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The story starts with three middle class girls kalpi, pakhi n suhana,three of them were school friends they used to study in same school infact in the same class n now three of them were even in the same clg but three of them were complete opposite of each other in nature, one side both pakhi n suhana r smart,confident,extrovert n modern too they both always had bunch of friends n always lived their life's the way they wanted, they both always gets full freedom,they both had different different views about their life's n moreover they both doesn't like each other a lot but because of kalpi they r friends or you can say they r in talking terms with each other whereas on the other side kalpi she was shy,reserved,little bit fatty,introvert she had always lived her life in her parents guidance or you can say under her parents protection,she was never allowed to open her wings n fly high,her every decision was taken by her family infact due to her family overprotective nature she was never allowed to even talk with a boy,she always dreamed to live for herself,she wants to take her decisions by herself,she wants to make her own identity but she knows she cant,she had very limited friends but still above all this being the youngest member of the family she was the apple of everyone's eyes,she was pampered a lot by everyone n moreover it isn't that her parents don't trust her they do that's why they had given her the best electronic gadgets like lappy, smart phone because they very well that they r the basic needs of today's generation n even they r very helpful in today's world too n with smart phone she was always very much active on social networking sites like whats app, fb n twitter but by belonging to protective family her bhai always keeps an eye on whatever she posts or update on social sites so that she never lands up in any trouble n by seeing her family's love n caring nature it always overpowers her rebellious thoughts n moreover inspite of all this,inspite of every problem pakhi,kalpi n suhana are friends,good friends but three of them were never best friends,their r many a things or you can say secrets which they doesn't share with anyone not with their parents or not even with their friends but still three of them always sticks with each other in every situation, they doesn't let anyone to fall but suddenly one day slowly but things starts to change when kalpi one day on her whats app number gets a msg from a unknown number n as she replies to msg she gets to know that it was a wrong connection means it a wrong number n moreover the person who had sent her the msg turns out to be a boy,she tries to avoid him as much as she can but the boy doesn't leave her because he is somewhat chipkko type,he daily msgs her even though he doesn't get any reply in return but he doesn't give up n slowly but kalpi too start replying his msgs n as time passes they both start enjoying each others company, they both use to chat on daily basics n that too for many many hours n even late night too n as she is chatting with a boy so its obvious that she didn't tell her family nor her friends about this because she very well knows about their reactions but because of all this she always had a fear in her mind that what if one day she gets caught or something else happens but this time her heart always overpowers her mind as this is the first time she got any boy's attention rather then her bhai's n she is just loving n enjoying it,she doesn't want to let go this time as whenever she chats with that boy a big bright smile always formed on her lips n on the other hand the boy always says I Love You to her or even propose her for the marriage through their chats inspite of knowing the fact that they both had never ever meet each other or infact seen each other n may be could never ever able to meet or see each other but as its said na that love can happen with anyone, anywhere,we cant control our heart from loving a person so may be its really love between them n kalpi too start feeling something for that boy but she never express her feelings because she very well knows that they both belongs to two different family background n may be his family would accept her but her family wont ever accept him n their relation so she always tries to create a difference among them but fails,her heart always overpowers her mind,she starts losing her heart to him after chatting with him she feels like she was flying in the air,she just want him in her life so finally one day they both decided to meet each other n with this they both fix a place n a day to meet each other n the day they both were suppose to meet each other that day for the first time kalpi cares about her looks,she takes special efforts to get ready as she just wants to look her best afterall it was not a small day for her,today finally she going to meet a person whom till now she had meet only in her dreams,the person who stoles her heart n she was dying to see him so finally after taking almost two hours she gets ready n trust me she was looking like a angel who had just now come to earth from heaven but their was a problem in her going out as she knows that her parents will definitely ask or enquire her that where she is going n specially with whom so to avoid all their question she herself told them that she is going to mall with her friends n its for the first time in her life that she lied to her parents n moreover for the first time her parents happily gives her permission to go out n even give her some money to spend which they usually don't do but their gesture was making her feel more n more guilty,she just want to hug them n tells them everything but she cant as she doesn't have that much guts so she somehow compose herself n quickly went out,the day was looking like a mountain to her,today time was not passing for her,every second seems an hour to her but finally after 4 months 10 days they both meet,they both saw each other for the first time,it was not easy for both of them to find each other but they both did as its said na that love gives you strength to overpower every obstacle so the same happens with them n after meeting for the first time they both talk with each other face to face basically they both knows each other n finally after talking for almost two or three hours they both bids bye to each other n went to their respective homes n as soon as kalpi comes back her home she msg him but he for the first time he didn't reply back to her even though he was online that time n slowly as days passes it isn't that he didn't chat with her, he do but not like use to do earlier before their meeting which somewhere start irritating kalpi, she always keep wondering that what happens to him all of a sudden,did it was a wrong decision to meet him n yeah her biggest nightmare turns out to be true as one day when she goes along with suhana to that boy's house their was a party going on in his house,everyone was enjoying their best n when he saw them he welcomes them inside too n when one of his friend ask him about his girlfriend she was thinking that he will surely introduced her as his girlfriend among his friends but na her every dream gets shattered into pieces,her heart gets broke into million of pieces in that every single moment when he introduced someone else as his girlfriend n that too her own friends pakhi n through them she gets to know that he never loved her,he always loved pakhi n moreover all this while pakhi was his girlfriend infact it was both of their prank which they played on her,they both made they mockery of her emotions n feelings infront of everyone n they both even doesn't stop their only they both kept on insulting her by saying that no one can ever love a sample like her,the one who by chance every falls of her would be the dumbest person of the world n she just kept on bearing every thing silently,she was on the verge to cry but before that she just ask one thing to that boy that if he was already in a relation then whats the need to play with her heart,what if one day someone did the same thing with his sister, will he ever able to bear it...

