its like her punishment which she is getting for hurting kalpi all her life, for giving kalpi so much pain as they all very well knows that what all kalpi had went through after her friends betrayal,who kalpi had died every second for her life for trusting her so much n now they all very happy because they thinks that now its pay back time for pakhi but still seeing pakhi shouting like mad its too much for raghav,he tries to say something to her,he tries to make her understand but everything goes in vain,she kept on blabbering something,he even holds her shoulder n tries to shake her many a times but nothing works out as she was not in her sense, she was not at all ready to listen anyone so at last to bring her back to normal raghav gives a tight slap on her face because of which she stops blabbering n holds her cheek which is red like tomato n then seeing her back to normal raghav say to her that pakhi we all live in 21st century but still you were stuck to your old thoughts,belief...bhoot's,chudail don't exists in this world just get this fact n please just come out of your blind faith on all this rubbish things otherwise one day for sure you will get totally mad n people will make fun of yours like they all are making now by pointing towards his friends,he again says to her that pakhi just grow up n act with some maturity,you are not a kid any more,all this doesn't suits you n if you kept on saying or behaving like this na then for sure people will think you as mad so just think before doing anything n controls yourself n your emotions n moreover just remember one think that kalpi is dead,raghav was busy in giving her long lecture but she was busy in her own thoughts,she even listened a single thing of whatever raghav said to her or not only god knows,may be now she seems fine but deep inside she still had lots of fear of kalpi's ghost because of which raghav told to her that pakhi just pack your clothes n important things quickly, hearings this pakhi n all others looks towards him in confusion n pakhi ask him for why to which he replied that I know you are still scared of kalpi's ghost, you just cant able to take out all this thing from your brain so I had fear that in your madness you might not end up hurting yourself because of all this rubbish thing n I really don't want to take any chance because if anything happens to you na then everyone will gone blame me for your condition like some of my closed ones are blaming me for kalpi's death n I don't want that to happen so its sure that your coming with me to my house n you will gone stay their for some days until this ghosts matter sorts out is it clear to which pakhi didn't say anything n just nods her head in yes like a small child n others too also didn't say anything to raghav inspite of being unhappy with his decision because they all very well knows that its just a waste to talk or say anything to raghav because he is very much stubborn,he will not gone listen to anyone or anything,he will just do what he wants or thinks right so its a time waste to say anything... with this after packing up everything pakhi left with raghav n others n as no one was happy except raghav with the fact that now pakhi is going to stay with them they all tries to irritate her, scare her by the kalpi's ghost n much more inspite of raghav's continuous warnings to them but by seeing everyone's behavior towards her in the car only she was very sure that she is not welcomed their,no one like this fact,no one wants her to stay with them n moreover no one even like her presence around them too so she ask raghav that is he sure that its right for her to stay with them inspite of knowing everything by seeing everyone around her in car n raghav just get her point so he assure that everything is fine,no one had any problem with her,or with staying her with them... hearings all this Priya was about to say something but before she could do so raghav again spoke up n tells pakhi to not to worry for anything as he had already looked after anything n he had taken this decision after lots of thinking so everything is under control,he assures her to forget all her fear n just enjoy what life is giving to her because may be she again get this chance or not,he again assures her that this stay of her in his house will gone be the best stay of her life which she will always gone remember all her life n this stay of her will gone make everything back to normal,she will gone enjoy her stay in his house so much n moreover to her comfort suhana n prem too will gone stay with them...listing all this pakhi was smiling but others r totally shocked n confused they all wonders that what is going on in his mind,what is he upto,why he was showing so much concern to pakhi n for what,may be they all didn't had answers to their questions but still they all very dam sure that raghav is upto something,he had for sure thought something or other for pakhi but what n to know this they all have to wait n watch but this suspense is killing them but still they cant do anything whereas seeing totally silence in the car raghav just spoke up n say guys don't stress your brains too much nothing is going on in my mind n I'm not upto anything,I'm helping pakhi because of humanity not because I had planned or plot anything against her so guys stop thinking too much n just relax n let your brain relax too,don't take any tension n don't give it to
