Undiscovered feelings - Ashna/Ragna love story Epilogue updated pg 22 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_aditi

Awesome start dear. Pls continue 😃


tq dear... ill continue it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

A fantastic start ! Though it is all sorrowful ,it has created a lovely situation for 'true and sincere feelings' to be expressed ! Please do continue.


thank you... yeha sorrowful start but ending ill be happy happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Abi, nice start dear. Please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you girls for liking story. Here i go with next chapter...

CHAPTER 2

(i knew from here it would be filmy... but anything for ashna filmy or logic or unlogical.)

Leaning in, as if drown by some unseen force she kisses him, a gentle one on his lip which is meant to comfort and reassurance. Her lips are upon his sliding, caressing and exploring.

He is kissing her back, tentatively at first. They continue to kiss at pace gentle. Kiss filled with love and affection but devoid of the urgency of passion. She is only intermittently aware of whats happenning. One moment they are kissing fully clothed. The next moment their shirts are gone. And so it goes on until they are completely naked.




(ahem ahem gutter minds can be activated according to u and ur mood in ur head... ssshhh... no disturbance)

He is looking at her, her eyes for permission. She meets his, seeing the sorrow and grief but also a longing, a need. This moment is too important, too solemn to be tarnished by her girl ego. This moment is about him, what he needs.

He needs me, She thinks.

And in a moment of complete honesty she admits... and I need him. Seconds scretched to hours. They lied there intimately connected staring into eachothers eyes. Silence surrounding them.


The moment is so precious. Their lips meet her arms sliding over his smooth skin, one wrapping around his skin, other around his neck. Her fingers tangling in the hair at his nape, while her legs hook over his hips.

Time falls away as they continue their intimate dance. His hips cease their movement but they continue to kiss. His kisses sweet and sorrowful begin to taste salty. She realizes he is crying. He buries his face in the croock of her neck, his tears hot against her skin.

She pulls him close, their bodies still joined. She gently strokes his hair and places a tender kiss in his temple, her eyes with tears.


She came here wanting to help him, to take away his pain and heal him. She may have failed in that goal but she hasn't failed him. She has taken a portion of his sorrow upon her and given him a means to beat back the sorrow. She has given him the most precious, valuable gift she has... her heart and soul.

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Edited by abirami13987 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

Its been a week since she visited him. Since their time in his. She hasn't heard a word from him till now. Normally she would be worried, worried about their friendship, would it be messed up. Worrief thinking something foolish but strange. She knows he will come to her when he is ready. She is not sure how? but she knows he will come. Come to her. Suddenly she feels him, feels his presence as if he is near, near her. She doesn't bother to question this new found ability of sensing him and his presence. She looks up from her desk. Her eyes searching for him in her empire.


Almost instantly she sees him, their eyes meet. Even at this distance she can tell that the sorrows and pain in his eyes has lessened. She was very pride that fills her heart that she is respobsible for the change. This little change of his that matters her. Without any other thinking she gets up from her desk and navigates her way to him passing her employees.

He is wearing a suit with matching tie. His hair looks everything is so professional. She neared him, looks into his eyes and got lost there. The noise of the employees faded away for them. And all the remained is sound of their breathing and their heart beats. Their private world was shattered when someone bumps into them avidently. Stepping back from their privacy. She is disappointed by loss of control. So is he.


She begins leading him to her cabin. Once inside she closed the door and turns to him. She wants to talk to him. Wants to know how he is? How was his week been? Is he resumed to his work? Is he working for anything new, interesting etc... but as soon as she looks at him, her questions die on her lips.




And again she is lost in his gaze. It is like his soul is calling out to her. Looks like he is very desperate to reach her to connect with her. It's like an siren song for her. She wants to resist but she can't and she doesn't want to.


She felt this calling even in her youth from the same person standing in front of her. Which was unanswered. She knows the pain of unanswered calls which she doesn't want him to go through. Raghav nearef Kalpana as if he feel her soul, encircling his hands over her waist he pick her up and carries her to the table. They continue to look into each others eyes, neither of them able to give voice to their thoughts or feelings but both understanding exactly what the other is experiencing. It's a feeling beyond description, something beyond physical, beyond emotional. Whatever it is however it is, its growing and threatening to consume her. She welcomes it. These few days are bliss. From then they spend every free movement together talking, laughing and crying.She felt this calling even in her youth from the same person standing in front of her. Which was unanswered. She knows the pain of unanswered calls which she doesn't want him to go through. Raghav nearef Kalpana as if he feel her soul, encircling his hands over her waist he pick her up and carries her to the table. They continue to look into each others eyes, neither of them able to give voice to their thoughts or feelings but both understanding exactly what the other is experiencing. It's a feeling beyond description, something beyond physical, beyond emotional. Whatever it is however it is, its growing and threatening to consume her. She welcomes it. These few days are bliss. From then they spend every free movement together talking, laughing and crying.
Edited by abirami13987 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: farhana04

Hey Abi, nice start dear. Please continue.


thank you farahana
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice start
It so awesome
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. ...both part r superb. ...
Ragna feel eachother. ..they did not need to voice out...they understand eachother pain feelings. ..its so emotional. ..n heart tuch update. ...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb story dear
loved it
loved how they feel each other update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Beautiful parts Abi
Ragna feeling each other was so beautiful. Her affection for him so nice as she not think for herself.
Her urge to see him to be with him was increased I'm week and then there he was again in her embrace
Hope both always stay together
Update soon

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