Fate & Destiny (RagNa ss) note on pg 14

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

WOW ! What a satisfying update. Full of emotional scenes ! From cruel Kamala a greedy ,selfish Smiriti, to an honest ,real Human businessman and an ill-treated but a generous sweet Kalpi !!!! Superb writing ! Thanks and do continue soon.

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MadhuGupta

@MadhuGupta

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Superb update. I can't wait next update. Thank you

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Frozenfantasy

@Frozenfantasy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Kalpana...is so humble ..she sees to others needs first .

does all the work ..around the house to keep her mom happy .

Kamla...is a burden on planet earth 😡Who needs a satellite up her ass 😡😆

Mothers are giving and caring ..unlike kamla ..she treats Kalpi ..so badly

And her other daughter ..like a princess 😕Why?...

Raghav ...is a businessman ..he has everything money can buy ..

All he wants is love and ,,happiness

His parents have other plans for him ..they want him to get

married to sinthi ..their friends daughter ..Sammy is a good

friend of Raghav's .

Raghav ..likes Kalpi's selfless nature ..and was mesmerised

by her smile ..why is gauri so selfish .?..😕.

This rana ..is a rodent ..😡..harassing.kalpi..like that

Gosh!..kamla ..is so sickening ..she doesn't believe her own daughter😲

And now Raghav ..agrees to marry ..sinthi to please his parents 😕

Who's that pig ..that raped Kalpi .so brutally?.😡.is it rana?

Raghav .took Kalpi to the hospital . He didn't even know who she was . ...😭..

But later ,.he gets to see her face ..and was shocked ...that it was the same

girl ..he had a urge to see everyday ..

Such a heartfelt ..update my friend ..but was

Brilliant as always ..

Thank you ..

Edited by Vsapras - 9 years ago

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abxetz

@abxetz

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Ye kammo bear again 😡 kameeni kameeni ek number ki kameeni hai vo chudail 😡 ek a wrath hoke aisai bath karthe hai agree ye chodo ki kalpi uski bet I hai phir bi insaniyath nam ki cheez hai usai 😡 cheap women.poor soul or ye vittalnamuna tho kammo sai darthe honge 😡 poor ragna 😭 rags feel kuch kuch for kalpi 😳 hayeee.ab agay kya hoga? Rags loves kalpis good heart that's filled with innocents 😳 your just superb dear.apki hat story mai ek unknown sa pain mehzooz hothi hai muje I don't know why.but I like or stories 😊 awesome update farhan dear. ⭐️

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Antara

@rachufan

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Sorry di i m late busy 😭
awesome hearttouching update hats off to u di
What an update ur each word connect with heart
First in nezt update i will sure kill koyale ki khaan kamala
Koyala heart kamala my angel is facing so much because of her i blood is boiling
raghav's parents bhi kalpi ke parents jaise hi hai cant see what their son want but no unhe to bas
apni society class status se matlab all are selfish expect three golden heart raghav kalpi sammy
raghav feel connected with kalpi he want a girl who loves him unconditionly dont worry bhai faradi ne aapki wizh puri kar di hai
omg most painful part kalpi's rape kamala is equal reponsible for this she told her but that daayan lady god will sure punish her for her deeds
well done eagerly waiting for next part

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aahana

@aahana123

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

omg lovely update
raghav fall4 kalpi at first side
who rape kalpi what will raghav do
plz update soon
cantbwait

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arya

@aryagr

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Nice update. Plz update soon.

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

amazing concept frahana

It was sad to see kalpi gng thru pain n wat a disgusting fly she have...but still poor girl love her fly dearly

Hmmm so rags is already attracted to kalpi n he always w8 d same place to get a glance of her was lovely

Both rags parents r also selfish n forcing him to get married to girl of der choice n poor him has to agree for his mother ...n dat sinthi is cheapo

Omg kalpi was brutally raped...guess it must b rana😡

Hope to see kalpi punish dat monster wit help n support of rags n dey both get love n care dey deserved frm each other

Eager to read nxt part ...cont soon

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Beautiful start dear.waiting for next update.

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

The entire chapter was very emotional 😭 😭
RagNa are facing their own problems in there home but they have a lot in common.
Both of them are kind hearted people and both craved for someone to call their own
To love, care and always be there for them...
My heart breaks for Kalpi 😭
Kamla is a freaking 🤬 witch
I hope she rot in hell 😡
Raghav is already thinking about Kalpi and can't stop :)
Oh no! Raghav is engaged but it's just that no wedding As yet ;)
Raghav taking Kalpi to the hospital is amazing
Poor Kalpi how much she has to suffer
Finally Raghav saw Kalpi face.
I can't wait to know what will happen next
Superb update. I love it although I cried a lot ;)

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