others too,he again says to everyone that I'm sure that now you all will be wondering that how I get to know that what is going on in your all minds,how can I able to read your minds well it's because we all are best friends, we all have very strong heart to heart connection because of which Priya spoke up n ask him that you just now said na that we all are best friends then did you even for once ask anyone of you that how we feel when you hurts our friends soul,when you insult her true love,did you for just once ask us before taking any decision related to pakhi,did you share you pain,problems,secrets with us,did you even trust us all a bit,did you think once that how we all see you totally broken from inside but still not ready to share your pain with anyone, did you think about all of us no na then how can you n we all are even friends,we guys don't have any heart to heart connection all this dialogues just suits in film only it doesn't have meaning or importance nothing in real life,now a days in real life love n trust are just joke for everyone... before raghav or anyone else could say anything else or reply they all reached back to Singhania mansion...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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jiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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As soon as they all reached back to Singhania mansion everyone silently went inside leaving raghav n pakhi alone in parking which makes pakhi feels very guilty n she apologise to raghav for all this,she said to him that I'm so sorry raghav for coming between you n yours friends,for breaking your friendship bond with them,they all are angry on you n avoiding you just because of me n now because of me they all hates you too,I'm just a burden on everyone, I'm very very bad,if I had not come here then this wouldn't have ever happened but trust me I had no such intentions,I never wanted to come between you n your friends but intentionally or unintentionally I did so now so sorry for that please forgive me n now I had realised that I will be never welcomed here,I never meant to be here n now its right that I should just go away from here then everything will get back to normal,everyone will get happy once I go from here saying so she start going back but raghav holds her hand n brings her back infront of him,he bit angrily says to her that first of all you didn't come between me n my friends as we all have such a strong bond that no one can come in between us, we all will never let this happen, no one can break us all apart or into piece never just remember it n secondly they all are my best friend they can never ever hates me yeah they all are bit angry on me but it's not because of you not at all,its because of me as I had hurt them a lot because of kalpi got it n moreover bringing you here was my decision so now I wont go from here until I want,you want or not but now you had to stay here just get this small thing in your mind...raghav's grip was so tight on pakhi's hand that she was on the verge of crying,she was silently screaming in pain but raghav don't care about it he just ordered pakhi to leave all her tension, worry n fear here only n just come inside with him without any drama,raghav was non stop saying all this but stops when sahil ask them that will you both come inside today or not or did you both had planned to spend entire night outside only,hearing this raghav just angrily went inside n pakhi too follows her silently...inside pakhi greets sahil but in return she gets no response so she says I know sahil that you too hates me like others do n moreover you too don't like my coming here or staying with you all like others but trust me before she could complete her sentence it was cut off by sahil who told to her that I don't care whether you stay here or anywhere else or whether you die somewhere or live as I care only for those whom I know n whom I love n trust but you are no one,you are totally stranger for me whom I don't know nor I cared so now just go to guest room n rest as I have to talk something to raghav in alone... hearing this pakhi just went away from their leaving them both alone n as she left sahil goes near to raghav because of which raghav covered himself with both his hand n mockingly says that dont think that if we both are all alone here then you can take advantage of me,I'm not of that type n moreover I'm blackbelt too so just stay away from me to which sahil says raghav its not a joke,I'm damm serious n he just ask raghav that whats all this ghost drama,from where did all of a sudden kalpi's ghost comes n moreover why are you so much concern n worried for pakhi,why did you bring her here n forcing her that much to stay here why, don't tell me that you too are scared of ghosts,chudail like her which don't even exists raghav replied back...more then ghosts or chudail I'm scared of people who are something infront of all n totally opposite at their back such kind of people are back biters or you can say back stabbers n I just hate such kind of people sahil said,I know,I very well know that you are indirectly saying all this to me but I don't care about all this,I don't take your words seriously as I know that you doesn't mean all this,you don't hate me you are saying all this in your angry which you had on me because of kalpi n as soon as your angry cools down you will forgive me n your other answer I'm helping pakhi out of humanity raghav again replied back...you never cared about your love,your kalpi or any of friend like this,you didn't even know her properly,she is not your friend,nor your girlfriend n neither your sister or any of your family member then whats the matter,did anything is going on in between you n her sahil asked him which again made raghav angry n this time in bit high pitch he said to sahil that nothing is going on between me n pakhi just get this thing clearly yeah I accept that she is not friend or anything else but still we all are humans n being human its our duty to help others the one who are in needs n I don't think that their is anything wrong in this n moreover if I want too na then also you all wont allow me or let me move on in my life