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jiya

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Kalpi again says to prem[That boy] that you n pakhi broke my heart into million of pieces but still from that million of broken pieces of my heart I pray to god that you both always gets all the happiness in your life n yeah one more thing thanks for teaching me a life long lesson that true love n true friendship doesn't exist in this mean n selfish world,from now on I wont ever love or trust anyone in my life... hearing all this prem just bow down his head n closes his eyes in shame,he knows that whatever he n pakhi did with kalpi was wrong totally wrong n know he is really feeling guilty for playing with kalpi's heart, emotions,he thought that kalpi would slap him,insult him but instead of it still she was praying for their happiness,for their well being n it making him feel more n more guilty n now he feels like he cant live with guilt so he decided to apologise her inspite of knowing that she wont forgive him but still it will give some peace to his heart so he opens his mouth to apologise her but by the time kalpi had already left from their as she was on the verge to cry,her tears are all ready to pop out any time from her eyes n she doesn't want anyone to see her tears or see her in such a broken condition so she silently left from their but outside the party she found suhana waiting for her n as soon as she saw suhana she just hug her tightly even though she was not crying infront of her but her heart was bleeding like anything,she just wants to run from their or want to end her life but she knows she cant do it but atleast she can spend sometime alone for herself so with this thought after breaking the hug she slowly start moving away from her but suhana holds her hands as she very well knows that deep down in her heart her friend is very hurt n she needs someone to stood besides her n she wants to be pillar of strength to kalpi,she wants to console her,support her,assure her that no matter what happens she is always their for her n if she falls she is always their to hold her n it isn't that kalpi doesn't know all this she knew it that suhana wont ditch her like pakhi did but this she time she don't want anyone to support her as this time she wants to support herself,fight with herself,this time she wants to come out from her parents protective shield around her, this time she wants to face this situation by herself,this time she doesn't want anyone else to take a stand for her,this time she wants to stand for herself,wants to face everything whatever comes in her way by herself but now at this very moment she only n only needs sometime alone for herself so that she can let out all her pain but suhana was not at all ready to leave her alone because she is scared that in her such a broken state may be kalpi might end up hurting herself n she doesn't want that but kalpi assures her that may be she is weak but not that much that she hurts herself for the ones who don't even care about her to which suhana let her go alone its not that she is very much convened by kalpi's answer but still she let her go because she know that this time whatever she says or do wont ease kalpi's inner pain n moreover kalpi needs sometime for herself too to overcome all this so she left from their leaving her all alone n as soon as she left kalpi start walking on a empty dark road, thousands of thoughts were roaming in her mind but the most important is why it always happens with her,why she never gets what she wants,why they both plays with her heart,with her feelings,what they both get in return of all this...with all this questions she just broke down completely in the middle of road, she cries all her heart out so that it can ease all her pain n even it start raining too like god is too crying with her,like god is telling her that he is always with her,he is always their for her but she cries until she had no more tears to shed,until all her tears dried up n may be her tears don't take away all her pain but yeah after crying she is feeling very relaxed,very fresh,all ready to get broke down again because she knows that may be by this time even her family too gets to know about prem n what he did with her n she clearly knows that they wont support her at any coast instead they all will blame her for whatever happens which will be not else then a another heart break for her but now she is ready for it because she knows that she too did a mistake by hiding about prem from her family n for that now she is ready to bear up any punishment n with this determination she comes back her home n as accepted her entire family blames her,accuse her for everything,they all doesn't even bothers to look at her broken state,her pain from which she is going through,all the care about is their family reputation to which as per their saying kalpi was now a black dot on it n moreover they all even let out their frustration, angry on her by beating her many a times until she went unconscious n after that they all just lock up her in her room n restricted her to go out of the house or step out of her room, even they take away her phone n lappy too n then left her like this only to die...next morning when kalpi gains back her conscious she tries her level best to get up from bed but fails as her whole body was paining very badly because of continuous n harsh beating but she doesn't care about it because her internal pain is much much bigger then her external one,almost everyone fails to see her inner pain even her own family too n when even her own family doesn't respects about her feelings,emotions a bit then who come she accept her friend pakhi or others to respect her feelings...after this incident as time passes kalpi's family totally ignores her,they don't talk with her or if by any chance they do then they usually taunt her,insult her, she was not more then a stranger in between her own family,even though being in between her family also she feels totally alone, left out yeah suhana was always their for her but still how much she could support her but one day again everything gets changed n this time for good when kalpi sitting near the window of her room decides that now she wont live her life like this,from now on she wont let anyone control her or her life,from now she will live her life the way she always wanted that is only on her terms n condition,she very well knows that its not going to be that much easy people will always try to push her back,she will face numerous of problem which will sometime broke her down completely due to which she will feel giving up but still whatever it is she is ready for it as now she wants to experience the problems,difficulties,she wants to feel it,she wants to stand on her own,she wants to create her own identity no matter what happens n for that if now she had fight with her parents too then also she is ready n for the first time in this many days with this much self confidence n determination she step out of her room,she tries to get out of her house to feel this newly found confidence in her but as usually her parents