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kinnapatel

@kinnapatel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

😊wow jiya beautiful update .Thanks .new twist .cant wait for next one .

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abirami_shankar

@abirami_shankar

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Wow!!! lovely concept and beautifully delivered jiya..
U r too awesone writter... Who is the culprit? Whts rags
upto? Very much eager for next update dear... Dont kill
us too long with the suspense...

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swati

@Ragna1302

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Both part r awsome. ...
Yaar ye raghav sab ko confused kar raha hai ...what happened to him. ...n what is in his mind...
Y he is showing so much concerned to pakhi...n pakhi change suddenly 😲 ..ghost ne change kiya 😆 😆 ...
Update soon. ...

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

It has turned out to be Mystery ! Enjoyable

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jiya

@SJ001

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

As soon as raghav stops his nonsense something touches his right cheek because of which he falls down on floor n his lower lip start bleeding yes it was sahil,he had given a tight slap to raghav for insulting her sister's,for insulting her true love n then he speak up n says raghav I don't know whether you r doing all this for a purpose or not,you had some plans or not but still you have no right to insult kalpi's true love whether if it is for some purpose also,I will not bear if anyone present here will insult my sis in any way,she had gone through so much in her entire life, she only n only gets hatred n betrayal from her loved n trusted one's so now please at least for god sake let her soul rest in peace n if you cant respect her,her true love,her feelings,emotions then atleast please don't disrespect it, please don't bad mouth about her, raghav she all her life had helped n supported others so please don't repay her for her good deeds like this n by insulting her you r only insulting yourself as you only use to say that may be you r two bodies but with one soul,one heart,you both r connected with heart's,yours both relation r above from anything so atleast just sticks to your own words, whatever it is I don't care,I really don't care,I just hate kalpi n that's it,I will not gone change my thoughts for anyone,I will do whatever I think is right n you sahil don't you dare to again raise your hand on me otherwise next time I will not spare you n if you have the guts to insult anyone then be prepared to get insulted also n if you love n respect kalpi then do but don't force me to do the same as I my not like you n never want to be n dare you again start your kalpi's sacrificing lecture infront of me otherwise I will not gone leave you raghav replied back n saying so he left from their leaving back frustrated n angry back who ever cursing raghav under his breathe...after this incident almost two weeks passed away n in this two weeks everything gets changed the two who were suppose to be each other's best friend were now had turned into each other biggest enemy,in this two weeks both raghav n sahil had not talked with each other even for one's,even for a sec n as for time being everyone is staying in Singhania mansion so whenever they both comes infront of each other they both use to give each other killer or you can say murderous look n moreover if any of their friend ever tries to put some efforts to mend up their broken friendship so they both just attack on him or her like if they both gets a chance they will kill him or her any time whereas on the side in this two weeks pakhi still see's kalpi's ghost many a times,everyone assume her to be mad n even she too wonders that whatever she is seeing or happening with her is in real or it is just her illusion,she totally forgets the difference between reality n dream,day by day her condition is getting worse, she don't know what to do or what not but now she was highly scared n fed up with kalpi's ghost, now she just wants to get rid of kalpi's ghost by anyhow whereas this time kalpi's ghost too had planned something special for pakhi or you can say its time for final showdown,the story is reaching to its climax so before pakhi do anything kalpi's ghost from nowhere just appeared infront of her n points the guns at her but before kalpi's ghost can fires up the bullet scared pakhi runs down all the way from her room to hall like a monkey n confess or you can say accept infront of everyone that yeah she is the one who had planned n plotted all this,who had killed kalpi,she is responsible for everything,she is the real culprit n by hearing all this everyone except raghav starts boiling in angry n specially sahil,he still cannot able to believe that for the first he fails to see a true face of a person,he fails to recognize a person,he trusted a wrong person who snatched away his lovely sis kalpi from him,who destroyed everything n more then pakhi he is angry on himself to let pakhi play with him,to trust her n adding fuel to fire were suhana's words she tells to sahil that did you even remember that once you had told all of us that if we all had a proof against pakhi then only we can raise our finger's on her,we can accused her but that time we all don't have any proof against her so we all remains quite but now she herself had accepted all her crimes so only also did you want any more proof against her,now will punish her for her deeds or now will punish yourself for trusting her so much,for being with her,for always being her strength,her biggest support,for giving her so much importance in your life which you too even knows that she never deserve it, for making her your sister,for giving her kalpi's place in your life,for allowing her to cheat,back stab you n in between all this Priya too speaks up n says sahil now also you had realised your mistake or not that how wrong you were for supporting her even by going against your own friend's,you scolds n insult all of us for this cheap girl but now you yourself see her true color,you trusted her more then all of us but what she gives you back in return now only because of her you had to go through all this,you have to bear so much of insult,taunts from everyone,just open your eyes n see that only because of her now you had to bow down your head in shame infront of your own friend's,we all many a times had warned you to not to trust her as she is not worth of anyone's trust n love but you never listen to any of us,you support her so now bear its consequence too...all this was enough for sahil,he was in so much angry that he let out all his angry,frustration on pakhi,he shouts on her n say pakhi you didn't done right,I will not leave you,how dare you even think of playing with my feeling's,emotions how could you stoop so low,don't you have any shame,if you had some shame left then just go n die somewhere or you better kill your own self...hearing all this pakhi just say I'm sorry,I'm so sorry,if possible then please atleast try to forgive me n after saying so she took a knife from fruit basket n was about to cut her wrist but raghav save her on right time n he says to sahil n everyone else that sometimes whatever we saw or hear could not be right n even sometimes we all fails to see what is true n right even if it is infront of our eyes n just accept whatever we thought is right or whatever we hear but sometimes its not right,we r no one to judge anyone...why r you still taking her side,supporting her the one whom had killed our friend,our kalpi suhana asked I'm not taking anyone's side suhana I'm just trying to show another side of a situation to you all raghav replied back...I know raghav you r saying all this to taunt,insult me just like others r doing n its all because of this girl,why did I trust her,how could I fail to see her true nature sahil says...no I'm not taunting or insulting you,I'm just saying what I think could be possible,why r you always takes my words in wrong way,why you never tries to understand me,my point of view, why you always doubts on me,on my intentions raghav replied back...whatever I know what you meant to say,raghav you n everyone else present here could insult me as much as you all want n I will not say even a single word to you all but before that I will not leave this pakhi because of whom all this is happening,because of whom I even went against my own friend but gets cheated in return sahil says again n after saying so he raised his hand to slap pakhi but before he could slap her someone's stops his hand n as he n others turns to see the person who had so much guts to stop his hand they all gets the biggest shock of their life by seeing the person who is standing infront of them,she is none other their own kalpi,she is totally fit n fine but with little bandages on her forehead n right hand as after all she had went from such a big accident so its obvious that she will take some time to get fully recover from her injuries but by seeing kalpi infront of her eyes pakhi starts shouting bhoot bhoot,please someone save me from her,she will not leave me,she will gone kill me,please save me...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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jiya

@SJ001

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

After blabbering pakhi just faints but no one cares about her n shoots up kalpi with lots of question that how could you r alive n if you r alive then why raghav lied to all of us about your death,where were you all this time,why you didn't tell this to anyone nor why you didn't come back to us n many more to which kalpi very calmly says have some patients guys,I will reply to your every question but first help me to wake up pakhi,she had gone through a lot just because of me... hearing this Priya sprinkler's some water on pakhi's face because of which comes back in her conscious n as soon as she opens her eyes she again starts shouting bhoot bhoot please someone save me,I don't want to get die so soon,she was not in her sense n were screaming n shouting like mad so to bring her back reality,into her sense kalpi gives her a tight slap because of which she comes back to her sense n as soon as she realised that kalpi was actually standing infront of her not her ghost she just almost jump on kalpi n gives her a bone crashing hug n says kalpi today I'm so so happy as you r back,god finally listen to all our prayers,thank god nothing happens to you,you r safe n sound,I was so much broken by hearing your death news but now everything will get back to normal, by seeing pakhi's concern for kalpi everyone is very surprised infact shocked,they all still cant able to digest the fact that the pakhi who use to hate kalpi so much was now worried for her,they all think its her new drama but for the first time pakhi was real so much concerned for kalpi,it was not her drama but kalpi's friends didn't care about this fact because all though pakhi had not killed kalpi but still she was the main reason of kalpi's all the pain,problems n suffering in her life n will always be so Priya,she almost pulls kalpi to herself n tightly hugs her n kalpi too respond the hug,even though pakhi feels very hurt when Priya pulls kalpi to herself but still she doesn't react as she very well knows that she had hurt kalpi a lot because of which she deserves this kind of behavior from everyone but raghav keeps his hand on her shoulder n assures her that have some patience everything will get fine one day to which pakhi nods her head n gives a fake smile after so much emotional scene sahil again starts his KBC n ask to kalpi that how come you r alive even after your death as we all had seen your dead body,that was not kalpi's dead body n to be alive after death first she has to die but she never dies,it was all our plan to bring out the real culprit n their was a another reason also for doing it,we had to do it because someone desperately wants to harm kalpi n that's why he or she tried many a times to harm kalpi but everytime gets fail so if this time also he or she gets to know that kalpi is alive n he or she failed again then he or she must have again tried to harm kalpi n moreover he or she will kept on trying until he or she succeed so with the help of doctor n police I spread this rumor that kalpi is dead so that she could get safe n secure n could recover faster without any problem raghav replied...so did you guys find out who is the real culprit,did pakhi was anyway involved in all this priya asked yeah me n raghav finds out who is the real culprit n pakhi was no way involved in all this kalpi replied then what was the need of that ghost drama priya again asked because they have a doubt on me that I was the one who planned all this afterall earlier I use to hate kalpi a lot n had hurt her a lot in my hatred so its obvious for anyone to doubt on me,I'm right na kalpi pakhi replied, yeah by denning your words I wont say a lie to u n everyone n whatever you said right now was right,you r the first person whom we both doubt for the accident n all other things but we had a strong reason's for doubting u n the first reason u give by yourself that you had done so much to me n secondly on my mehndi day you r the one who had forced me to go the parlor with you even though I dont want n most important you just back out at last min only,you made a excuse n when I said that I too dont want to go you forced me to go alone n then this accident happens so its obvious that we will doubt on you n we even tries a lot to find a proof against u but sadly we didnt get anything so we thought that you r very smart,you didnt leave any proof against you n then inspector tell us that if we cant able to find a proof against u then we have to make u confess your crime so we come up with a idea that we will target your weakness so we did this ghost drama kalpi replied...we you didnt tell any of us about it even though we kept on asking you,we all must have helped you but you didnt have trust on us na sahil asked its not like that sahil we trust you n everyone else n even I want to tell u all about this but I cant able to because from that accident day someone is continuously keeping an eye on my every activity that whatever I do,I say,Whom I talked n moreover someone even tries to hack my phone n lappy but they didnt succeed so you only tell me that who I tell you all about this n when but now everything will get fine as we get to know about the real culprit n its between among us only raghav replied...if it is so then raghav why so shows so much concern to kalpi n why did you even bring her here priya asked their was really a need to do all this because firstly I dont want pakhi to have a doubt on me n secondly I bring her here because I wants to keep an eye on her,on her every activity n it cant be possible if she stays in her home so I bring her here n even here its easy for me n kalpi to execute our plan raghav replied tell us who is the real culprit we all will not leave her sahil says... hearing this suhana made an excuse that she is not feeling well so she is to going to her home n start walking towards gate but kalpi stops het in middle n say suhana why r u in so much hurry, didn't u want to know that who is the culprit,who tried to kill your friend,don't u want to punish her, yeah I want but just see na I'm not feeling well n moreover for him or her u all r here na,to punish that cheap person suhana replied its her,yeah whoever who did all this planning n plotting is a girl n don't u want to know her ohh yeah sorry sorry I forgot that why would u have curiosity to know her name when it was u only who did all this...hearing this everyone gets shocked n suhana ask kalpi that what r u saying,r u out of your mind I'm is ur friend who supported u,be with u everytime n u r doubting on me that too without any proof,I didnt except this from u,I have strong doubt that someone had provoke u against me,who said that we dont have a proof against u raghav replied have some shame suhana at least now just confess ur crime when u r exposed n about proofs we have a soild proof against u,ur partner in crime mansi is right now is in police custody n she had told us everything that she was just a puppet of urs whom u had provoked against me by using her bhai's name,for her bhai's happiness n ur the actual mastermind behind all this,u r the one who wants to harm sorry wants to kill me from starting,u r the one who attacked on me many a times n even the mechanic whom u had given to fail my car break's on my mehndi police had arrested him too n he too had identified u so now ur game is over kalpi says yeah u r right kalpi I accept that I'm the only one who did all this,who tries to kalpi many a time,who provokes mansi against u n I have no shame for what I did suhana replied why did u do all this,u were her best friend na then why pakhi asked its because she had what I wanted,she had raghav n I use to love raghav too suhana replied but u use to say na that kalpi is mad,idiot for falling for a guy who is so much older then her then what happens to u prem asked yeah I use to say all this but what to do no one had control on their heart,anyone can fall in anytime n with anyone n in same way I too falls for raghav when one day in gardern I saw that who easily he handles kalpi,who much he cares about her,who he brings smile on her face n wipes out all her sadness n it makes me fall for him...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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sampa79

@sampa79

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Please update soon why raghav is doing all this

This suspense is killing

Update soon

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Gewels

@Gewels

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

This is great! Thanks a lot for the pm!

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0913155

@0913155

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Tooo good plz con soon thanks for PM😃😛

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swati

@Ragna1302

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Thanks for 3 pal damaka. ...
Awesome update. ...loved it...
Kalpi aunty 😲 😆 ...kalpi got not leave pakhi so easily. ...
Pakhi shame on her...kalpi get her parents support n love bcz of that she hate her...
Sahil support her...but he never let anyone to take kalpi place. ..n both raghav n sahil took pakhi side...
Y is raghav do that...its so confuse.
Plzz update soon

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