with pakhi because for you all kalpi is still alive,yeah for you all she is alive in your hearts,mind,soul n specially in your thoughts n that's why you are guys always push me back whenever I try to forgets her or whenever I try to move on,you guys wants me to live my entire life with kalpi's memories just like the way you all are living but sorry to say I cant live my life like this nor I will,if you guys want to spend your life in her memories then you all are most welcomed but please for god sake don't force me do that as I wont do that, please don't try to force your decisions on me,I will make new dreams,new memories with her n I will do that n no one can stop me from doing it saying so he left from their leaving sahil all alone in hall n that too in totally confused state so sahil goes towards kalpi's photo which is hanged on one of the wall of hall with garland,he cries infront of kalpi's photo n say why kalpi,why did you left all of us like this,dont you ever for once thought about us that what will happen to all of us without you, why did you do this with us,dont you love all of us why kalpi why you never thought about us, everyday may be we all are living without you it like a body without its soul,we all are really missing you so much please come back we all need you,me your bhai raghav the love of your life,your friends everyone needs you,we all are dieing everyday without you please come to us,you are the colours of all our lifes without you we all are like a painting without its color n without you our life is also colorless,meaningless,we all are living as we all had promised you to live our lifes even without you also but without you are our lifes are filled with only darkness, you were the ray of hopes for us,I know everyone use to say that life doesn't stops for or without anyone n life doesn't waits for anyone but our lifes had stopped without you,we all are waiting for you,we all wants you while saying all this sahil was crying badly but with time his tears too dired up when reality strikes him at may be he wants but kalpi cant come back to them,she had gone very far away from their,she had gone to a place from where no one can ever come back,he knows that now they can only cry for her but never gets her back n this reality brokes him into many a pieces but soon he just wipe out his dired up n some unshed tears n smiles as he remembers that kalpi always wants to see their all happy n smiling face as she loves it a lot n soon his emotional mood change into serious mood he again says to kalpi photo that you know what kalpi your raghav is making me hell confused,his words are confusing you too had love listen just now na,I'm unable to understand that what's going on in his mind even I fails to understand him too,sometime he shows that he loves you so much n sometime he gets completely changed,I don't know whats wrong with him,did he is actually wrong or their is something which we all cant able to see,did he actually means what he is saying now or their is something else behind it,if he really loves you then now why he is showing so much concern to that pakhi who always tortures n hates you,I just dont like this please show some way to sort out all my confusion, to find out truth,please help me kalpi...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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jiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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When sahil was busy in talking with kalpi's photo pakhi too comes their n stands behind him but sahil was still unaware about her presence but then pakhi spoke up that kalpi was always indeed very sweet, cute,loving n caring didn't she which makes sahil aware about pakhi's presence n he reply she saw then he say to pakhi that can I ask you something, will you tell me to which pakhi just nod her head in yes giving him permission to ask anything he wants so sahil ask her that what did kalpi had done with you that you hates her so much n in your hatred you just end up killing her,you just end someone's life,her dreams,her wishes why,is your hatred bigger then someone's life no na then still why did you do this why... hearing this accusation again n again from everyone now pakhi is totally fed up so this in bit loud tone she told to sahil that you ask me ones or thousands times but my answer will be same that yeah I accept that I use to hate her a lot but I not so cheap that I end up killing her for my hatred,I had not killed her,I cant ever stoop so low because how many difference r their between us,how much we hate each other but still we r friends n I cant do this with my friend trust me but their was no expression on sahil's face so pakhi again says I know that none of you trusts me but you guys too r right at your place because I know I had done so much,I had never said a truth to anyone,I had always hurts everyone everytime but this time I sayings truth but I know you n others wont believe me but I know I'm right n my god will surely support me,you all will see that their will be a day when all the truth will be out n you all will get to know that I hadn't done anything n that day you all will be believe me,trust me n till that I will wait for that day for that moment... inspite of pakhi's long lecture sahil didn't had expression,he just simple said to pakhi that you speak so much,till now you said so much to me but still you didn't tell me what I had asked you in starting that why you hate kalpi so much,everything has a some or other reason na n I'm sure that their will surely a reason behind your hatred too so I want to know that reason because as per my knowledge kalpi never said or did anything wrong with you,it was you who always used her n her friendship then also why you hate her so much why,I'm very curious to