stops her, taunt her but this time for the first time she fought back with them for herself,slowly but this bold, open minded kalpi starts overpowering that shy,reserved kalpi n even her parents were also surprised to see this side of their daughter too just like she herself was,she had never thought that she had that much strength,will power but she just loving this new phase of her life n finally after so many days she went out of her house yeah her parents let her go out n it was the first biggest victory of this new kalpi n soon she start exploring new things but then suddenly something caught her attention,she saw two boy's were misbehaving with prem's sis manvi n nobody is doing anything so first she thought to save her infact she start moving in that direction but then she stops in middle when whatever her bhai n pakhi did with her start roaming infront of her eyes due to which she start going back but then she again saw that pakhi too was their but she is doing nothing infact she was just chewing her apple N they were about to tore her clothes so she comes in between n save her...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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jiya

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while saving manvi kalpi herself gets hurts n her hand starts bleeding but she doesn't care about it instead she give manvi her jacket to cover up herself as her suit was somewhat torn from shoulder n meanwhile prem too comes their n by seeing her sis condition he understood that what might happen here n then he saw kalpi's bleeding hand too so to do her first aid he holds her hand but she jerk him away n warns him to be in his limits n just stay away from which made him feel more guilty he wants to say sorry to her n thank her but she just walk away from their by saying she will never ever forgets what he n pakhi did with her... -------------------4 years later----------------- After that manvi's incident four long years passed away but in this four years nobody had ever seen kalpi for even once,its like she vanished into thin air or might be she never exists in this world but yeah nobody knows where she went four years back some assume that she had committed suicide,some assumes that she died in accident but no one knows what exactly happened with her whereas on the other hand in this four years everything had changed in prem's life he broke up n then again patch up with pakhi but none of them were serious about their relation n moreover that cool,fun loving,full of life prem had changed to serious, angry,cold hearted,short tempered,now he was only living with a hope that one or another he will surely meet up kalpi n will apologise her for his deeds,he tries his every possible way to find her but he couldn't able to find her but their is something which not only him but others too don't know that their is someone who knows where is kalpi now n not only this but she or he even talks with her sometimes but the person only talks with her,he or she too had also not seen her in this four years n its none other her friend suhana who always their for her,who always stood up for her n later one day prem to gets to know about this so he requested suhana to plz call kalpi n plz ask her to come back though first suhana denies him a lot but at last agrees as for the first time she finds truth in his eyes due to which she cant able to deny him n she calls kalpi but instead of kalpi her friend aryan picks up the call n tells them that kalpi had went out n by mistake she had left her phone at home so plz call her later in the evening to which suhana tells him that whenever kalpi comes back home just tell her to call back suhana to which he says OK n with this they both cut the call...in evening when kalpi comes back home aryan convey suhana msg to her so in night after getting totally free she called up suhana n suhana requested her to plz come back to which she cant able to deny as its the first n only thing which she had asked from her till now so kalpi told her that she will come back by tomorrow evening to which pakhi told her to directly come to prem's house...hearing prem's name kalpi's bright smiling face gets pale,she gets silent for a while so suhana apologise to her for hurting her,for making her remember her painful past to which kalpi accept suhana's idea n told her that their is really no need to apologise as now she doesn't care about her past or about prem n moreover she had forgot prem n moved on in her life...hearing all this even unknown to prem also he felt a slight pinch of pain in his heart like someone had stabbed his heart but he anyhow controls his emotions n gets happy as finally tomorrow he will able to do for what he had waited for four long years n moreover he was damm excited to meet or see kalpi after such a long time n with the news of kalpi coming back tomorrow prem for the first time in this four years falls into such a deep slumber...next morning was a bliss for everyone n everyone was busy in preparations for welcoming back kalpi except pakhi as she was not at all happy with the news of kalpi coming back but still she cant do anything so she remains quite for time being but others they were really happy from the bottom of their hearts n for them every second is like hours n finally after everything the time comes when kalpi was about to come to prem's house n everyone was desperately waiting for her but she didn't come,10 mins,20mins,30 mins passed away but their no sign of her so suhana called her again n asked her that what happen,where is she to which kalpi reply that she is at their back so everyone quickly turns back n as soon as they all turns kalpi with excitement shouted surprises n as they all saw her they all stand still in shock so kalpi comes ahead infront of everyone n brings them back into reality by waving her hand infront of them or some by pinching them n then she ask everyone that how she is looking to which fabulous was the only word which split out from everyone's mouth n why not it be the shy,reserved,fatty kalpi who was always seen wearing Indian dresses were now standing infront of them with a complete makeover,now she had turned herself into strong,bold n mature girl n moreover that fatty kalpi was now looking absolute stunning in her modern dress with high heels n specially with her zero size figure,finally kalpi had achieved everything whatever she always wanted for herself n everyone was really very happy for her except pakhi,she was burning in jealous as till now she was only the center of attraction but now everyone's attention was on kalpi which is making her go crazy but no one cares about it as they all were busy in welcoming kalpi...even though prem's family doesn't know much about kalpi but one thing they all know for sure is that she is gem of a person who can easily be modeled in any shape n then after welcoming her inside they all one by one except prem n pakhi feed her,her favorite dish by their own hands n kalpi too enjoy their company a lot,they all were soo much busy in talking n chatting with each other that they doesn't even