Undiscovered feelings - Ashna/Ragna love story Epilogue updated pg 22 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 9

Next morning feeling better than she felt in a long time. The burden she is been carrying has been lifted. And she is no longer confused about what she wants and what she should do. She was little disappointed not to find Raghav next to her but she realized that he made her to sleep her in her bed and went back.

Kalpi decides to end the things. She doesn't want Prem to know before anyone can hurt him. So she decides to speak to Prem. A smile graces her lips as she moves out of bed to freshen up. She receives an text from Prem. He apologizes for his unexpected meeting and wont be able to meet her today. She is quite relieved by the messages as she has time to prepare for what she must do.


Her mind briefly ponders the scenarios of her breakup with prem thinking

A life with Raghav...

Kalpi builds up her courage to face Prem and the truth. With a bounce in her step she makes her way to the kitchen to prepare her coffee. The day passed by Kalpi's though.


The next day the mintunes feels like years as Kalpi waits for Prem to arrive. It is true, waiting is the hardest part. As we feel this line when we are eargly waiting for Ashna story updates
... Still Kalpi thinks and believes that everything will go smoothly. She pulled out from her thoughs again when she heared Prem calling her. Their eyes meet
Prem greets her with a bright smile. She smiles back despite what is about to do and to inflict. She knows it is for the best and there is no doubt about breaking Prem's heart. Once she broke Raghav's heart and now Prem's. While it will cause him unspeakable pain in the short term but they will be better later. And this is right as she doesn't want to spoil 3 lives altogather.


Prem moves forward to embrace her but Kalpi stops him with her hand against his chest. His joyous expression turns to an confussed one. Before Prem can ask what's wrong Kalpi says those dread words.

He is immediately on alert. His body becoming tense she decides to go with direct approach. Taking a deep breath Kalpi starts speaking.


Kalpi begins and tells Prem about her visit to Raghav after his mom's died. She said him how sorrowful and pain Raghav was which broke her heart. She tells him that her first instinct was to comfort Raghav to show him that he wasnot alone which led to another and another and eventually she has fallen for Raghav.

After that revelation Prem's expression changes his eyes filling with a mix of hurt, betrayal and anger but he manages to hold his tongue. She proceeds to tell Prem that how this gesture of love had grown into something deep profound and powerful.


After pausing for a moment she again continues to tell him how guilty she felt for betraying him and how she decided to save their relation and so she ended with Raghav.

Hearing this part Prem's heart caused hope to brighten. But it was short lived what she has to say next is difficult but after taking a deep breath she continues that her heart belongs to Raghav and she wants to be honest.


She apologizes for betraying him and for not telling him the truth sooner. Kalpi tells Prem that he is a wonderful man and a good person and he doesn't deserve this. Removing their engagement ring she takes his hand and place it in his palm. He looks at it with sadness and disbelief in his eyes before looking back to her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Superb update. ...
Finally kalpi confess to prem. .n tell him truth. ...
Loved it. ..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊Lovely update THANKS .finally kalpi decide with whom she want to spend her life .glad she told every bit of truth to prem .instead of spoling three life its better one will hurt before its get too bad .now waht will be prems reaction and waht will be he do ?for that please update soon .wating
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A logical. decent and fair decision by Kalpi for all. Great update. Thanks. Loved reading it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 10

She sees the questions, the doubt in his eyes and assures him that there is nothing he could have done to prevent this relation and that he is not at fault and did not do anything wrong. She also assures him that its not an competition or is he lacking in some regards or Raghav being a bettet man. ( hope u all understand what im saying here. )

Looking deep into his eyes, she saus with complete conviction and sincerity that it is all about destiny, that she and Raghav were destined to be together.


As difficult as it is for Prem, she is pleased to see him handling it with dignity and class. While she is not happy for hurting him at the same time. She can't deny how relief she feels as she notices a kind of resigned acceptance in his eyes.

A part of Kalpi would like to hear him say something atleast to yell at her but she can feel that he is too much in shock at tje moment to say anything.


Breaking the silence she apologizes once again. She then thanks him for loving her for being a wonderful friend. She also says she hopes that someday they can be friends again. She tells him that she hopes that he will find his love someday because he deserves to be happy to have someone who loves him.

Having said what she needed and wanted watching him collapse into the nearest chair presumably from shock, she reaches to comfort him but he raisesca hand and halts her. He looks up at her with tears of pain and anger in his eyes and he slowly shakes his head.


Looking into his eyes one last time she gives him a small bittersweet smile before turning away and walking out the door.

As much as Kalpi hated to break Prem's heart she is relieved that it is over. And she is free from her inner turnmoil. She expected the situtation to be worse, she has expected more of a reaction from Prem. Its not she is conplaining of how smoothly all ended but she was suprised by the happening.


With a renewed sense of determination, she calmly and confidently makes her way outside where she finds Raghav waiting patiently for her. Their eyes met, she can see the concern in his eyes, wondering if his kalpi is okay. A slow geniue smile graces her lips as an answer to his unspoken query which was replaced with a bright smile from Raghav too. Kalpi quicks her steps and hugs Raghav immediately ad his arms wrap around her. She felt light and energnized.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Poor prem n ragna they so relief
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

Nice update

Poor prem n ragna they so relief
Update soon


thank you ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinnapatel

😊Lovely update THANKS .finally kalpi decide with whom she want to spend her life .glad she told every bit of truth to prem .instead of spoling three life its better one will hurt before its get too bad .now waht will be prems reaction and waht will be he do ?for that please update soon .wating


thank you yaar. yes kalpi did right by speaking the truth to prem.
u would know prem's reaction in next chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

A logical. decent and fair decision by Kalpi for all. Great update. Thanks. Loved reading it


thank you...im very happy u loved it

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