know this...yeah since our childhood days I use hate her a lot because I'm always jealous of her,she always gets infact very much for which I always craved for pakhi replied back and what was that sahil again asked her to which she starts narrating her past,she told to him that you know na me n kalpi r childhood friends n I always get full freedom, independence,I had always lived my life on my own terms n condition or you can say the way I want,my parents never interfere in my personal life whereas kalpi never get all this,she was always surrounded by her protective na over protective family but still she always gets what I wanted that is our parents love,I never get my parents love as they both were always busy in expanding their small business that in all this they totally forgets about me,they both didn't even have a minute for me for their own child,even when they both were at home then also they just talk about business only,they didn't have a second to sit or talk with,they both gives me full freedom n in return they never cares to know that whats going on in my life,I'm not saying that they don't love they do,infact a lot but sometimes it gets important to show your love which they both never did,my mind always knew that they both were doing all this for me,for my bright future but to do my heart was never ready to accept this,it just only wanted their love,support,care n specially their time which they never give me,they always gives me who much money I ask them or who much I need them but they both fails to understands me,they both fails to understand that money is just materialists thing which cannot fully their emptiness in my life,they both never cared about my pain,problems,I always wanted to share my life with them but their were never their for me,they both were so busy in making money that they both never gets to know that when my life gets filled loneliness without them, when I just get very far away from them,when many unsaid walls develops between us which never let us come closer whereas on the other side may be kalpi never gets freedom,independence like me but she always gets her parents, her family love for which I always carved for being the youngest member of her family she always gets pampered a lot,she was everyone's favorite,she was always n always surrounded by one or another family member of her,they all cared,loved her so much,they all cant see her sad even for a second so when she gets or even pretends to be sad from them they all tries their best to bring smile on her face as they all love her smile a lot n when we are kids na that's time me n suhana use to go her home every Sunday to play with her as she was never allowed to go out alone n when we use to play if she ever gets hurt or even a single or small scratch that time more then her,her parents,her family gets hurt,worried for her, they all feels her pain more then her n even tears form up in their eyes even though she didn't cry also because they all loved her so much,she was every one's jaan, they all understands n specially they all have lots of time for her n by seeing all this I use to get jealous a lot from her n slowly when my jealousy for her turned into hatred for her even I too didn't get to know but I use to hate her a lot n whenever I see her happy with her family it made me more angry on her,I know I was wrong but I always let out all my frustration n angry on her but still I never get happy so one day I decided that if I never gets my parents love then kalpi too won't ever get it,I will just snatch away everything from her,all her happiness, her smile n will fill her life with emptiness,loneliness like mine n that's why with the help of prem I trapped kalpi in all that fake love drama,I wanted her to get down in her parents eyes,I wanted that they all hates her, disowns her n see luckily all that happens too but I never thought that this situation will get so worse that she will left with no other option inspite of running away from her home,I never wanted that,I just wanted her to feel my pain but at point that situation went out from all our hands,if I ever knew that my game will leads to this then I had never done this,I want kalpi to stoop low in everyone eyes but now I'm ashamed for all my doings now I hate myself for that,now I had realised that if we didn't had anything that doesn't mean that we snatch it from other also but I take too long to realise my mistake n now it doesn't matter too because now kalpi is not with us,may be I had not killed her but somewhere I'm also responsible for it too,I just always wanted a loving n caring family that's it,but I never get,god never listened my prayers n now I don't even care because I know as much as I will cared about it,it will only n only hurt me so it's just a waste,while saying all this tears were continuously flowing through her eyes,clearly reflecting her inner pain n now sahil is also crying because he could relate himself with her pain as he himself had gone through the same,he too never gets his parents love because they both died when he was small,he too also had craved for his parents love n that's why he know who it feels but weeping away his tears sahil told to pakhi that I trust you n from now on I had not one but two sis,yeah from now on you are also my sis n I will protect you from everyone,everytime,I will not let anyone hurt you,from now on all your pain,problems r mine, you just be happy but trust me if any day I get to know that you were one who had killed kalpi then that time I will not leave you,I will be the first one to punish you just remember it to which she nods her head n quickly hugs him n he too respond n then he again says to her that now you just go n sleep as its too late to which pakhi obey n went to sleep...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago