Undiscovered feelings - Ashna/Ragna love story Epilogue updated pg 22 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update...sad😭😭😭...pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊lovely update .its pain 😭when see broken raghav .know its not kalpis fault but she need see her true love other wise three life will be destory .update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 7

It's been a month since she made her choice. A day doesn't go that regret her what she has done. She knew it would be difficult at first but things would get better with time. She though that her feelings for Raghav would diminish and they could be friends again like before. Unfortunately, things haven't worked at that way.

Absence really does make the heart grow fonder. The same kalpi's feeling for Raghav have been intensified instead of diminishing. His absences in her life made her empty. She hasn't seen him since the fatefull day. The day she nearly destroyed him.


He is purposefully avoiding her and she can't blame him for that. After all she is the one who wantted and started this. She broke his heart by choosing Prem over Raghav.

She tried to move on but it is impossible to move on when she sees his image everywhere she goes. She sees him in magazines on tv, on news repport even in billboards. Even when she closes her eyes she sees him. Every time she goes to sleep she dreams of him. She dreams of him proposing his love for her, dreams of marrying him, dreams of being pregnant with their first child and having many more childrens.



She can't even count the number of times she almost contacted him. The times she dialed his number on her mobile never able to press the "call" button. The times she thumbed out an text but never send him instead deleted it. The times she written an email and unable to press "send".

She wants to run to the top of the building and scream his name or just go to see him but she never does it.


Ofcourse she is missing Raghav is not only the issues she is dealing over for the past month. She also has to deal the fact that she is engaged to Prem, a man who has done nothing wrong, who loves her truly. She dies inside her whenever she gives a fake smile to Prem. He is a good man and doesn't deserve what is happened.


Closing her eyes, she thinks about the state of her life. What a mess it is now. Messing not only hers but also Prem's and Raghav's. Exploding in a heart wrenching sobs shaking her entire body, her legs tremble and buckle. However before her knees hit the floor a pair of strong arms encircle her. Eyes full of tears she looks up into the eyes of the person she is been longing to see.

RAGHAV...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Omg why doesn't she tell Raghav she loves him 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Both part r awsome. ...👏
I loved u story dear...😳...u writing r superb. ...do continue. ..
It's emotional story. ..n kalpi side. ..n both r how feel 4 eachother ...n how raghav accept her decision. ...its so beautiful. ..Update soon. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update Abi
Kalpi fighting with her inner fear...nor she accept him nor she refuse him.
And prem he has no fault
She should tell him truth..I wish he understand her.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice chappy dear..

Waiting for nxt chappy..

Plz update soon..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update. Here , I think Kalpi deserves whatever pain she is suffering ! She brought it on herself, in addition causing pain to Rags and Prem. She deserves 'what she had doled out' ! Great story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 8

RAGHAV...

He is still holding her, protecting her from falling. His eyes still filled with pain and anguish dud to her actions and also filled with love care and concern for her.

She assumes he must have heared her sobs and came to see if she is alright. But she knows that what he heard is not her sobs but her heart screaming in agony, crying out for him. Whatever the reason for his being there but she is grateful beyond words. She throws herself against his body, wrapping his arm around her as tightly as she can burying her face in his chest as she cries tears of sorrow and joy.


She is not sure how long they stay like that wrapped in each others arms. Suddenly she is very aware of their position but she brushes it aside and thinks haven't I suffered enough? hasn't he suffered enough? Her answer to both question is YES.

Her mind made up, she takes a step back maintains her hold on him. Looking up into his eyes, she tries to speak only to be captured by Raghav. As she feels his lips on hers with full of love and care. Time seems to stand. She feeks his hand softly caressing her cheek and she leans into his touch. A contented sigh escaping her lips. Opening her eyes she looks into his and sees a complex swril of emotion and love, breaking the kiss, they exchange a soft smile and contentment suffering them.


She is still smiling as she rest her head on his chest and listens to the steady rhythm of his heartbeat as it slowly lulls her to sleep. Tonight she will dream of a life on a beautiful mandap where she is married to her friend, her love. Tomorrow she will wake up and do anything and everything necessary to make that dream become real.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SamBricka

Nice chappy dear..

Waiting for nxt chappy..

Plz update soon..



thank you. updated

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