know when three hours passed away n when time comes for kalpi to bid bye all of them everyone was very sad except pakhi they tries to make many a excuse to stop her but nothing works out so they all just come out of see of her till gate but suddenly they all notice that all the four tyres of kalpi's car were puncture may be it could be prem's plan or may be not nobody knows about it but prem puts the entire blame on the small small children's who were playing outside to his house n he scolds them infact he was all set to slap one of among them but before he could do kalpi stops him by holding his hand but all the children's start crying so to make them laugh kalpi start doing funny funny things even she acts like joker to bring smile on their faces n soon all the children's start smiling n laughing n with all the children's kalpi too becomes the children,she plays with them, laugh,smile with them n others specially prem were just admiring her,her innocence's...after playing a while with children's kalpi n other comes inside n thinks what to do,who will kalpi go now but in between all this tension pakhi intentional makes chutney falls on kalpi's dress so kalpi went to washroom whereas others wonders that now who will drop kalpi in meantime someone comes their say "main hoon na" to which all looks at her n prem ask him who r u but before that person could answer prem again spoke up n ask pakhi that is he is your another part time boyfriend to which pakhi deny but say I wont mind making him my boyfriend as he is so hot n handsome n she stares her like this that anytime her eyes would pop out from her body n then again before that person could say anything prem spoke up in between ask suhana that is he is your boyfriend but suhana too denied n again the same happens n this time prem ask her sis manvi as now she is the left only but surprisingly manvi too deny so this time prem told to that person that may be he had come to wrong address n before he could say anything further kalpi comes out of washroom n as soon as she saw the person she just quickly runs towards him n soon they both were in a tight hug which surprise infact shock everyone their n prem he doesn't like it but they both were not ready to leave each other...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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As kalpi n that person were lost in their own world n were not ready to leave each other so to bring them back into reality prem start coughing fakely due to which they both come back into reality n when kalpi n that person break up the hug everyone start shooting numerous of questions to kalpi as who is he,did you know him n if yes then how,when,where,how did you guys meet to which kalpi very calmly reply that yeah guys I know him very well that's why hug him so at last prem ask her then why you didn't told us about your new friend till now n moreover why you didn't introduced him to us till now...sorry I forgot to introduce you guys but wait I will do it now kalpi replied back n then she introduced prem,pakhi,suhana n others one by one to that person n at last before she could introduce that person to all of them,they all together shouts up that we know he is your another friend like us...no you guys r wrong this time he is more then my friend,he is my best friend,my jaan,my life,my soul mate,my lifeline,my zindagi,my everything, mine n only mine raghav n moreover my soon going to be hubby but for now my finance kalpi replied back by showing her hand which had her engagement ring,hearing all this everyone was totally shocked specially prem,he cant able to believe what he had listen just now,the girl who had once told him that she wont ever able to trust or love anyone again in her life after his betrayal was right now happily telling all of them about her engagement n marriage or may be the reason of him getting shocked could be that he is hurt because unknown to himself also he start feeling something for kalpi but whatever it is kalpi for sure doesn't care about it or what might people say about her all she care about it is her raghav,she was too busy in dreaming about her raghav that she totally forgets about her surrounding due to which for the first time pakhi n prem gets to know that how it feels when people neglects you or avoids you...with this after meeting up n inviting everyone for a small get together at raghav's house tomorrow both raghav n kalpi left from their on raghav's bike,the bike on which kalpi always dream to get a ride with prem but now its with raghav but indeed she was more then happy then she could be of with prem n its makes prem more n more jealous of raghav whereas on the other side for the first time any boy n that too such a hot n handsome boy avoids pakhi because of kalpi made her feel jealous of kalpi,both prem n pakhi were burning in jealous but right now all they could do is nothing so they just sit quietly waiting for the right time whereas on the side raghav drops kalpi infront of her house n request her to just once go n meet her family as from the time she had come back to Delhi she had not even for once meet or seen her parents n as kalpi cant able to deny raghav's request went inside her house...her parents were damm happy to see their beloved daughter back after such a long time but their was not a single sign of happiness of kalpi's face n moreover when they all tried to talk to her,love her she even talk rudely with them n directly went inside her room n lock it so that none of her family member could come inside n disturb her unnecessarily,isn't that she doesn't love her family she love them a lot afterall they were her own family,her own parents because of which she comes in this world but now the pain which they all had injected inside her throughout all of her life overpowers the love which she had for them,its really sad for girls to get killed before their birth only but its worse to get born in such a family where she was given a right to birth but still nobody cares about her feelings,emotions all they care about is to dominate their child,control her life by anyhow,always force their decision,life style on her but she knows her family too always loved her a lot but that one prem accident changed everything,all the love which they had for her changed into hatred n she gets to know it when one day she hears her parents talking about her marriage n that too with the man who is triple of her age so that they can get rid of her as soon as possible n people doesn't get to know about this incident n moreover their is no bad effect on their family name n because of all this she concludes that she is not more then a burden on her own family n that was the sole reason of her running away from her house n her family n today she is here because of raghav only,if raghav wouldn't had requested her she would have not even seen their faces too but she doesn't hate them that much she loves raghav n her room she tore a her family photo n says to herself that no matter what happens but I will never ever forgives you,when I need you all the most instead of supporting me you guys taunt me,insult me,hates me so now I hate you all from the bottom of my heart n this hearted which I had for you all would never turn into love,now I had only one family n that is of raghav,now I had no relation with you all n with this she falls asleep by hugging raghav's photo...next morning kalpi totally ignores her family,she not even for once had talked with anyone n as soon as she gets freshen up she was all set to left from their but her parents stops her n ask her to join them for breakfast but she again avoids them which makes them more angry but they control their angry n more then angry they all r very hurt by her behaviour,its not that they doesn't love her,they all love her most n by the time they all had realised their mistake that they were always were unfair n mean towards their daughter n now they want to repent their mistakes but now their daughter doesn't give a damm to it,she had already gets hurts a lot n now she doesn't want to get hurt more so she again silently start walking towards the gate but again her parents stops her,they cares her face lovingly n requested her to please forgive all of them n specially just forgets everything n starts a fresh with them where their is only n only love for each other nothing else but kalpi just laughing tells them all to stop their love shove crap as now she doesn't believe them all a bit n if they all were saying truth then also she doesn't care about it n because of this for the first time they get the taste of their own medicine,they gets to know that who it feels when your loved ones hurts you the most,how it feels when people avoids you whereas on the others side after such a sleepless night n disaster morning both prem n pakhi with their friends comes up at raghav's house bit early in the evening with a hidden motive that is to keep kalpi n raghav away from each other n moreover to create a crack in their love story but as its said na that destiny always unplans our planned things n moreover no one knows what is written in our destiny so changing it was never a option in the same way when prem n pakhi thought that kalpi n raghav would be alone in the house with their family n it will very easy n good time for them to execute their plan but surprising infact shocking to them they found bunch of raghav's n kalpi's friends in raghav's house n moreover both raghav n kalpi was no where to be seen in hall so pakhi search raghav in the entire house n at last finally she enters into his room n gets amazed seeing him working out without his t-shirt,she just kept on staring him until raghav feels someone presence in his room n gets up to see n by seeing him up pakhi hurriedly thinks to leave from their n in all this hustle bustle she just by mistake was about to fall but before she could fall raghav holds her on right time n they both share a eye lock in that half bend position only n shocking to them kalpi enters raghav's room at that very moment only n misunderstood them due to which she scolds pakhi very badly n soon pakhi left from their with tears after she left raghav scolds kalpi due to which they both end up fighting n kalpi too angrily left from their leaving behind the guilty raghav, yeah raghav too is angry on her but still he knows about her condition too whereas after coming out of raghav's room kalpi just sits in the garden n cries silently...

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when kalpi was crying,suhana also comes their n silently sits besides her,by feeling someone's presence around her kalpi quickly wipes off her tears but it doesn't go unnoticed by suhana so she ask her who are you, you are not the same old kalpi which I use to know,the one who use to cares for others feelings,emotion,who smiles in others happiness,who makes others smile by her antics,who always tries to make everyone happy around her,the one who can even die for her loved ones... suhana again says to her that may be it hurts you but this new kalpi is very mean,selfish,who only cares about her,you have changed a lot in these four years n I don't this changed side of yours,I really don't like this mean kalpi,I want my old kalpi back please...hearing all this kalpi calmly ask her that how did after four long years in one encounter with me you get to know that I had become mean, selfish or whatever,she says to suhana that I really don't care what you or others think about me n you says na that I'm selfish then yeah I'm mean n selfish who doesn't care about anyone except herself but its all of because of what I had get throughout all my life,life was always very rude, mean to me n even my parents n friends too so now whatever I had got in life,I'm just returning it back to all of them n I guess its nothing wrong in all this right n moreover now I just love to be mean n selfish so that I don't went from another heart break because this time I wont able to bear it,if this time again something like this happens with me na then this time I just might end up giving my life...she again says to suhana that you know that my life was always very unfair to me,I had always lost more then what I had always gained,I had always n always gone through heart breaks only whether its is of from my family,my friends or from my so called boyfriend,I had almost everytime lost my loved n dear ones,I had almost spent half of my life in crying n now I really don't want to go through all that again,this time I cant able to loose my raghav,I cant live without my raghav,he is not only my love but my life too n I cant afford to loose him,I will die without him n all this thoughts just made me damm overprotective for him n I reacted that way nothing else n if you still think that I'm mean n selfish then yeah I'm n I will gone be like this only,I won't gone change myself for anyone,after her conversation with suhana kalpi found a pair of strong arm hugging her from back n as she turns she found raghav hugging her so she too hugs him back tightly n silently cries in his arms so after breaking the hug raghav first wipes her tears away n then cups her face n say I'm sorry kalpi,I never meant to hurt you,please forgive me,I promise you I will never ever let anyone to hurt you or made you cry n as I'm your life you too are life,I too cant imagine my life without you,you means everything to me,you are my world n just have faith in me I will not let anyone to come in between or to separate us,I will always gone be your n only yours trust me...hearing all this kalpi again embrace raghav into a tight bone crashing hug n he too respond back equal,they both silently crying in each others arms feeling the heavenly pleasure they both were going through whereas both prem n pakhi who were standing far away from them were burning in jealous n its clearly visible on their faces,on the other hand when both kalpi n raghav break their hug suhana just wholeheartedly thanks raghav for coming in her friend life's,for always being their for her n supporting her in all the ups n downs,for always protecting her, for making her smile again,for getting back her belief on love again,for always trusting n loving her in short for everything n with this soon trio shares a group hug n after this they went inside whereas both pakhi n prem decides to teach them a lesson which they will remember all their life n with this she too went inside with prem n as said by raghav when kalpi apologise to pakhi for her rude behaviour pakhi decides to targeted on weakest point of kalpi that's dancing,earlier being her friend she very well knows that kalpi doesn't know the ABC of dancing,so she challenges kalpi to have a dance off with her to gain her forgiveness though first kalpi denies a lot but when everyone forces her a lot so finally she accepts n with this the competition beings between them...first pakhi dances n she dances really very well n now its kalpi's turn so pakhi thought that she will gone very nervous but shocking to her kalpi was bit confident n then as the songs starts kalpi starts doing some steps but ending up falling due to pakhi n her friends start laughing n making fun of kalpi but literally when pakhi told everyone that as she is the winner of this competition she wants to go on a romantic candle light dinner date with raghav as her gift which is high time for kalpi finally she shows pakhi n all her friends that she too can dance infact much better then them n till now what she was doing was all a drama... she dance n that too much much better then that of pakhi but at the end when her dance was about to finish a chandelier was almost about to fall on her but prem saves her in nick of time by hurting himself a bit n because of all this their was a bright smile on prem's face may be because he was behind all this n with motive he had done all the gets succeeds whereas pakhi was burning in angry may be because she was behind all this planning n her whole plan was flopped by prem, anything could be possible but now the things that matter the most for everyone is that their kalpi is fine,nothing happens to her n after thanking a lot to prem n scolding all the workers present their raghav just quickly embrace kalpi into tight hug without caring for everyone,the thought of loosing his kalpi killed him thousands a time,now he cant imagine his life without kalpi,he would rather prefer dieing then leaving without her but by seeing their such a close unbreakable bond except prem n pakhi their is one more person present their who was not at all happy n its none other then raghav's mom gauri,its not that she hates kalpi na she likes her but she always wants a traditional, bit shy type girl like pakhi for her son not modern n bold full on pataka type like kalpi for her son...she knows that her raghav's like kalpi a lot n that's the only reason she is silent till n bearing kalpi in her sons life otherwise she gets a chance na then she would definitely not think twice before throwing kalpi out her sons life n her house too, everyone was busy in their own planning n plotting but above all this raghav was only concern for his kalpi so he takes her to his room for some rest even though his mother appose to this but he didn't care n like these four days happily passed away in shopping, purchasing of dress,jewellery for wedding n other function n in other necessary arrangement too with the bit tadka of romance n nok jok but on the fifty day again something wrong happens with kalpi that's is when she comes to meet raghav at his house firstly someone tries to attack her with knife n then when on raghav's mom insists she sits for breakfast she suddenly faints n something like white foam was coming out of her mouth so with raghav everyone rushes her to hospital where after treating her doctors told everyone that she had given a strong poison n if by chance they all get late even for a min more in bringing her here then they might have lost her till now but now she is absolutely fine...hearing all this everyone gets very happy but raghav was in tension that who was behind all this n who had such an enmity with kalpi that he or she even tries to kills her n as now kalpi is save so might could be he or she again tries to kill her which raghav cant afford so he decides to appoint two bodyguards for kalpi but she herself had denied it n after lots of insists finally raghav too agrees with kalpi but only god knows that in future it might could turn out his life's biggest mistake or not but for now in present raghav decides to spend as much as time he could with his life,his kalpi before her going away from him...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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As time passes the love bond between kalpi n raghav grows more n more stronger,with time they both gets depend on each other,their life is incomplete without each other n finally as the day of their marriage starts comes closer they both were damm excited for it,they both were very happy to step into the new face of their life but their happiness doesn't last for long as on the mehndi day when kalpi was talking with raghav over phone on her way while returning back from parlour she gets to know that the break of her car were failed when she tries to apply the break due to which she starts getting panic n she tells the same to raghav also who gets worried but still for his kalpi he controls himself n keeps telling her to clam down n jump out of the car as soon as possible but as the speed of the car were very high it start going here n their n kalpi doesn't get time to jump out of car n then suddenly a boy comes infront of kalpi's car so to save that boy kalpi takes a U turn n by mistake she gets in a one way n then she saw her death coming towards her that's a truck n that too in full speed coming towards her due to which she tries to find a way to escape but due to her bad luck their was no way to escape from their so finding no other way finally she gives up,she even stop trying n accept what is written in her fate,destiny due to which at last she gets hit by a truck n she lies on the floor in pool of blood but before getting hit by a truck her last words to raghav were that I'm sorry n I love you whereas on the other side after hearing the thud sound over the phone raghav breaks down n was continuously screams for kalpi's name so everyone tries to console him n ask him what happen but it seems impossible for everyone,ignoring everyone he just hurriedly rush out of house n kept on calling kalpi's number whereas some road siders takes kalpi to a near by hospital n raghav too reaches their after getting informed through the same road siders over kalpi's phone...as soon as raghav comes to the hospital he gets to know that kalpi is getting operated n her condition is damm very critical so he directly rushes inside OT even though nurses n ward boys tries to stop him a lot, after sometime everyone too comes their even kalpi's parents too n they all see raghav struggling with them due to which they all get to know about kalpi but before anyone from family could stop raghav he just went inside the OT...after almost four hours raghav comes out of the OT n seeing him out everyone hurriedly rushes towards him n ask him numerous of question but he remains silent,he just breaks down on the floor n cries his heart out,he kept on saying that I losther,I lost my life,my kalpi,she died leaving me alone in this world,she broke her promise,she left me, today I lost my everything...hearing all this tears comes out from everyone eyes but they all hide it,their pain for raghav as they know that now raghav needs them n their supports the most,today he had lost something which will never going to return back in his life, today he had lost the love of his life,his everything n they all very well knows this too that no one can take kalpi's place in his life n he is incomplete without her but now as she is dead they cant do anything,they cant bring her back as she had gone very far away from all of them but raghav is here n they cant loose him so they have to be strong for him,they have to be always their for him but raghav doesn't care for anyone he just silently left from their leaving everyone behind... gauri,pakhi n others wants to go behind him but raghav's dad n prem stops them n tells them to let raghav stay alone for sometime n halfheartedly but they agree whereas on the other side after coming out of the hospital raghav meet that doctor who had just now operated kalpi,raghav gives him the bundle of notes n warns him to always keeps his mouth shut n never dares to tell anyone that he is mastermind behind kalpi's death,he is the one who is responsible for kalpi's death n the doctor just takes the money from him n nods his head in yes n when raghav signals the doctor to leave he just left from their n once he left raghav just takes the drop of his tear on his finger n throws it in air n then laughs evilly,he pats on his shoulder n praise himself for his such a brilliant performance n drama whereas someone is listening all this by behind the pillar...next morning at raghav's house everyone was sitting in hall in white dresses n were mourning over kalpi's death body but raghav he just come down from stairs in his cool dude style n by seeing him like this everyone gets shocked n stares him like he is some alien or anything,everyone ask him what's all this,what happened to you so he just start his drama again n replied back to everyone that now I doesn't care if kalpi is alive or not as she was the one who had broke our promise, she was the one who had left me alone n gone far away from me so now on I too had decided to move on in my life without kalpi,I had decided to forget her for forever...hearing all this kalpi's dad just gets totally mad,angry on raghav n he slapped him many a times,he kept on asking raghav that you love her na then how can you forget her,her love for you in just one day,doesn't you have any shame,she always loved you unconditional n see what are you doing,you are insulting her love n yours too,you are making mockery of your love,she always trust you wholeheartedly n you doesn't take even a second to broke her trust,you don't deserve her or anyone else love,you are good for nothing,you are a heartless creature who doesn't have any emotions,any feelings, any sentiments, just get away from my site before I end up killing you saying so he just pushed away raghav which angered raghav too n with the same angry he replied back to kalpi's dad that you are no one to judge me or my love,if I loved kalpi or not it's none of your business n before pointing out of others mistakes one must first look himself n the mistakes he had done n moreover if you are saying that I'm hurting her soul na then just remember you n your family had always hurt her n soul all her life,she had always craved for your all love but she never got it n if I'm wrong then you are always very much wrong then me...seeing raghav's attitude towards someone who is elder to him gauri couldn't able to take it anymore n because of it she end up giving a tight slap cross raghav's face n as raghav had never accepted this from his mom he just silently stand their by placing his hand on the cheek where he got the slap,gauri asks raghav to apologise to kalpi's dad but he just angrily left from their, yeah its true gauri never liked kalpi much but still she knows that kalpi was always a nice girl, circumstances forced her to change a lot n she really admires that how maturely kalpi had always accepted n face all the problems n situations of her life, yeah she knows everything about kalpi's past but still because of this reason she can't accept kalpi, the girl who in her past used to love someone else,the girl who's parents,family never loved her, respects her views,feelings,the girl who doesn't have any traditional values that girl can never be her choice for her son, she doesn't hate kalpi nor she loves her but beyond anything she cant see her son insulting anyone n that too a person who is much elder to him whereas seeing all this someone is laughing inside his/her heart n he or she is the same person who had listen raghav's conversation with doctor outside the hospital...after this incident raghav n kalpi's friends who had come to their wedding decides to go back that same day only because they all still cant able to believe that the raghav who they all know,the one who loves kalpi more then his life can changed soo much in just one day after her death or he is always like this only but they all fails to see this,to understands him but whatever it is now nothing can happen,they cant change raghav's mindset nor any of them want,the raghav they all know till now n this raghav are totally different,may be this raghav is fake or may be that one was always fake only god knows this...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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As raghav was sitting in garden,one of his friend Priya comes their n sits besides him but none of them were saying anything,their was a pin drop silence between them so Priya decided to break the silence,she says to raghav that may be others trust you or not but I trust you as
I know n had always seen that how much you loves kalpi n cares for her,she use to be your life,you cant ditch her...may be everyone think you as cheater but I had full faith on you that you were doing all this for a reason n I'm sure the reason is very big that's why you didn't sharing it with us also but you can trust us n moreover about your forgetting kalpi n moving on in your life I know you cant do that,I know you cant forget kalpi so easily,its just impossible for me but for others too to be believe,I don't know that this raghav is fake or the raghav we all use to know but whatever it is the love you always had for kalpi was not at all fake n that love cannot be just vanished into one day,its really hard to love or we all don't want to believe it...all this while raghav was totally silently but at last he spoke n he told to Priya that may be you all believe or not but it wont change the truth,I had just forgot her n that's it whether you all believe it or not its up to you guys,he again says to her that you know what Priya me n kalpi had promise each other that we will always gone be with each other throughout all our life,in all ups n down we will never gone leave each other,we will become each others strength but see what she did she broke her promise,she left me alone to face everything,you all says na that I cheated her,ditched her but the fact is that she is the one who cheated me,ditched me not me,if she can broke her promise n can left me then why cant I just forgot her n move on in life,why I'm not allow to do that,why I'm not allowed to live my life again without kalpi,you said na that their is a reason behind my sudden change of behaviour yeah you are right their is a reason n kalpi is that reason,is just that I want to totally forget her,I want to erase everything which reminds me about her,she had gone away n she wont come back but I'm still here,I had my rest of life to live n whether we accept it or not but everyone needs someone or others supports so why cant I love someone again,why cant I fall for again,why you all are forcing me to live my life in loneliness...hearing all this Priya just bow down her head as she knows that whatever raghav is saying was right n now she had nothing to say so she starts going back but then she again stops, turns n says to raghav that whatever it is, you say or not but being your friend I can see in yours eyes that you still loves kalpi soo much,she is your life n you cant forgot her so easily,even your death also cant make you forgot kalpi,you both were made for each other,destiny had made you guys for each other,this story is not started to left incomplete life this,yours love story will surely get completed n I'm damm sure that you are hiding something big from all of us but just trust us once we all are your friends,we all can go to any extend to help you n you know that very well so just for once share your secret with us we all will surely try to help you even much more then we can,trust us to which raghav just told her that their is nothing,no secret that I'm hiding from you all but if you trust me just stay here for some more days n make others too agree for this...I promise you I n others wont go from here until you yourself will tell us to leave Priya replied back n saying so she left from their,inside the house everyone ask her numerous of question that did raghav says anything to her,did he tells her that why he is doing all this etc to which Priya says no he didn't said anything to me but I had seen in his eyes that he still loves kalpi a lot n whatever he doing is for a reason that's why he didn't want any of us to leave from here which makes sahil [another friend of raghav & kalpi] hell angry as he always thinks kalpi as her sister n due to which he quite rudely says to Priya that their is nothing which he is hiding from us,the fact is that he never loves kalpi n that's why now its very easy for him to forget her infact I had strong doubt on him that he is the one behind kalpi's death n he wants us to stay here so that he can make mockery of our feelings n emotions too like the same way he had made mockery of kalpi's love n trust but I wont allow him to do this,I wont let him hurt any of my closed ones this time n we all are going back right now only...hearing all this everyone stands still in shock that how can he put such a big blame on their best friend n his too without any proof but they didn't argue with him too because they understands his mind set too,he is not in his sense right now as he had lost something which is very precious to him,he had lost his sister n its obvious for any bother to react like this so they all had deal with him very carefully but for now their first priority is how to convince him n their half of their others friends too to stay here for some more time but to sigh a relief Priya comes up with a idea,she gives kalpi's swear to sahil n others n told them that if they ever loved kalpi then they wont go from here until raghav tells them to which halfheartedly but they all agrees to stay back just for their kalpi n like this whole one week pass away with nothing much but little bit of tiff between raghav n sahil as sahil is still angry on raghav but raghav never takes his words serious but after one week a incident took place which shocks everyone specially pakhi,she saw kalpi's ghost in her room n that too infront of her own eyes in full white saree with droplets of blood falling dip dip from her forehead n their is so much silence that even the dip dip of blood was even clearly heard which is scaring pakhi like hell,she is literally shivering but with her full strength she ask her that who are you,you cant be kalpi as she is dead,why you had come here,what you want,if you want money or jewellery take it but please for god sake just spare me n then she even throws a flower vase towards kalpi's ghost but she miss her shot due to which kalpi's ghost laughs n say better luck next time but for now yeah you are right I'm not kalpi but I'm her ghost who had all the way come from hell to take her revenge from you as I know you are the one who had killed me n shows it as a accident because of which I cant able to get my love,my raghav,my biggest wish of spending my rest of the life with raghav lefts incomplete just because of you so now I wont leave you,now I will use you n your body to get my raghav back,your pay back time starts now saying so she again laughs which shocks pakhi like hell,she stumbles but spokes that yo yo yo you ca can can't d do this to me,I had not killed you,may be you had misunderstanding please leave me,you can't get inside me body...I can being a ghost I can enters into anyone's body n can control him or her as per my wish n now I had chosen you so you want or not you cant do anything kalpi replied back n she even writes something on mirror with lipstick because of which pakhi didn't get anything so she just runs out of her room as fast as she can due to which she even stumbles many a times n even gets hurts too but she didn't case n when she come out of her house that time raghav n some of his friends too comes their n ask her what happens to which she told them everything n hearing all this they all starts laughing on her n said to her that may be you had watched some horror movie before sleeping that's why you are seeing ghost everywhere around you to which pakhi shouts on them n say just stop laughing n I'm not joking its truth,I had really seem kalpi's ghost in my room, come I will show you all n then she almost drags raghav to her room n others follow them but shocking to pakhi no one was their,she even takes them to mirror where kalpi's ghost had written something but surprising to her now their is nothing,like nothing was ever written their because of which everyone again starts laughing on her n say may be you had gone mad...

Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 9 years ago

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sweet1308

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice jiya

Its lovely but plz make ragna trust each other n fight the devil

Update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its awesome jiya
kalpppi suffered a lot and now she is strong girl who own her own identity
prem realize bis mistake but ot too late and he deserved it
now raghav is the mam of her life
Complete soon