Fate & Destiny (RagNa ss) note on pg 14

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Hello everyone! Here I am again with a new story. I just got a beautiful concept and
can't keep it inside. So here it is and let me know if I should proceed. I didn't
decide the name of the story yet. So if you have any suggestions please let me
know.


Prologue

It was Raghav's engagement with one of his father Vikram's
friend's daughter Sinthi. Both of their parents were very happy that after four
long years finally Raghav agreed to marry Sinthi. Both families were very
popular in the city that's why this news spread in the whole city through the
newspaper and television. The whole city was eagerly waiting to see the live
telecast of their engagement. But there was only one person who was not happy
and sitting on the bed lowering his head in his room. "What happened Raghav?"
Raghav's only friend Sammy said walking toward him, "Seems like you are not
happy with this engagement?" Hearing him Raghav raised his head and smiled
softly. "It is not like that Sammy," Raghav said getting off from the bed. He
walked toward the window and stood near it. He continued, "Shadi to kana padega
e na. How long I will keep denying my parents." Sammy walked toward Raghav and
said putting his hand on Raghav's shoulder, "Raghav, I know you don't love
Sinthi and you both are totally opposite to each other. But trust me after marriage
everything will be fine. Her love will change you totally. As time will pass
you will also fall for her." In the meantime Gauri entered into the room and
seeing Raghav was not getting ready for the engagement she was upset and said, "Raghav,
how come you are not ready yet? You know na we have to leave this place around
6 pm." She looked at Sammy and said, "Sammy, please help Raghav to get ready." Gauri
didn't let Raghav say anything and left the place. Sammy took the sherwani
laying on the bed and told Raghav to wear it.


Singhania family reached the venu. The venu was well
decorated. There were thousands of people were invited. Minister and
politicians were also invited. The functions were going on full pleasure. After
half an hour Sinthi was brought downstairs. She was looking so gorgeous and
beautiful with a navy blue and silver designer lahenga with diamond jewelry. People
were looking at her with in awe. She came down and walked toward Ragahv and
stood beside him. "Raghav you are looking so handsome with this cream and
golden sherwani," Sinthi said with smile. "Thank you!" Raghav said. "Raghav,
how come you didn't compliment me?" Sinthi complained. "I know I am looking so
beautiful but I want to hear it from you," Sinthi said proudly looking at
Raghav with smile. Raghav looked at her and said with smile, "Yah, you are
looking good." Hearing him Sinthi complained again, "Only good." No problem Raghav, after marriage I will
make you fall for me so crazily and you won't be able to stay without me for a
second
, Sinthi said in her mind.


After exchanging their rings all the couples were called to
the dance floor. Though Raghav was denying going to the dance floor but he had
to go because Sinthi was insisting him. She pulled Raghav to the dance floor by
his hand and put her hands around his neck. She looked directly toward his eyes
and said excited, "Raghav, I am so happy. I still can't believe that finally I
am able to engage the most handsome man in the whole world and we are getting married
soon." While they were dancing as much as Raghav tried to make distance in
between as Sinthi came closer. Raghav never allowed her to come close to him. Now
she is his fiance and she didn't want to leave this chance to come close to
Raghav. After their dance Raghav excused himself and went downstairs to the
bar. After having a soft drink he stayed two more long hours avoiding all the
crowded areas at the ceremony. Then he went to his mom and lied, "Mom, I have
to attend some important calls, so I'll have to go now." Saying so he left
without any further interfere.


Raghav got into the car and told the driver to drive home,
fixing himself in the back seat. While driving, the car suddenly stopped,
jolting forward. "What happened, why did you stop the car," Raghav asked. "Sir,
there is a van stopped in front of us," The driver said. They were waiting for
a while to move the van. After few seconds they noticed that something fell
from the van to the ground. It was raining heavily so it was hard to see what
it was. Another few seconds later the van left from there. When the van left
the driver figured out that it was a human body. Seeing this, his eyes widened.
"Sir, there is a body on the ground," The driver said scared. "Human body?"
Raghav asked shocked. "Yes sir, someone threw the body from the van," The
driver said. "Lets go and see," saying so Raghav was about to get off from the
car but stopped when the driver said, "Sir seems like it was a rape case. After
rape they threw this girl on the ground." The driver continued, "Sir, let's go
home. We shouldn't be involved with this case." Hearing him Raghav got angry
and said, "If you want to leave then you can leave but I will not," Saying so
Raghav got off from the car. The driver also followed Raghav realizing he might
lose the job. They saw a young girl laying senseless with torn salwar suit on
the ground. Raghav sat on his knees beside the girl. He tried to check her
pulse to see if she is alive. "She is alive," Raghav mumbled relieved. He
looked at her marks on her face and neck. Seeing her state he was sure that the
girl was raped brutally. Somehow he felt bad for this girl in his heart. "Bustard,"
The only sound came out from his mouth.


CS below





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Character Scratch

Raghav Singhania: 30 years old. He is one of the most successful businessman. He is the only son of the politician Vikram Singhania. He is totally opposite of his parents. He is very quiet, honest, kind, bighearted, helpful.

Kalpana Jadav:19 years old. Poor. She has a very harsh life. Very simple. She is very sweet, loving, caring, kind, bighearted.

Sinthi Khanna: 28 years old. The most popular fasion designer. Ragahv's fiance.


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Don't tell kalpi is raped awww
Update soon
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Awesome concept. .intresting. .can't wait 4 next update. ..
Farah kaya y kalpi n raghav ke bich itana age difference. .
Kalpi ki age 1 or 2 year bada do ya raghav ko 30 age bana do. .
Plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept...

dear, plez update "hated love"..waiting

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😛 😊 new story fara di aap pakka mujhe begger banaogi
Kabhi cursed ke gate par -Bhagwaa.ke naam par ek update de re faradi
u will open ur gate aur muskareke kahogi sweetheart soon now i m buay
When hated love and now this one apna future pakka hai
bhagwaan ke naam par ek update de de re faradi
hehehe now come to the point
unique concept start soon cant wait please

Kehte hai sabhi ki farana hai Amazing Writer
jiju ko nahi hai pata jiju se na kehna 😆
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My humble request continue this story .I like concept.
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Wow dear it's lovely story intresting. ...plz pm me when ever u update it's my humble request dear
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nice start.. Plz update chappies soon Faru di..

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